The Fantasy Literary Giant of 1860

After the protagonist came into contact with the official paranormal organization, he knew the value of the phantom book, but he was completely unaware of his own value. Not even realizing the value. In the extraordinary world, you have the ability to create extraordinary things, but you don't use them. Moreover, the speed of publishing the book was too slow, and he even sent the original manuscript that he could turn into a fantasy book to the editorial department. A bit of a left- and right-brain battle. . . Another thing is the description between the content of the book and the switching of characters. When listening to the book, I accidentally forgot where the plot was? Lionel, the protagonist of Sorel, handles this aspect very interestingly. He first introduces the main content of the book, and then assists in editing the excerpts in other plots. It is very smooth to listen to. . The author can learn from it. The story develops later. In addition, I would like to complain that the protagonist is so short of money and has to finish the script. He really has no sense of urgency in life. . . Let me ask the author. Can I write about Cthulhu? I think the protagonist needs this. Hey hey hey hey`(*∩_∩*)′

No, after receiving the first royalties, all the money was used to pay rent, leaving me with no money to eat and having to work as a laborer at the dock? Wouldn't it be okay to borrow money from the editor or pay part of the rent first? As long as you let the landlord confirm that you have money, you will continue to have money in the future. Can't you ask him to give you a few more days of grace?

Have you ever been a literary giant? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

There is a question, since the original manuscript he wrote will become a phantom manuscript, why didn't Lily remind him to keep the original manuscript? And why didn't the protagonist leave the original manuscript and write another one? Although more paper is used this way, there is no need to spend gold coins to buy original manuscripts.

A boring book, useless. For me, there is no poisonous point, but a place that is considered poisonous. I borrowed money from a loan shark to give my parents a good funeral, and then I didn't know how long it was overdue. They came to the door and were ready to beat them. Seriously, if I lend money to the protagonist to organize a funeral for his parents and something like this happens, I will dig out the protagonist's parents from their graves and put them where the protagonist lives, then write the process on a piece of cloth, and write another sentence: You don't have to pay compensation for the beating, and you don't have to pay back the money. Let's hold your parents' funeral again! This novel has no other bad points. I can only say that it is boring and tasteless.

At first I thought it was the Riddler organization, but halfway through I realized it was pure retardation.

Did you understand the Three-Body Problem at that time?

In Chapter 125, the protagonist only wrote 3 novels and 1 poem, and then became famous? ? ? Just like other time-travelers wrote a quiet night poem and then became a poetry fairy. Although it's not that exaggerated, author, are you sure that even if you don't write it down, readers will write it and run away.

The second volume is too obsessed with the personal issue of theaters not accepting manuscripts from novelists, which seems very deliberate and ignorant. In fact, this issue has been explained in detail in the work "The Children I Recommend". The reason why ordinary novel writers cannot become playwrights is because, whether it is a drama, movie or game, it is first a technical problem and then an artistic problem. If you want to become a playwright or planner, you first need to understand certain techniques. If you don't understand this technology, what you write is just like a castle in the air with any realizability. The author often writes about weakness and ignorance, and arrogance is the one that calls out the author for being both ignorant and arrogant. You said you could just write it once and forget about it. Since I spent so much money, I see you writing it so many times. I really can't bear it if I don't come out and complain.

I have no motivation to read after about 50 chapters. Let me comment on this book. It's useless. The overall content is too slow or in a mess, and the author's writing style is relatively average, so he cannot cover up this shortcoming well, which makes the overall reading very bland and boring, and the overall pace is too slow. The world view and setting in Chapter 50 are basically not developed, but only a preliminary explanation. There is also the phantom book system. The protagonist has taken the phantom book and it has no effect at all. It should be said that after reading 50 chapters, the phantom book system has not shown any effect at all. Except for the slight expression of destiny, I can't feel that the phantom book has any use. As for the Fantasy Book system, it can be seen that the setting that incorporates the Fantasy Book of Enlightenment is quite good. It would be a little more fun to melt the money and make it easier to write in daily life. In fact, I personally like the theme of fantasy books. I started with the anime Danterian Bookshelf. Later, I watched "Mysterious Dominator" at the same time as "The Eunuch" at Qidian. I forgot what it was. After that, NetEase's "Fantasy Book of Enlightenment" opened the server and players played it until it closed the server. Finally, I can only say come on, I hope you will speed up the pace in the future, and quickly expand the system of the fantasy book. At least let the protagonist start the fantasy book system first, and then describe other branch content and then drive the plot through the protagonist. Currently, there is no main line at all. Although it can be seen that there are many things I want to write about, such as orcs, the gang's fantasy book, and even the director, but it is too messy. Judging from your current writing skills, it seems that you can't control it.

