The Sword Comes Out Smiling Proudly

I told everyone openly that I had traveled through time, and didn't care at all🙂

I didn't seem to mention what he did when he traveled through time. Why is he so good at learning kung fu? It's not just about hard work.

The story of Swordsman itself is not very long. It can be seen that the author has stuffed a lot of branch plots into it in order to extend the story. But to be honest, the difference between the excitement of these branch plots and the main plot of the original work is too big, causing the content of the book to fluctuate. The adapted part is not bad with the original work, but the original part is very boring. Basically, the common people are bullied → the protagonist seeks justice → the villain looks down on the protagonist → is crushed by the protagonist → the light of the right path, a cycle of changing the soup without changing the medicine.

I've always wanted to complain about Jian Chu's name.

It ends at 117. The protagonist's internal strength is no longer usable, and his combat power has declined. His life will be shortened during fighting, which obviously suppresses his combat power. If you don't know how to write it, you can write a novel for several years. The protagonist later suffers from amnesia, is picked up, and becomes a husband. Then bandits entered the village and sacrificed his beloved wife. The protagonist began to recover his memory, and then he watched his beloved wife self-immolate and passed away with a ferocious face. I strongly requested that the follow-up be written like this, because I don't plan to read it, and I don't mind.

I wonder how the author plans the future of the protagonist? Why is the protagonist's revenge killing so widely publicized? What is the purpose of fame or vanity? Shouldn't it be to kill people in a dark and windy night and leave the night? When you are weak, shouldn't you just keep quiet? Jianghu has a sharp weapon in mind to kill people. Do you think you are very smart?

Why is the protagonist so special? Ren and Du's second line is different from others

I feel very good after reading the introduction and the first volume of "Song of Youth". When I was a child, I read Jin Yong's novels and imagined what it would be like if I went to the world of martial arts. It felt like changing the fate of the original characters. The ending at the end of the volume was also a good feeling. But the second volume of Sword Like Light is really a bit weird. It's like eating mooncakes filled with spaghetti bolognese 🥮. I can understand the upgrade of the skin of classical martial arts to Xianxia. After all, the only way to improve combat power these days is from martial arts to Xianxia, ​​but this full of Western fantasy style is really a bit uncomfortable. To tell the truth, if readers come in based on the categories of "Swordsman" and "Martial Arts", they will see that half of it has turned into Western fantasy. Fantasy is really weird Σ(°ロ°) It's not that I can't watch it, it's the kind of feeling that I ordered beef noodles and you gave me a plate of macaroni. The only bright spot I found was the causal explanation of why the protagonist traveled through time. I hope the next volume can be written well,

Why did you suddenly become obsessed? There was no foreshadowing before? Did I miss it?

In fact, if the wind is clear, Yue Buqun will not be able to commit suicide in the palace with a sword. So desperate, half of it is a scumbag, and half of it is forced

The protagonist is getting stronger and stronger, and the proud enemies are becoming less and less interesting. They are sweeping everywhere they go. The author feels that it is boring to write and is in trouble.

It started out well, but as I watched it, I realized that the main character only had muscles in his head, and I didn't want to watch it anymore.

It's in the wrong area, it should be a game. 😏 The protagonist's philosophy is: My heart and actions are as clear as a mirror, and everything I do is righteous. At the beginning, two people can kill more than a dozen people simply and crudely. The supporting characters are all NPCs. The protagonist can do whatever he wants. The protagonist is the biggest in the world.

Personally, I feel that the protagonist should not be too over the top, both invincible and creative. Smiling and arrogant but low on martial arts, internal strength is not as important as moves. It's hard to have a great start in Xiaoao, so don't make it too long. Creation can be changed to a different system! External strength and internal strength are one type, and then a sect is established, and the human race is supreme. Why bother with this kind of enemy-less design? Ascension is easy to write, but Xiaoao doesn't have any interesting plot. It's just a Dongfang Invincible, and the others are just bad guys.

