White Jade Capital in the Twenty-First Century

The imaginary plot is actually good, but every character looks like a talkative announcer.

It's a child saving the world again. It's so important. A child who is supervised every day is taken away by a random person. It's so classic.

The name predicts its fate. The protagonist's name in this book is Jiang Lu Shang. The reference characters Jiang Shang and Jiang Ziya are a fairy tale?

Digimon, The Adventures of Jackie Chan, Ultraman, Super Sentai, EVA Mask Marvel, etc.

The introduction is really exciting, but the main text seems to be a bit lacking. The main text is so serious. It is not as funny as the introduction, with a bit of bad taste and a bit of a convulsive feeling.

The real world chapter was okay. After entering the imaginary space, it was just like the decisive battle in Shinjuku. I patched it like crazy and exploded one after another. It wasn't the whole battle. 80% Of it was in dialogue. It was written in a hurry.

The protagonist himself doesn't even know what he will become. He transforms from a human into Agumon, evolves into Greymon in an instant, and then evolves into a mechanical Greymon. In the end, all the fighting Greymons come out, and then they all die together, and the protagonist starts to transform into other weird things.

Author, I would like to ask, what is the world view of this world? Just how big is the map of this century? Don't tell me this world map is as big as the earth. According to the way the introduction is written, as long as it is less than 10,000 times the size of the earth, it is not enough for those people to worry about. It must be in the middle of a scuffle every day.

It's too hasty. Why does it feel like the author arranged the plot too hastily in this book.

It's so messy, I feel like I'm going to collapse if I can't write it long.

It's too messy. There are too many tasks in just a few pieces of content. The author is too anxious to add characters and unfold the story, which makes it very tiring to read. Originally, 50 or more chapters were told in ten chapters, but the details are insufficient and a bit impetuous.

MechanicalGreymon can't hold it anymore, Infinitydramon, BattleGreymon, bring it up quickly

Is there a Shennong? What's the plot now?

The author still likes to let the protagonist make his own panels 😒

Is it possible that Liu Ye is also a time traveler? It feels like the world is leaking like a sieve.

When will you sign the contract? I still have one or two monthly passes on hand.

Come on 🙂🙂🙂😍🙂

Quantum life form Ultraman. Ultraman No. 3, The quantum life form machine. Then the source of fire activates Ultraman Mechanical and becomes the Ultraman Mechanical clan.

Oops, I've opened a new book, let me take a look👀

Keep it up for you🙂

It's a hodgepodge of interesting things. I hope I can continue writing normally. After all, it's easy to write about this kind of subject 🙂

Just passing by, I am the 13th person to post.

Damn it, I've run out of investments for this month.

It feels a bit like writing whatever you dream about, but after I straighten it out, it looks a little better and I want to continue reading.

Have you finished writing so much?