I Recruit Talent in Marvel

Did you see Old A's live stream where he said those agents were trying to persuade people to have their profiles written in China?

Is there a way to avoid killing heroes? For example, a scenario where a criminal's leg is broken and an ambulance is called. Once you're in the ambulance and can't pay, you're not allowed to stop being a Gundam. If you have money, it's easy to call an ambulance more often. But with medical insurance increasing every time it's used, it's hard to say when it might go bankrupt.

This subject matter has potential; it's been trending online lately.

This book is alright, but it has quite a few minor flaws, such as a lot of unnecessary rambling; the plot sometimes deviates abruptly from the main story, or suddenly jumps into a small scene. If the author doesn't know how to revise it, you can listen to your own version of the story using an audiobook app. In my experience over the years, the most important factor in whether a book is well-written is that the audiobook flows smoothly and is not jarring.

Please change that "Holy crap, holy crap" thing from the earlier chapters; it really affects the reading experience.

Here's a suggestion: after you've brought each talented person to another world, spend some time describing what they did and what changes they made there. You can just say how amazing they were, but the reader won't really get that feeling. Only by writing that down will the reader understand what they actually accomplished.

The subject matter is acceptable, but the writing style is too elementary and lacks any distinctive features.

Overall, it's not bad, but the opening scene where the character jumps straight from the kill line to someone next to Tony feels a bit awkward because it's too fast.

The main character's name is terrible; you wouldn't be able to come up with it without a stroke within 10 years.

The main character is named Zhang Dianfeng, why not Yang Dianfeng?