Made in Heaven
天庭制造
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 62k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
26Chapters
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On one side, there are countless imperial liquid treasures that are not used at all, or at least find ways to use them. On the other side, the real world is fighting for some rubbish and low-level gadgets. It is very fragmented. It is super invincible and fragmented. It feels like the protagonist is sitting on a gold mountain, and then fighting for a few copper coins. Just look at the fragmentation and feel uncomfortable. You might as well let the protagonist upgrade crazily in the dungeon world, gain crazy benefits, and then show off his powers in the real world when he has the strength. But you let the protagonist have nothing in the real world, and then the protagonist has a dungeon world with countless treasures and a powerful pet, and then this pet also has countless imperial ooze treasures. In this case, you also avoid the fun of writing about the dungeon world, and instead write about the protagonist fighting for something in the real world, and the hard work is more than 100 times more than the imperial ooze garbage. It is very fragmented and very uncomfortable.
Thirty thousand words and thirteen chapters, and you haven't entered the main plot yet. You are really good at it.
This book should be cut
I haven't sent a single notice for so many days. If I'm so sick that I can't even type a few words, then there's no hope.
666
Hey, I was reading other books and found this book recommended. Then I came in and saw that it has not been updated in 29 days.
This number should not be written anymore
Definitely go to a larger size or open another one
It's too big, which isn't bad, but it feels like it's hard for the author to control it.
Are you keeping books to death? I just read chapter 3
It's so slow to write, when will it be updated?
What's going on, author?
Is it better? Author, I hope you won't stop updating. The initial impression of this book is quite good.