The Human Way Shall Endure Forever

Don't turn on the anti-theft, and have a bigger picture.

The war scenes are wonderfully written, but the life scenes are too overwhelming in comparison. They look more and more like the emperor's golden hoe. Moreover, Zhao Qing is completely unsuitable to be the princess of Han Dynasty or even the queen. To be honest, have you seen any emperor's queen or the wife of a president or prime minister who only knows how to cook? The main character, a businessman's son, is about to dominate the world. Zhao Qing was who he was before and is still the same now. He has not made any progress at all. He can't do anything except cooking. It's like he is stuck. The partner of the head of a country should at least understand some politics. You are like a mascot that is not even a vase. It is too unrealistic. Also from a low background, look at what Queen Ma is like. This is normal and reasonable. In contrast, if Zhao Qing is still written and the heroine is not changed, the plot will collapse.

There is a saying that this book is really rubbish. Apart from smooth writing, exquisite word choice, outstanding characterization, and an absurd but logically consistent plot, what else is there? Nothing!

Author, when will you let me feel this way?

The characters that have appeared in the past month all have the same face, and they all have a heroic mouth. They bowed their heads after Chen Sheng said a few words. Ying Zheng and Liu Bang have neither the heroic spirit nor the cunning of a villain, so the scene ended hastily. Li Si and Fan Zeng became Chen Chui. When the lord said something to them, they said: "Your lord is a great talent, and we will be convicted!" The hero was written as a villain, and the famous minister was written as a coward. A generation of kings ran around fighting for their lives with the leading generals, and the famous general was named Zhao Kuo in order to highlight the lord. Meng Tian, ​​Li Xin... These are all famous generals. I started pursuing this book because of Chen Sheng's youthful spirit. A heroic personality turned into a tool after becoming king.

Map of Twelve States, Map of Yanzhou

I have been reading books for more than ten years in vain, and your book is the first one I paid money to read.

Why does it seem like the protagonist is born and raised here? There are still some operations in the front that are like modern people, but the more I write, the more like locals. What about your modern acquired knowledge? Where's the big banger? If you don't want your brothers to die, just use technology. When you attack the city, you are surrounded by three and one is missing. If the wall collapses for him, why don't you just rush through it? The wall is not guarded by formations. Don't say anything else. If a large instrument like a trebuchet is equipped with some modern incendiary materials, all the cities that need to be attacked should be destroyed. Do you know about the things driven by hydraulic runner in iron smelting? It's not too much to halve the efficiency of the whole set. Every soldier has a set of hundreds of steel-making. Isn't it just a random rush? If there is no rubber monster, why eat it? Use it. The monster's feelings are just to gain a sense of presence? The fur is definitely tough and elastic. Not to mention being used as a sealing ring, wouldn't it be nice to use it to pad wheels to improve transportation efficiency?

The description of the heroine Qing Niang is really a bit embarrassing. Maybe the author wanted to describe a good wife who only cares about her husband, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I just skipped Qing Niang when I saw her. I don't know what the subsequent plot will be. Maybe the author will sublimate her emotions later or make her more flesh and blood, but I should be I will never read the description of this character again. It feels like a strong character The new writing is very good. Whether it is the world view, the world, or the emotional line, I will read it every word until I follow it to the latest. The heroine Zhao Miao is also worth recalling. In my heart, the martial arts genre can already be regarded as a god. Not only is it a very good novel, it would also be a very good screenplay if adapted. In short, I am also chasing new books. I came back to read this book after reading Spring Breeze and a glass of wine. It can be seen that the author's writing power has been significantly improved when writing Spring Breeze. In short, come on, the author, tell the story you want to tell according to your own ideas. His writing style is better than that of many great writers. The author will become popular soon.

If you believe in cause and effect, stop writing about Buddhism like this. You have not entered the door of Buddhism and do not understand the great horror in cause and effect. If there is too much to say, even if you don't believe it, at least be in awe of it.