Body of Atonement

The author's writing style is still very solid and that of a veteran author, but the reviews are very divisive. The following are all personal opinions The reason why the comment area expresses the division is because the protagonist's character shows the division. In the main world, the protagonist always chooses to construct a special maggot image in scenes of solving problems. In the scene, he always actively behaves like a maggot, not even to the extent of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but to the point of moaning for no reason, which is not necessary. This is the case several times when he presented something to the city guard. Maybe he wanted to play the protagonist in Doomsday novels who doesn't care about face and only cares about actual interests, but he used too much force. Then the protagonist in the different world dungeon strikes hard and shows his ruthless nature, although the intended audience of this book is not a moral gentleman. But readers who can accept this ruthless style will most likely not want to see the protagonist acting like a maggot in the main world. Those who can accept the protagonist pretending to be a maggot and eating a tiger may not be able to accept the protagonist's ruthless attack from another world. People who can accept the protagonist's ruthless attacks may not be able to accept the protagonist's main world playing maggots and eating tigers. The charm of this protagonist is difficult to get up and down, and it's stuck.

I really can't bear the end of a benchmark for the apocalyptic wasteland flow. "Infected Body" really shocked me for a long time... Hei Da, come on, I hope to see the glory of the apocalyptic flow again! 😭

I used to like your book Infectious Body, but unfortunately I ran into Jingwang

In the finale, I was convinced that the protagonist of Wasteland had to eat other people's brains in order to level up.

The stepmother asked the guards to kill the protagonist. The protagonist used all the family property to bribe the sheriff in exchange for a chance to survive. After surviving, he drove the stepmother and the guards to the manor where the property was owned? Why, brother, people are going to kill you. Why don't you silence them but drive them away when you know you are back from the dead? ? ? I really can't understand it

It's a pity for Lao Hei. The infected body with peak creative power encountered a bad environment. Nowadays, blood cross types that are purely based on curiosity and selling sensory stimulation can appear openly on self-media platforms, and Lao Hei's creative power is no longer what it was back then.

It's the first one or two chapters that catch people's attention, but there are too many unimportant details and there are too many paragraphs, which makes it look dizzying and unable to grasp the key points Old authors shouldn't, have they declined after not writing for several years?

It's like being sick. You just solve a crisis and feel like you have less troubles. You look for things to do everywhere. When you become a transcendent, you immediately prepare for the next stage. It's like someone is chasing you.

😥As the title...

The protagonist is just like Ruozhi, he keeps pretending to be sweet, I almost vomited when I saw it

After watching Black Age, I felt that the supporting character Huang He was too disgusting. You have to be smart when transmitting. As a result, the male and female protagonists were transported to different time and space, and the male protagonist struggled in the new world. The heroine was slowly transformed into a beetle by radiation in another world. From now on, I feel like the author is in a state of ecstasy, as if he was writing somewhere in a dream.

It can only be said that Xihuan is still half-dead as ever. The writing style of the old writer is very steady and ancient, and the rhythm is a bit too fast. The main problem seems to be that the introduction of the extraordinary system is too slow and there are not enough hooks to catch people. The idea of ​​decryption and promotion is okay, but the first promotion experience is very poor. There is no correlation between the answer and the decryption. The function of the answer obtained in advance is to say it and it is over. The process is quite boring.

The "fight of wits" at the beginning is really too sweet 🙂

The rendering ability of the writing is very strong, covering the logical flaws and settings full of flaws. 😅 It also gives charm to the plain plot, making it attractive to watch. But there are more and more flaws, and the logic of the supporting characters has not been established. It feels like a waste of writing. If it had been written by a novice and the writing style matched the same plot, it would have been criticized a long time ago. It is a pity.

They're all here for the infected. It's a pity.

I came here from Dian Niang's official account. Unexpectedly, it was the author of the book Host who came to replenish my ticket. I look forward to the release of the new book

Well written, worthy of being an experienced author

The remnants of the old era🙂

The gold coins in the book have almost become the starting currency. The money that ordinary people spend to buy bread is not Zimbabwean currency, but it is enough.

There is a huge loophole, and the protagonist's father leaves a legacy through various methods. In the end, he died, and his stepmother later killed his son. There was no backup plan in this regard. This is too unreasonable.

I don't know when another urban fairy tale will be released. I read it when I was in junior high school.

It's guaranteed to be on the shelves!

Well written. The old author is just not the same 😰

The author writes quickly, ten pictures a day🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

There are strategies, force, blood, giving money to save lives, and a sense of youth mixed together, what a feeling. . . A bit pretentious and a bit confusing Not very good to read After reading all the books, I felt cheated This book,,, can't even be deceived, and I can't stand the first part of it. .

This is an old author, maybe his expectations are too high? It almost looks funny

One chapter a day? That's how to maintain health 🙂

I read that the protagonist killed alien individuals with racial hatred based on the records in his notebook when they first met, and the scene clearly stated that the aliens were civilized, not wild ethnic groups such as Zerg. Only by setting the alien race as the enemy of mankind can the protagonist's behavior be justified. However, this also leads to two conjectures. One is that the alien ethnic groups have enmity with humans, but each ethnic group is composed of individuals. As long as the individuals themselves have no enmity, they can live in peace. If the protagonist later encounters a situation where humans and aliens coexist peacefully, won't his heart be unstable and everything will suddenly break out? The second is that after all, the source of information about the feud is the notes, and the memory during his lifetime does not have this knowledge. If the two tribes seek peace now. Who is the protagonist who kills people just based on the records in his notes? Obviously it only needs a slight modification to write that after the protagonist is discovered, the aliens will directly kill him and then fight back. There will be no hidden dangers in the future, whether there is hatred or peace.

I fucking hate foreigner names.

I'm really at a loss, I can't even write without laughing. These days, it's so difficult to write about the bloody and horrific apocalypse. Alas