As the largest gang in the world, the beggar gang described by Jin Yong has a rigorous and hierarchical organizational structure. Although there are subtle differences in different works, the core framework is basically the same. The following is a detailed summary of the positions of the Beggar Clan: 1. Core Management 1. Gang Leader - Position: The supreme leader of the Beggar Clan, symbolized by a green bamboo stick (dog-beating stick), who needs to be proficient in the two secret techniques of "beating the dog stick" and "Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms". - Responsibilities: Coordinate the overall situation, preside over major decisions, and participate in martial arts affairs on behalf of the Beggar Clan. - Representative figures: Xiao Feng ("The Legend of the Condor Heroes"), Hong Qigong ("The Legend of the Condor Heroes"), Huang Rong ("The Legend of the Condor Heroes", "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"), Yelu Qi ("The Legend of the Condor Heroes"). - Power: Has absolute authority, but needs to be restricted by the Elders Council (such as Xiao Feng was questioned by the elders because of his life experience in "Dragon"). 2. Deputy Gang Leader - Status: second only to the gang leader, assisting in daily affairs. - Responsibilities: Acting gang leader (such as Ma Dayuan temporarily acting as gang leader in "Dragon Babu"), supervising elders and sub-rudders. - Representative figures: Ma Dayuan ("Dragon"), Lu Youjiao ("The Legend of the Condor Heroes", later promoted to gang leader). - Power: When the gang leader is absent, he can temporarily take over power, but the actual influence varies depending on the gang leader's personal ability. 2. Elder System The Beggar Clan has a total of eight nine-bag elders, divided into six categories according to their functions: 1. Elders who teach martial arts - Responsibilities: teach martial arts and assess the promotion of disciples (for example, Lu Zhang is responsible for martial arts training in "The Eight Parts of the Dragon"). - Power: Master the martial arts inheritance of the Beggar Clan and have a high status. 2. Law Enforcement Elder - Responsibilities: Enforce gang rules and punish violators (for example, Bai Shijing in "Dragon" executed traitors with "silk-wrapped hands"). - Power: Have the right to kill first and then report, making the gang fearful. 3. Zhangbang Longtou - Responsibilities: Manage the finances and material allocation within the gang (such as Zhangbang Longtou in "The Legend of Heaven and Sword of the Dragon" assists in handling anti-Yuan affairs). - Power: Controlling the economic lifeline, he is actually the "big steward" of the Beggar Clan. 4. Palm Bowl Dragon Head - Responsibilities: Coordinate begging affairs and allocate resources (for example, in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", the Palm Bowl Dragon Head is responsible for raising grain and grass). - Power: Manage the lower-level disciples and maintain the daily operations of the Beggar Clan. 5. The Four Guardian Elders - Responsibilities: Protect the safety of gang leaders and perform confidential tasks (such as the five guardians in "The Deer and the Cauldron" are responsible for special operations). - Power: Take orders directly from the gang leader, often as a confidant. 6. Other elders - Responsibilities: In some works, "welcoming elders" and "counselor elders" are added, responsible for diplomacy or staff (such as the Green Lotus Envoy and the White Lotus Envoy in "The Swordsman"). 3. Rudder division and grassroots management 1. Eight-bag rudder leader - Status: In charge of rudder divisions in various places (such as Daren division rudder and Dazhi division rudder in "The Eight Parts of the Dragon"). - Responsibilities: manage local affairs and execute the gang leader's instructions (such as the Jiangnan sub-rudder in "The Condor" to assist in the fight against the Jin). - Power: Have autonomy within the jurisdiction, but need to report to the general helms regularly. 2. Disciples from six bags to one bag - Status: divided according to the number of bags (nine bags are the most respected, one bag is the lowest). The number of bags symbolizes seniority and martial arts. - Responsibilities: Perform specific tasks (such as gathering intelligence, patrolling) and obeying instructions from superiors. - Promotion: You need to pass the elder examination or perform meritorious service (for example, Yang Guo was promoted because he saved Lu in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"). 3. Bagless Disciple - Status: New member of the gang or those who have failed the assessment. - Responsibilities: Engage in basic work (such as begging, logistics), outstanding performance can be promoted to a bag disciple. 4. Internal factions and special mechanisms 1. The Pure Clothes Sect and the Dirty Clothes Sect - Contradiction: The Pure Clothes Sect mostly comes from a wealthy family and pays attention to dignity; the Dirty Clothes Sect adheres to the traditional precepts of begging. - Management: The leaders of the two factions are often concurrently held by elders (such as Hong Qigong mediating disputes in "The Condor"), but fights have continued throughout the history of the Beggar Clan. 2. Green Bamboo Order - Function: It is kept by the four guardian elders. When the gang leader is absent, he can temporarily give orders to the whole gang (such as Shi Hongshi succeeding to the throne with the Green Bamboo Order in "The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Sword"). - Power: All resources can be mobilized in emergencies, but use caution. 3. Dog Fighting Formation and Firm Wall Formation - Function: Special tactics commanded by elders (such as the Dog Fighting Formation besieging Murong Fu in "The Eight Parts of the Dragon"). - Power: Elders can directly call elite disciples to execute formations. 5. Position characteristics and power checks and balances - Martial arts threshold: High-level positions (such as elders and helmsmen) need to be proficient in Beggar Clan martial arts, and some positions (such as law enforcement elders) need to master specific martial arts (such as "Silk Grasping Hand"). - Elders' Meeting: Major decisions need to be approved by the Elders' Joint Meeting (such as Xiao Feng's impeachment in "Dragon"). - Regional autonomy: The sub-rudders have greater autonomy within their jurisdiction, but they need to obey the general rudder (for example, in "Snow Mountain Flying Fox", Gang Leader Fan's defection to the Qing court was boycotted). 6. Typical cases and position evolution - Xiao Feng period: There were deputy gang leaders and nine-bag elders, and the branch leaders had greater power (such as Quan Guanqing's rebellion). - During the period of Hong Qigong: the deputy gang leader was weakened, the functions of the elders were strengthened, and the conflict between the Pure Clothes Sect and the Dirty Clothes Sect intensified. - Huang Rong period: The position of "female disciple" was added (such as Cheng Ying in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"), and the status of women was improved. - Shi Huolong period: The elders defected to the Yuan Dynasty, and the position system collapsed ("The Legend of Heaven and the Dragon Slayer"). Summary The position system of the Beggar Clan is centered on "gang leader-elder-sub-ruler-disciple" and has both martial arts inheritance and administrative functions. Its structure not only reflects the strict hierarchy of Jianghu gangs, but also provides flexibility due to its large geographical area and large number of people. The evolution of positions in different periods (such as the rise of the Jingyi Sect and the autonomy of separate rudders) reflects the complex situation of the Beggar Clan in the martial arts world, while the inheritance of the "Dog Beating Stick" and "Dragon Subduing Palm" have always been symbols of power.