It's a pity that the subject matter is okay, but the writing and arrangement are terrible. It's obviously a text, but most of the content is a fantasy battle in the stereotyped style of a light novel, and it's written too piecemeal.

Classic illusion, so classic

Sorry, I just saw it as Fantasy Galore😭

It is a complete waste to spend a lot of space to write about the idiot Dawn's report to the rich second generation. First, it has nothing to do with the main plot of the fantasy book. Second, this bloody plot is really boring. Third, the protagonist is basically invisible in the process. It should be noted that the protagonist is not the owner of the newspaper, but just a writer who contributes articles. No matter how he operates to drive traffic to the newspaper, it is not interesting to read.

The writing is pretty good, but the power of the phantom book is not used at all. It is enough to make the text more enjoyable. Adding a phantom book is a bit redundant.

As a copy of the text, at least the name and introduction look similar, but there are not many relevant parts about what is going on... 😥 I started writing a little bit after half a day.

So far, apart from Soviet jokes, I have written about a million pounds. When I watched the detective and the previous scam, I thought I was going to write about Sherlock Holmes or Poirot.

So far, I have seen that the book is a good book before it is put on the shelves, and the writing is smooth. The plot of making a fortune by copying Soviet jokes in the beginning is interesting, and the plot of the million pounds later is also good. Let's talk about the poisonous point first. In chapters 30-32, the protagonist, the heroine, and the heroine went to catch two people from a small gang. The heroine looked down on the villain the whole time. It was written like a comedy and controlled the two villains. Then in Chapter 32, the big one comes. The villain's props are special props. He kills and controls the three protagonists. The heroine feels like a puppet and cannot resist. Then the villain controlled the heroine to untie himself, "circled around the unable to move heroine", "rough fingers passed through the heroine's silky hair", "like appreciating a work of art that was about to be completely controlled by him", all the original descriptions above. Then he relied on the specialness of the male protagonist's alien soul to kill him. There is also a big one at the back, which tells about the life of the heroine. She was a demi-human but was adopted by a noble. Then she had a passionate and intimate relationship with a man. Finally, she revealed her demi-human identity to the man and scared him away. Please figure out what they did in the meantime. The disadvantage is that the writing is too clumsy, and I like to write about events that have nothing to do with the main plot. This incident is just digging a hole, and I won't give you an explanation. The combat power system is vague, and the world view is also vague. There are gods and seven-source gods, but I just mention it and then pass it on. I tell you, but I only tell half of it, and I will tell you the other half later, which will scare you to death. Anyway, I felt that reading this book was very urgent and tedious, because the author likes to write some side plots and settings here and there, but he only talks about half of it and then writes about other things, which makes it very difficult to read. For example, in more than 60 chapters, it is said that writing fantasy manuscripts consumes the writer's experience and will cause him to become a monster. Then in more than 80 chapters, the protagonist writes two fantasy manuscripts in a row. The heroine thought that he had turned into a monster, so she came to him and told him the subsequent settings. A small incident in the early stage said that those who do not believe in gods will be affected by the tide of nothingness. Why? The reason? No explanation, just passed by. In the early stage of the theater explosion, the Blue Blood Gang incident, and even the million-pound imitation incident, it was said that the mastermind behind it was the Church of Immaculate Dawn, but the nm author did not write a positive plot about this B church. Of the three related people, two were killed by the stupid plot, and one was directly said to be dead. In the end, the mastermind mentioned in dozens of chapters, what did they do? Who is the person, is it really the mastermind behind the scenes? I didn't write a word, just passed it by. It's just disgusting. I wrote about a demi-human liberation organization and wrote more than ten chapters. It was useless. It just depicted the demi-humans in a desperate situation, and then disappeared directly after the incident. I don't know what the relationship with the protagonist was. The later part is even more outrageous. It is about a banquet where the chef discovers that the meat is a human being and is silenced. Then it returns directly to the main plot. I don't know when this incident will be used later. Write an evaluation of the protagonist's book by a duke's daughter who is 80% of the harem, write about her opinions and experiences, but when will she meet the protagonist? Impossible within chapter 75. Writing the Protagonist is the first fantasy book in a hundred years. It was about to be written by a female author from another country who had written a fantasy book. Then she was unfortunately notified that the protagonist was written just one step ahead of you. It's hard to remember English names originally, and I like to write about a bunch of people at once, so I just use one or two chapters to dig in. I don't know if I'll use them later, so I'll just write them first. Then, the above chapters of the B branch do not contain the protagonist and main plot at all, but they occupy quite a lot of space. The combat power system is inexplicable. There are gods and churches, but there is no actual description of how a church operates, or how gods affect the world. There is nothingness, and there are monsters produced by nothingness, but there is no description of what the monsters look like or what nothingness is. There are demi-humans whose physical abilities are obviously stronger than humans, but they are discriminated against. Why are they being discriminated against when they are slaves? Why are the seemingly more powerful demihumans enslaved by humans? I don't know, I didn't say. The only superpower I have written so far is a phantom book, but I wrote that the captain of the "God's Bookshelf" with a powerful ceiling, the female protagonist, was killed by passers-by in a small gang, and completely controlled the female protagonist. Although the male protagonist was beaten by the deus ex machina, but without the male protagonist, it would definitely be overturned.

