Forging a New Heaven with My Demonic Body

What a crappy book! You actually start charging for it after it's put on the shelf. An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care about reading the book he writes, just throw it out of the bookshelf and never see it again! References

Awesome, I have read so many stories about so-called time travelers returning to their hometowns, and yours is the most exciting. A peerless strongman who has dominated the world for hundreds of years should be the protagonist.

Li Zhao

I suggest you don't always treat yourself like a junior. It's a fact that the protagonist is older. It's boring to let others treat you as a junior.

If there is no subscription data, the author will cut the outline and lie flat! There are no good books to read!

What I want is this taste. The protagonist has lived for 600+ years and returned home after being killed in another world. It is impossible for him to return to Earth and become a good person. Helping people at the barbecue stall and accepting apprentices can only be because the protagonist wants to do so.

I hope it can be on the level of Tao Li. I couldn't stand the last book until halfway through. Tao Li's writing is really good. She doesn't pretend to be pretentious. She is lazy and unrestrained. Justice is not the Virgin. As for the protagonist, it is quite perfect. I hope to see such wonderful works again.

The first twenty chapters are not on the same level as those after. Xiaolou, you have to change your habit of being slow to write books. Although it is a good thing that you get more interesting as you get older, but how do you attract new readers like this?

Is there a heroine and an emotional scene? If there is, withdraw it

Because the parallel world is a world that has been corrected by the travelers