The Human Way Shall Endure Forever

Stop using security locks, think bigger.

The war scenes are brilliantly written, but the daily life scenes are comparatively weak, increasingly resembling the emperor's golden hoe. Furthermore, Zhao Qing is completely unsuitable to be the Princess Consort of Han, let alone the Empress. Honestly, have you ever seen an empress or the wife of a president or prime minister who only knows how to cook?

To be honest, this book is really rubbish. Besides its smooth writing style, elegant word choice, vivid character development, and absurd yet logically consistent plot, what else is there? Nothing at all!

When will you let me experience this feeling, author? 👿

The characters who appeared in the past month all had the same face, and each of them was full of bravado. They would bow down to Chen Sheng after just a few words. Ying Zheng and Liu Bang had neither heroic spirit nor the cunning of villains, and their roles were hastily ended. Li Si and Fan Zeng became Chen Yun's sycophants, saying "Your lord is so talented, we know we are guilty!"

Map of the Twelve Provinces, Map of Yanzhou

I've been getting books for free for over a decade, and your book is the first one I've ever paid for.

Why does it seem like the protagonist is a native? He acted like a modern person at first, but the more he's written, the more like a local. Where's your modern knowledge? Where's your big bombs? If you don't want your brothers to die, use some technology! When besieging a city, you're still leaving one side open? Just blow down the walls and you can charge in easily, right?

The portrayal of the female lead, Qingniang, is really awkward. Perhaps the author intended to depict a virtuous wife devoted solely to her husband, but after reading over a hundred chapters, I now skip Qingniang whenever I see her. I don't know what will happen later in the story; maybe the author will give her emotional depth or make her more fleshed out, but I probably won't read any more of…

If you believe in karma, stop writing about Buddhism like this. You haven't entered the gate of Buddhism and don't understand the immense terror of karma. I won't say more, but even if you don't believe, at least have reverence.