The Secret Buyer

I woke up to find everyone in the world transformed into turtles, their necks adorned with jade pendants. The entire street had been turned into an altar, filled with incense burners. But when everyone turned eighteen, they would draw their own white and yellow cards. I unexpectedly drew the weakest white and yellow card.

Actually, I've always been curious: you sit in the Eight Views Palace, using voyeurism to observe the cause and effect. Isn't that a kind of anomaly? It's terrifying to think about. You act like a celestial being in front of others, but secretly peek through the crack in the door to see what happened, like a mouse.

I like this concept. I often think about selling my lifespan. I read reports that billionaires spend billions of dollars on medical research just to live a few more years, and it makes me anxious. I could sell my lifespan for ten million dollars a year—it's so cheap! 🪖

Stop with all that fancy stilts and obsequious language. Doesn't it feel awkward to read? The book itself is readable, but this stuff really ruins the experience.

Why not call it something like "Pawnshop No. 8"? That would be more appealing.

I subscribed to a chapter specifically to comment on it. 1. Apart from the martial arts stage which had some highlights, the rest of the story is just chaotic plot. 2. The protagonist has no vision whatsoever. He takes everything he sees and calls it a trade, exchanging trash for treasure, and even that trash is stolen from others.

It was alright at first, but it got increasingly boring later on. I've lost all desire to read the last few chapters.

Damn, they only explain why the protagonist makes a foolish mistake by charging a fee, thus weeding out a lot of wavering individuals?

I read the first 20 or so chapters and thought it was pretty good, with some fresh ideas, so I subscribed to the whole thing. But after reading over 100 chapters, I couldn't continue. Either write a lighthearted, easy read, or write something intellectually stimulating so the reader can think about it. This is neither of those problems.

The whole thing is just people pretending to be experts; it gets really boring after a while.