Bring Fire to the Sun

Like the title↑ This book was recommended by a group of friends. It seemed a bit difficult at first because of too many settings, but unexpectedly I was able to catch up with the radio wave. I was so happy that I ordered it all and caught up with the latest chapter in one go. 😭 I feel so miserable that I didn't have to read it aaa I feel like I have to save a whole weird story (big chapter) to read in the future. It's hard to imagine that I can only read two chapters a day. How uncomfortable {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"}{"TopicId":"586286831142961152","TopicName":"Book Recommendation in Shuhuang"}

After reading seven chapters, I have a quick question: Is the author over 40 years old? It's quite different from the current way of writing online articles.

Let me tell you the truth, doesn't the author feel that his dialogue is full of words on the screen, which sounds like chanting sutras?

The writing method of line drawing is a plus for this kind of subject matter. Dream back to the insect house

The writing style is too bad, it feels like a waste of a good story. Not to mention catering to the readers' taste, it must at least be able to make people get involved, right? This book now feels like a black-and-white silent film from the last century, with almost no audio-visual language. After reading it for a while, I feel a little aesthetic fatigue The author needs to think of a solution.

What a unique style, every sentence is close to a line drawing, and the characters' expressions and tone leave a lot of room for imagination. For example, the protagonist's somewhat lazy tone is very cute when combined with imagination. However, this kind of book is suitable for reading slowly. You have to piece together the world view and noun semantics by yourself, and it will look dull after just one glance.

It can't be Xiao Chunan like the author, right?

Good guy, if I hadn't been reminded that the light of the great god was about to go out, I wouldn't have known that I still had chapters that I hadn't subscribed to. . When I opened it, I saw that a new book had been opened quietly and a paid chapter had been updated! Are you so reckless, Jincai-san, at least post a notice on Chongwu or Jiuwanli 🙂 You are not very friendly to those book friends who have only seen Chongwu, and I guess most of them won't be able to get in. .

I don't know what the main character's purpose is, what he's for, nothing seems to matter, everything is covered up, and I don't understand what kind of story the author wants to write, but I still have an inexplicable feeling. . .

Let me talk about my personal thoughts. There are no logical problems that I can't tolerate so far, but the amount of information and various settings of the author really throw away too much. There are different cities, regions, power systems, and two inexplicable symbols in front of it, and there is no explanation. Now that I am reading Chapter 13, Q, Q1, Q2, X1, and X2 skills suddenly appeared. Although this large number of settings is not objectionable, it is sometimes a bit difficult to understand and annoying. I suggest the author modify it {"NickName":"jgjjinguijiao","UserId":317112812}

Everything else is pretty good, except that the ups and downs of the plot are too flat. And when the main plot of the protagonist has not been shown, the external hooks are average, the world view is expanded a little, and the big treasures that affect the world structure are put in. To be honest, I don't feel much expectation.

I have read 4 chapters and found Teacher Wang directly after reading it. You really need to read this book, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to read, because it is different from many other things. It is not about telling stories. It depends on the dialogue and subsequent things, which are related before and after. This is different from the routine of chasing books.

I see negative reviews from everyone who goes to school!

The story is okay, but there are a lot of dialogues. Every time I see a long section of dialogue, I feel like "Why is this novel full of words?"

I am an old reader who finished reading Bug House during the serialization period I didn't read the second book Ninety Thousand Miles because I wasn't interested in the subject matter I liked the subject matter of this book a little bit more and started reading it Personally, I feel that Bug House gave me the best impression The writing is also the author's best It's long Smooth and natural, with its own style But I don't know if the results on Jiuwanli are not as good as expected (? In this book, it seems that the author has studied some so-called technical writing methods But the use of these things is a bit inconsistent with his own creative habits It doesn't feel natural to read There seems to be a feeling that returning to the comfort zone of creation and adding some so-called "currently popular writing techniques" will definitely improve the results emmm I don't know how the background data of this book compares with Bug House and Bug House in the same period. How are the differences on Nine Thousand Miles In short, it's just the beginning. I wish the more I write, the smoother I will find my own style and my early enlightenment (ps: purely personal opinion. If you leave it in the comment area, it will affect the data. Feel free to delete. I will continue to subscribe and support.

The bug house is really nice, but there are too few of them.

I suggest that anyone who can't learn how to write invincible articles can read the author's book (I'm not saying that the author's style is easy to learn).

When I discovered this book, there were 86 chapters, which could completely tell the story of the factory. Now if I follow the story of the bug from the beginning, I find that the pace is very slow, mainly because the beginning is all about explaining the prerequisites, and the chapters that I read in one or two days may still be just one thing from beginning to end. The pace is so slow. This book is not suitable for reading. I need to recuperate. I just hope I don't die of recuperation.

It's well written, but you have to read it unit by unit. The plot of "Yun Zhong" can be read in one go. Although it is very bland, it is not bad.

I watched it as Hinata taking fire. I thought it was a Naruto fan. After reading the introduction, I felt something was wrong. Naibei🙂🙂🙂

Not bad, but there are some problems with the wording and sentence construction. Many of them are inexplicable sentence fragments.

Because I'm from the Bug House and I gave you 17 monthly passes before you even read it. Come on.

You can't do everything in a plain style.... It gives me the feeling of a straight line.

I helped you promote it on Qidian Tieba, I hope it will be effective 🙂

Emperor: "I am not a god, only a human being"

As for his novel, it is not a supernatural novel. Nowadays, thrillers are becoming more and more difficult to read. It is becoming more and more difficult to find books that are good-looking and scary. In the past, supernatural novels were both thrilling and scary. Now they are either pretentious or upgraded to fantasy.

Damn it, it would be great if those authors I like to read could rewrite their novels

The book is good, and the writing is very interesting. It is different from those current routines that focus on stacking various twists and turns in the plot It would be nice to have more updates, but the updates are too slow.

It turned out to be the Bug House. I found that as long as I can read the book now, the author is an acquaintance.

This Chen Xiaoxi is like a little pet. I hope there will be more plots later.