Tokyo: King of Curses

You can talk about it on the Internet, but after being invincible in reality, who wouldn't want to rush and arrange a few women for themselves, and then stage a messy relationship 😆😆

The more I write, the more stinky it gets, and I never listen to readers. The heroine with unknown meaning is invisible and licks the dog. She has no will to fight and lets the heroine act cool in front of the stage. She is pimped to get the cp. The Pegasus trio who have fixed supporting roles will never be defeated and escorted all the way. The mastermind behind the scenes? A nanny is sent behind the scenes. . This emotional drama and the dog-licking plot are really difficult. Although you won't accept it, you must lick it.

Are you planning to write a love line again? Don't you know how bad your love line is?

I'm really convinced. Can you cut off your emotional line? The existence of these three heroines has no meaning at all. These three are not even tools. They have no effect on promoting the plot, telling the story, or shaping the characters. Their only function is to allow you to write a few more useless chapters. Their characters are as flat as a blank piece of paper, and even if they are all hidden, it will not affect the current story. The latest chapters are almost giving me a headache. They have a bunch of people coming out to be used as cushions to forcefully carry the harem. Are you tired of reusing routines all the time? Whether you are tired of writing or not, I feel tired just watching. Also, when you write behind-the-scenes stories, why are you so obsessed with letting the protagonist come to the stage to show off? (This last point does not apply to this book, only to the previous one)

The author has written two books. He obviously doesn't have the writing skills to write emotional dramas, so he still has to write nonsense. If he writes it, he will be annoying and not popular. Why should he insist on it?

I don't understand why the author insists on writing a love line. This is not an urban youth romance novel. If the author writes a good love line, it would be okay, but the author cannot write a love line at all. The love lines of Pirates' childhood sweetheart and Naruto's sister are not plus points in any book, but are all deducted. Now most of the criticism in the comment area is about the love line problem. I also have a personal question, why do these books have the small group of Pegasus? I don't think any of these people play a big role in the book. After asking, I found out that they are characters in comics. Is it to attract comic fans or does the author just like them?

The author has discovered one thing: Different worldviews have a great impact on supernatural creatures. For example, are those evil creatures still afraid of sunlight (the sun god or positive energy) and silver (purification attribute)? There is no positive energy realm and no gods of order in the physical universe. I am afraid that the evil race will not just dance in the sun and slap a wave of humans. Human beings are so scared that they kneel down and beg the gods to come back quickly. Human beings miss you.

Even if Nanbeng keeps writing Tokyo + Chakra, it won't be like this. I expected you to surpass that old eunuch. It seems that the influence of high sequence is still too strong.

When we scolded the author, we didn't see you come out to protect him. Now the update is discontinued and it is said that it was our fault for scolding the author. Then I say, you are also at fault. Maybe when we scolded him, you would not have broken down and stopped updating, right right

You're not just trying to give others strength and watch others show off, are you? This type of genre is so boring. No one behind the scenes knows the main character, and it's not exciting at all.