Staying at the End of the Dharma, Reclaiming the Tao

The normal thing is to first write the article normally and deceive the readers, then put it on the shelves. This article is so bad at the beginning that it can only be an old eunuch.

The story is told smoothly, the characters are clear and vivid, and the plot is progressive. However, it only has eleven chapters. So far, it is a very good start. I hope the author will get better as he writes more.

The writing is quite good, why haven't I added it to the collection?

I really like the writing style, it's so good and so natural! It completely feels like a martial arts narration, which is very good! ! ! I really love it!

Looking at the first few chapters, they are very standard martial arts ordinary people? It feels as stable as an old author. He explains the background difficulties and solutions very clearly and has a sense of expectation. You can read it. However, the disadvantage is that there is nothing new and there are quite a few works of the same type.

Can't new books be updated twice a day? Too little😭

More updates, short and weak 😐

So far, the writing is okay and there are no bad points, but I always feel that it will collapse in the future. One day at a time, if the warrior does not increase his life later, if it is 100, he can pick up a warrior for a lifetime in three months, and there will be 12 in the next three years. If they are piled up to beat others, they will not even have the strength to resist. It depends on how the author writes

The story is good. Excellent writing. Recommend!