A Journey to the Heavens Starting from the Divine Eagle

It's not interesting. The protagonist is too pretentious and pretentious. He always preaches and seems to be very knowledgeable and principled. It makes people disgusted after watching it too much. She calls herself Aquaman, but she is not a scumbag... The plot is not exciting, and I don't feel happy even after leveling up... Tsk I finally finished the Wu-Tang book that started with Wu-Tang, but I can't even finish a copy of this one... The first copy of Mario's new book is also about Shooting the Condor. The plot is exciting and shows control, and the protagonist is also very social. You have been writing martial arts for so long, how come you still can't write about someone who started out in an urban world?

Why is the power of the Yuanba so weak here in Romance of the Sui and Tang Dynasties? The strength of the Four Symbols is beyond compare, and the physical strength is as strong as a perpetual motion machine. Why can't he beat Li Mochou? If you don't want it to be too strong, don't write it. It will be hard to weaken it.

Regarding Xiao Xun'er, my personal opinion. On the contrary, she is a heroine who has no emotions. Which little medical fairy of Medusa Yun Yun has more characteristics than Xiao Xun'er... When I read the novel, I felt that Xiao Xun'er was a fake heroine, just a tool.

The story is not afraid of old age, it depends on whether you can write it. I remember watching a story that left a deep impression on me. I traveled through time and was in Huang Rong's belly, but when I grew up, I took Huang Rong away. The good guy made me urinate frequently, urgently, and unable to finish urination. There are a lot of fanfics that follow the plot and are just a bunch of bastards.

Let me make one point, that is, the Nine Yin Manual does not say that it is a soft martial arts. Like the Great Demon Subduing Fist and the Nine Yin Divine Claws, they are all very strong and fierce martial arts. As for internal strength, I remember that when Yang Guo was saving Guo Xiang, he knocked away hidden weapons. The internal strength was also extremely strong. Yin is the concept of softness. I think there is something wrong with it. Just like Tai Chi, there is a side of using softness to overcome hardness, and there is also a powerful side. Otherwise, it should not be called Tai Chi. The so-called Tai Chi, the combination of Yin and Yang is Tai Chi.

I haven't finished watching "Eternal Life". I remember that I didn't watch it because I didn't agree with my three views. Is Fang Han really that disgusting? However, in the novels of that period, the protagonists seemed to be the kind of villains who would kill people with just one disagreement. However, one thing to say is that the author handled it quite well. People like Yang Guo who have a righteous heart always get along with each other in a friendly manner. Annoying protagonists like Xu Xian, Xiao Yan and Fang Han are killed or ignored. I still don't understand why Xiao Yan would touch the whole body of the young Xiao Xun'er. You must know that he has the soul of an adult. This kind of behavior will lead to trouble! Moreover, there was always a Dou Huang beside Xiao Xun'er, who actually allowed this kind of behavior to happen. It's really the protagonist's halo!

To be honest, according to Li Yuanba's combat prowess, even if the Golden Wheel Dharma King's Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu is fully practiced, with the power of thirteen dragons and thirteen elephants, Li Yuanba will still be knocked down with one move. As a result, in your book, you can't even beat Li Mochou. Brother, in a world with low martial arts, the ceiling cannot be as high as Li Yuanba's.

I'm trying to persuade him to give up. The author's logic doesn't make sense at all (see the Divine Eagle Volume for details). It's really toxic to give him away while saying he wants to be the King of the Sea. Either he becomes the King of the Sea honestly, or he just pursues the truth wholeheartedly and conquers the sky. The author's writing like this is simply trying to persuade two readers. To be honest, the author's writing is better than the average starting point author. It's much better, but this kind of operation (Aquaman + giving away a girl) really made me depressed. To be honest, the author's writing style reminded me of Jin Yong's Heroes when I was a kid. When I was a kid, I just wanted to be the best in the world in martial arts. When I grew up, I realized that there are all kinds of plots about tauren and giving away a girl. I hope the author can pay attention to the next book. I can't bear this one.

Look at the first chapter where the protagonist Wan Doo is left behind by the King of the Ocean. . Although I have no obsession with the harem, there are too many spiritual eunuchs in Qidian now. . . Can you believe that I traveled through time and became an emperor and still fall in love all day long? ? ?

If the protagonist draws a prize for the first time, what he gets is not Li Yuanba's strength but Li Yuanba's IQ. . . .

