The Cardmaster Era

He is also an old author, and the introduction is so ugly.

I still can't help but say something. I started reading the author's first one. I really like the themes he covers, such as the Kingdom of All People or Shu Mountain. The writing style is actually quite good. It can be said to be above average, but I have basically not read the last few books. I hope this one will improve. Has the author considered not using cheats? I feel that the repetition rate of your cheats is too high. They are basically decomposition and strengthening or corrupted technology, with no new ideas. The cheats are too strong and heavy, which directly accelerates the plot rhythm. Insufficient resources in the early stage require gold. The fingers speed up appropriately and open up the plot. In the middle and late stages, I feel that the writing power is limited and I can't stop it. With the continuous improvement, the new plot, new environment, and new objects that were originally unfolded are all solved by the golden finger. In the final stage, the speed is too fast, and then it is over. In my personal opinion, the golden finger is suitable for playing a guiding role, or it doesn't matter if it doesn't exist, because the real golden finger of a protagonist is the author! It's like swiping dungeons to open treasure chests. Because he is the protagonist, he doesn't need to deliberately cheat. He only needs to swipe a few dungeons and get the copy he wants. Readers won't feel awkward. It's normal for a realistic dungeon to be unavailable after 50 attempts. The author only needs to arrange a reasonable plot. Just like your book, it starts with dragons, titans, now mixed blood, then pure blood, and finally sublimates the devil. This is what you wrote in many of your books. As a reader, I think your writing ability is actually very good, but your golden finger positioning drags you down, like the wizard: starting from synthesizing gems, you just make a transition in the early stage, and don't mention a word about the middle and later stages. I wish you greater success, come on!

Author, you only post one chapter a day, so you should check it carefully before posting it. There are a lot of mistakes, which seriously affects the perception, okay?

It's a pity that it's not my favorite Xianxia online game

To be honest, the writing is pretty good, and the overall plot is very comfortable. It is indeed an old author, but the amount is too small now. I suggest you learn the potential of the immortal next door, and update it every day 🤓🤓🤓

I don't think there are many people following me, so it won't matter.

Qingquan has just released a new book on Yuju. You also wrote about Yuju style and fighting him in the ring. Are you really not afraid of being beaten? 😅 It is better to return to the comfort zone

Lao Da, can this book be written with more than 2 million words? Each book is too short and not enough to read.

Author, do you want to play slg to find inspiration?

The opening chapter is well written. I don't know if there are fat brothers. 🙂🙂🙂This is what is left from the first chapter, make a prediction