I'm here to read the article, but it seems like it's all about urban supernatural battles.

Is this book a plot of a copycat, a bestie plot? I'm the only one who cares about Wen Chao Gong, can I just skip the battle?

If the author wants to suppress the protagonist, then give a suggestion. The books copied by the protagonist are not all fantasy books. The books copied by the protagonist become a source of income and entertainment, rather than a source of combat power. (Don't restrict the protagonist from copying books. After all, copying books is a major focus of copying novels, even if the copied books have no effect on the plot)

At first glance, it looked like a fantasy gala, and I thought I had found an interesting book, but it turned out to be just a literary hero...🙂

Previous original text: "Not all fantasy books have these three abilities at the same time. Paperback fantasy books only have [self-manifestation ability], while hardcover books generally have [self-manifestation ability] as well as 1-2 [manifestation abilities]. Those with 3 or more [self-manifestation abilities] or [manifestation abilities] are collection fantasy books, and those with [Covenant Rules] are special edition fantasy books." However, the long poem of Secret Words has self-expression and one manifestation ability and is classified as a paperback. The Million Gold List has self-expression and two manifestation abilities and is classified as a collector's edition... In total, there are currently two fantasy books with clear levels. How come they don't match up 😥

The setting is similar to a Russian TV series called The Librarian. There was also a person in that world who wrote some books, and these books had power.

Too little🙂

The ideas and system seem to be quite interesting. It is also relatively novel and the writing style is normal. But chapters 2 and 30 feel a bit messy?

The content is very good, but the author's power system setting is still a bit mysterious and difficult to understand, which may not be very pleasing to the eye.

I hope I can continue writing. There are too few similar elements to Dantelion's bookshelf or fantasy books 😭😭. I still like this kind of anime, come on. I feel like the main plot is a bit weird. I don't know if it's the text part or the fantasy book part. Which one is the main plot, or are both plots equally important?

It's really interesting. I've read a book of this type before, but after reading that one, I haven't found anything like it again.

My fantasy book, where did the author come from?