Pre-Qin Mythology: Starting from the River God

This IP address, this subject matter, I already know who is a familiar old friend.

Is the protagonist a time traveler or an indigenous person? Does he know the history?

Discovered too early, too little and not enough to see

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Chu State annexes Kyushu? ? ? ? Where does he have the nerve to solo Qin Shihuang? He is just a pony in reality.

The setting is great. I would like to give you a small suggestion: don't make official documents half-written or half-written, which is inconsistent with the rules and creates drama. Either speak purely in classical Chinese, or speak in plain language. If you are not familiar with classical Chinese official documents, you can use AI to assist. It is really difficult to write half-literary and half-white documents.

It had been a hundred and two years since Chu had been at the hegemony, but Quan Ming finally discovered that he had deep emotions and six desires that were difficult to suppress, so he could only reincarnate to wash away his desires. He had made many arrangements the day before, and now he has entered the reincarnation of heaven. There was a family in the Song Dynasty that was giving birth. The male owner heard a cry outside the door. Po Wen walked out holding a baby. It was a boy. His father named him Mo Zhai. Time flies, and the sun and the moon fly Mo Zhai reached a certain age. On this day, his father was... Everyone can continue to write and add 😁

Familiar taste. Is this a long story by the author?

I remember there was a book about He Bo. What was it called?

Is there a group? Damn, is there a group? Damn, is there a group? Big, say important things three times!

It's well written, but why isn't it popular?

Brother, are you familiar with this pre-Qin period?

In fact, if you don't read it carefully, it's a bit messy. There are conflicts in logic But that can only be regarded as a flaw, and overall it can be rated as a five-star review. The protagonist's plan is indeed powerful, but the later writing is a bit confusing For example, to put it bluntly, gods are derived from humans, including gods, gods, etc., All derived from humans. In other words, the human king and the human army are very valuable, and the human territory is also very important The question arises at this time. Since the corpse can be refined and turned into elite soldiers, isn't it equivalent to being able to generate a lot more combat power out of thin air? After the kings of other countries have discussed it with the great god, is it okay to just bite the bullet? For another example, if the protagonist can throw away other people's corpses to make plans, can other countries also dig up corpses to make plans? For another example, your "Lianshan", "Zhouyi", "Gui Zang" and so on, it means that under this system, you can practice the exercises of another system, right? In this case, if the skills are worn out, wouldn't it mean that the gods in one's own country are directly strengthened? Don't talk about sectarian opinions. If you can win battles, expand territories, and gain mortal populations, that's money. It's not something you can't do at any cost. These are minor issues that I will examine in detail. The main reason is that the uniqueness of the protagonist is not strong. After all, the main focus is on a strategy.

The author can sell the outline to writers and hatch the unfinished mythical world.

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Everyone else in the comment section is just a monster, so if you are picky, just write your own book. Stop being so picky. I felt that this book was well written. I read it in one sitting and it was very satisfying.

Damn it, keep the Immortal Gu in your body. 👍👍👍👍👍

What are you writing? Do you understand it?

This kind of writing is easy for eunuchs to read. You'd better be a female author.