Mr. Bat, Traveling in the Heavens

After reading 8 chapters, the author's writing style and description are both good. There are fewer and fewer people writing about martial arts nowadays, so I am reading one less book. I am still looking forward to a good-looking work. But after reading these chapters, it is revealed that the author's understanding of the original work is only half-full, or that he did not study the original work before opening the book. I think there are two points that best explain the problem. 1. The author believes that Yuan Suiyun's martial arts are extensive but not refined, or that his proficiency is limited. He uses Murong Fu as an analogy and believes that the two are similar. Their martial arts are complex but not refined, making it difficult to compete with real masters. I think the author's positioning of Yuan Suiyun is quite biased. In all the Chu Liuxiang series, among the masters who have officially appeared (Tie Zhongtang, Ye Di will not appear in the future, not counting for the time being), Yuan Suiyun cannot fall out of the top three. In terms of expressiveness, Jellyfish Yinji is the first, and her internal palm power is unparalleled; But he is the youngest among all the masters, which shows how talented he is. The other is Yuan Suiyun's thirty-three kinds of martial arts, each of which he has practiced to a very profound level. He is far from the so-called "proficient in hundreds of martial arts" like Murong Fu. Yuan Suiyun does not have the support of martial arts such as Xiao Wuxiang Gong, but he can practice all the martial arts of various schools to a level that even his own disciples cannot practice. When he uses Shaolin Kung Fu, others think he is a Shaolin disciple. The same is true for Wudang and the Bashan Sword School. It can be said that Yuan Suiyun's martial arts talent is top-notch in the entire Gu Long's works. Murong Fu was completely unable to do this. If he had to make an analogy, Jiumozhi would be closer. If we include Tie Zhongtang, who should not be particularly old at this time, and is very proficient in wedding magic skills, the real number one master in the world should be Tie Zhongtang and Jellyfish Yinji competing for it. Tie Zhongtang has rich experience but is old and has limited physical strength; Jellyfish Yinji is young, but relies more on geographical location. Without water, her martial arts threat will be reduced by a notch. Therefore, who is stronger or weaker among these three top masters depends largely on the battle venue and environment. Jellyfish Yinji has the upper hand in Shenshui Palace, but Yuan Suiyun is invincible in the environment of Bat Island, and Tie Zhongtang can display his strength in all normal environments. If Yuan Suiyun can regain his strength, then his martial arts can be improved. So I think the author has a bias in his understanding of Yuan Suiyun's positioning and martial arts, and it's not a small one. 2. The author told Ren Yingying through the protagonist's words that the Sunflower Book is the most yin and fastest martial arts. This point exposes the author's lack of understanding of the original work of Swordsman. It is possible that he wrote the novel without reading the book or doing any homework, and used his own specious understanding to write it. The original work clearly states that the Sunflower Manual is a martial art of the Supreme Yang. Once a normal man practices it, he will immediately become burning with desire and become possessed. He must be castrated and the yang energy becomes rootless water before he can control it normally. The author uses his own understanding here and believes that eunuchs are the ultimate yin. If eunuchs are the ultimate yin, how to describe the position of women? More yin than yin? Writing so much is not actually to accuse the author of bad writing. On the contrary, after only reading 8 chapters, I feel that the author actually writes well. However, I really hope that authors who write fan fiction can make some effort to read the original work. Personally, I don't like haphazard creations in fan fiction, especially those that conflict with the original work. Generally speaking, the books are deleted and left. I hope the author can write better and better.

Why do I feel like I lost face later by writing it as a "little brother who can do whatever I want"? I feel arrogant.

I would like to ask, if Yuan Suiyun has learned Qingfeng 13 Styles, is he already too close to Master Kumei?

It's getting uglier and uglier. The one in front is pretty good, but Lu Xiaofeng can't stand it here.

It's on the shelves, I subscribed, it doesn't look good, others are going to kill you, and you let the other party go, no matter who the other party is, he wants to kill you, ugh, it's a waste of money.

Zhiyang Kung Fu is said to be Zhiyin. This problem has not changed for nearly twenty days and has been abandoned.

This protagonist's outlook on life is a bit disgusting.

Knowing the secret information that Ye Xue is Mu Tao Ren's daughter, I still want to ask Mu Tao Ren about the world's Jianghu news. Aren't you treating Mu Taoist like a monkey?

The Invincibles in the East have to rely on coercion to defeat them. The protagonist is really pulling all over the place 😁. The coins written in the front are like a joke. The martial arts in Invincibles in the East beat the villain of the protagonist.

Chapter 130: Tell your father your secret and let me choose to give up.

The protagonist suffers from the disadvantage of being unable to put down his arrogance and is not happy at all

The sunflower book is the most yin? It's really hard to stretch

The Legend of Chu Liuxiang is a high-dimensional game with a low-dimensional one. It is to unify quickly, develop power, and get what you want. The results are written in great detail. The development is very slow, and the killing is not decisive. It is grinding and grinding. The writing process is fine, but it describes in detail what everyone said, their inner thoughts, and the bird.

I only admire the one that wrote The Legend of Two Dragons Across the Tang Dynasty.

This book is starting to rot. I will withdraw it first.

I recommend the heroine Hua Zhenzhen, who has the best martial arts, looks and character.

There are too many adjectives for ai. It would be better to change them.

What have I been writing about recently? Why did I suddenly reveal the cheat to others and lead others to use it...

Excellent writing style and a mediocre story. The online martial arts characters have no arc and are aimed at user portraits. However, it is too laborious to rely solely on the impression of the original work for the main and supporting characters. If the reader reads two other similar books, the impression left by the characters in the book is lost. The characters and plot are not driven enough, and the story is "kingly". How long can he continue to read? Writing in this way may not necessarily make you happy. It is not easy to deal with it, but it seems that it is neither good nor bad. The above is my personal opinion, and I may be venomous, but I only say it out of love for the advantages.

Bored, I thought it was Batman traveling through the world of martial arts

Turns out it's you. I subscribed and supported it for the first time. The Right Way in the World Is Vicissitudes of Time was well written, but it's a pity that it's unfinished.

The author recommends a book to you, Bat Chronicles of the Tang Dynasty

Since it is Zhutian, don't just write about martial arts and Uncle Nine, but also write about American dramas.

I'm bored. I want to be the villain. It would be interesting to have a fight with Zhang Sanfeng in the end. There's no point in being a good guy.

In the world of martial arts, Naluo Demonic Skill is probably the best for healing injuries. If you practice the Sunflower Book to the point where gods and humans are reincarnated and then practice Rama's magic skill, can it grow again without affecting your martial arts?

Flying Knife was written too long ago, and it fell all over the place.

I have nine monthly passes. If you update the author more, I will give them all to you.

The biggest problem in writing a book is that the main character doesn't have his own style.

If you have spiritual consciousness in cultivation, you can see. One person, both hands

Very nice, but updates are too slow