In Time Travel, the writing of the divine eagle is quite innovative. If I had known that the divine eagle would almost be written off as bald, I still managed to do it in the golden three chapters. It's great. Come on, author. Come on.

The plot is good at first, but why did you give away the little dragon girl when you wrote about the Condor and wanted to be the king of the sea? I can't stand it anymore 💔

Li Yuanba killed 1.2 Million people in one afternoon, averaging more than 50 kills per second. If you think about his speed and endurance, not to mention his strength, it's a joke that he couldn't defeat even one Li Mochou.

It was quite interesting when I first started reading it, and I kept reading. It was a bit boring, not harmful, but it was a bit boring after twenty or thirty chapters, but it was just the same. I skipped through the later chapters and felt that it was not as exciting as it was at the beginning.

Isn't it right? Xiao Xun'er also wants to tease her? ? I'm dizzy. What's the difference between competing with Yang Guo for Xiao Longnu? ? This is not a harem or not, this is a matter of character and three views. Xiao Yan himself is quite upright, but I don't know what the author is thinking about marrying someone else's wife.

It doesn't matter if it's a harem or not if it's well written, but it's disgusting if it's not a single female protagonist, so it all depends on the writing style, and I don't understand why we have to fight over it.

How powerful is Li Yuanba in the Romance of the Sui and Tang Dynasties? For the protagonist in Cavalry and Cutting, use import and export to adjust the strength to 999999, the agility to 200, and the weapon proficiency to the highest level. This is probably the level. You tell me you can't beat this kind of freak like Li Mochou. . . Emmmmm. . .

Qiu Chuji and Li Mochou are about the same strength. They ran for their lives when encountering dozens of golden soldiers. This kind of strength is actually stronger than Li Yuanba.

Until Yang Guo left, his writing was very good and of high quality. Why couldn't he think of writing about "Struggle for Hegemony"? . .

It was quite nice to say earlier that we would not touch the wives of good brothers, so why did we want to rob Xiao Xun'er? Stealing Xiao Yan's wife and taking advantage of Xiao Yan's opportunity (different fire) are not unacceptable, but you are robbing Xiao Yan while saying that you treat Xiao Yan as a friend, which makes readers think that there is a problem with the character of the protagonist. It's like you suddenly knew that your good friend would win the lottery tomorrow, and then the hero rescued the beauty and found the goddess.

I don't understand why there are so many masters in original fan fiction. Martial arts is not something that you can give them a secret book and they can practice successfully. Unlike the protagonist, they have a system plug-in. It feels a bit confusing to watch them practice for 2 or 3 years and compete with famous masters in the world. After all, you only gave your subordinates martial arts secrets, but your system did not produce any marrow-cleansing pills or internal power pills. Did your subordinates use rockets to develop their internal power...

Ends at Chapter 39. No more comments, it's not pure martial arts.

I can't stand it anymore when I see Gao Wu mixing with the underworld.

I suppressed my nausea and read the fourth chapter. The protagonist's IQ is touching and he forced her to lick. The author is very good at playing embarrassing and disgusting people.

The writing level is unstable. Some individual chapters are okay, but some are not readable at all.

Let Li Mochou speak for himself! Can she beat Li Yuanba?

The first few chapters are very particular! There's shit behind it

Li Mochou is said to have vomited blood, which is a bit of a foreshadowing, and the writing style is really hard to explain in one sentence.

As long as everyone has nine-year compulsory education, they can all be admitted to Tsinghua and Peking University. Most people will not be able to become martial arts masters even if you give them the secrets. Why do you think that you can become a master by just practicing the secrets?

The popularity of the novel "Journey to the Heavens," which begins with "The Divine Condor", has completely cooled down. It has only been a few years since the novel was finished. How could it be so cool? No one in the online literary circle has even mentioned this novel. Recently, I visited major online literary forums and Douyin online literary circles, and found that no one has mentioned the novel Journey to the Heavens Beginning with the Divine Condor. Let alone anyone discussing the plot of this novel, no one has mentioned this novel at all in the online literary circles. The novel "Journey to the Heavens Beginning with the Divine Eagle" was very popular when it was updated. It was also a popular martial arts online novel at that time. When it was updated, it was very popular and discussed. How long has it been since the novel was finished? It has lost all its popularity and has been completely forgotten by the Internet. I originally thought that the novel would remain popular for decades after it was completed, starting with the journey of the divine eagle, but I didn't expect that its popularity would cool down a few years after it was completed, and the novel would be buried in history and no one would mention it.