When I was a kid, I fantasized about having a palm technique! Specialized in slaps in the face, slaps and slaps in the face, and a big dick will be thrown into your face if you disagree with someone! Doraemon! 🤭 The name is "Big Pocket"

At such a young age, it's great to be able to write like this, 👍👍👍, come on! ! I withdrew first 🙏

I used to see this type of sentence structure many times when I was in school. Now I feel annoyed when I see it. I don't even want to read it.

It's not very good, and it feels like it takes me back to when I was looking for a needle in a haystack in the library and reading novels in a blind box more than ten years ago.

You are a veteran of Su Ye, right? . . The same style

The writing was a bit off in the early stages, but the plot was good.

When I saw Killing the Japanese, I cast 5 of them at once. It had no other meaning, it was just a simple hatred of Japan.

Jumping directly from Xiaoao to Fengshen, and the writing is not very good. I have no desire to read it anymore. Otherwise, I should cut off the book and re-open it as soon as possible.

The quality of this book is much worse than the previous two. First it is martial arts, and then it becomes fantasy on the surface, but it is still martial arts at its core. Sure enough, there is no way to ask the author for every book to be a masterpiece. For example, Eagle Flies in September. The first book, The Patriarch, was astonishing, but I couldn't stand the next few books. It's also like Feng Qiyue, the first few books were also very good, and then they started to be unfinished, eunuchs of eunuchs. I can only wish August to continue his efforts and create greater glory.

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It comes from the classification of the heavens. Look at the name of the paragraph. I thought I was traveling back in time to a teenage song. In fact, it has nothing to do with Shounen Songxing. It's so nonsense to be in Xiaoao all the time. I guess a lot of people have been scammed. I spent 20 coupons and bought one specially. If you don't buy it, he won't comment. I want to remind everyone. It has nothing to do with the Youth Song Club. Those who came here for the Youth Song Club can leave.

The update is too slow, can it be faster, boss...

Updates have been sparse and slow to begin with, and now I'm still on leave. 😓

Sorry, there are too many words, I will add more if I have the chance 🤫