Shadow World Visitor

It's a great book, although it's a little bit naughty from time to time, but it's generally very good.

High quality but not popular 😥

Surprisingly, it was well written. The only thing that made me think there was a loophole was at the beginning. The two people asked the protagonist to sign a contract, and Zhao came to the rescue. Why didn't the two of them put the contract directly into the individual space?

I finished reading the Blood Curse part of your last book. Your conception of time, blood curse, and the world is so great. Why was that book removed from the shelves?

What's wrong? What's wrong? Is it because you are in love? Why does the author include a fat little supporting character in every book? Why don't you dare to write female characters? Don't you dare to come to a good sister? Are you afraid that your girlfriend will misunderstand you?

Author, is there any documentation for the last Hogwarts book? I really want to read it. I want to read it even if it's not finished yet.

It's a pity that I couldn't read the whole book.

I really like the author, no matter the previous book or this one. The fandom in the previous book is not limited to the plot, but constantly solves the mysteries, which always makes me feel refreshed. The scene about the Fountain of Good Luck completes the ritual and solves the transformation of magical animals. I am really happy to watch it, and the fighting is also Very good, the second use of magic power, the scene where the birds in the sky turn into life-killing curses and fall like heavy rain is really cool in my mind🥰🥰🥰. Killing Rai and letting the archmage break the defense is also good😠😠😠, but it's a pity that there is no follow-up. This book still feels familiar to me. I still love eating steak and drinking milk, and I am still a little fat guy, but the flavor is different. I came out of the Black Thorn Labyrinth with all the equipment. I look forward to shining in Isilia🥰🥰🥰, come on, author, I will always support you

The writing style is comfortable and the characters are vivid. The first dungeon is a bit interesting so far, and I hope that the subsequent dungeons will be more interesting and novel. . It looks good so far

The protagonist is dark and self-interested, and the writing and themes are pretty good.

The serious ups and downs are not a running account

Detective sounds nice at first, but it is a high-risk illegal profession in China. Especially private detectives, but do they look like detectives on the surface? Yes, yes, you can choose to become a lawyer. A lawyer is much more legal and legitimate. If you are not satisfied, you can join the system and become a criminal investigation policeman. You asked me how I knew it, and I suddenly thought of using AI to search~

Do you mean to say that the protagonist's super power, apart from earning him 1 million in the beginning, has barely played any role in improving his strength up to now? Bro, your book is too slow to gain popularity.

The last book was really good, but now I can no longer find meal replacements. It is rare to see the kind of research that is for research rather than purpose. Especially the feeling of getting rid of the original plot, and you are really your own protagonist.

It's getting more and more uncomfortable to watch. It requires rituals to connect to the world. Most ordinary people go there by accident. The protagonist is different. He has a golden finger. It's okay to go to other worlds to cause trouble. He kills for no reason in this world. Facing the police who helped him, he died without any regrets. He was a fat man with no threat. He was resurrected and kept killing people as consumables. He was so indifferent that he would kill him for half a month if he didn't obey. When facing the enemies of the government, he killed and trained them into rare objects. The same goes for the subsequent enemies. The first thing he thought about was to kill and train his body into rare objects. Without a companion, the whole world was just consumables and enemies to him. Even if the little fat man relented, he still killed him and used him as consumables. It was obvious that he was still useful. He had fought side by side with him.

Is there a readership beyond Miracle?

If you want this kind of taste and a very research-minded protagonist, don't be a virgin.

Will the author consider writing HP fanfics in the future? I loved the last one so much.

Damn it, why did the previous book disappear and suddenly I found a new book?

At first I thought it was a resurgence of the traditional urban aura, but later I discovered that the world view was quite complete, with new ideas and careful design, and it turned out to be a dark genre. The protagonist was not a good guy, and the supporting characters also died at will. Overall, it's pretty good to watch. However, the protagonist in the first dozen chapters is a bit passive due to lack of ability, and Golden Finger is currently too weak. However, in the latest chapter, there are some tricks to improve it.

The last book was well written, but the description of blood and gore was too detailed 😢

The flowing water Dawn, the iron-clad Su Beixun

After reading the beginning, you can tell that Goldfinger is a random information that has nothing to do with the plot. It can be seen that it is a tool for the author to give specific information to the protagonist, and then there is suspense. It is well done in this aspect, but it is a pity that the supernatural elements are too slow to unfold. Even a slow game like Lord of Mysteries cannot be so slow, because the author mainly writes puzzles... Most readers can't even see the shadow of the supernatural, and they ran away in the first three chapters.

I finished reading the 70 chapters I saved in one go, and I feel like I still have some unfinished ideas 🙂

What books are you reading? Can anyone exchange book lists together? 🙂🙂

The setting is okay, but the character of the protagonist is not likable. The combination in the latest chapter looks like Xiba Cat

The author's previous HP fanfic was also very well written, but it was taken down. I hope this book can be finished.

It looks good. I hope the author's writing skills will continue to improve and he will have the demeanor of the Great Love Immortal 😏 I suggest that the author write the title of the previous book together in the introduction. If you hadn't read the comment area and just looked at the introduction and title, you would have almost missed it.

Yes, I like the plot control and protagonist design so far. I hope the author can continue writing it.

I kind of want to watch it, but it seems like my grades aren't good and I'm afraid of eunuchs.