I Recruit Talent in Marvel

Did you watch Lao A's live broadcast and tell the agents to persuade people to come to China to write this introduction?

Are there any heroes who don't kill? For example, the plot of breaking a criminal's legs and calling him an ambulance If you can't get the money for the ambulance, you have no choice but to be a Gundam. If you have money, it is easier to take more ambulance calls. According to the medical insurance that increases every time, it is difficult to say when you will go bankrupt.

There's something interesting about this subject, and it's been a hot topic on the Internet lately.

This book is okay, but it has a lot of minor flaws, such as a bit too much nonsense; the plot sometimes suddenly deviates from the main plot, or a small scene suddenly appears. If the author doesn't know how to change it, you can listen to the plot you wrote using audiobook software. Based on my experience in the past few years, the most important thing about whether a book is well written or not is that the plot flows smoothly and is not uncomfortable when listening to the book.

If you change the "crouching" scene in the previous chapters, it will affect the perception too much.

I would like to make a suggestion, that is, after digging each talent into another world, use some pen and ink to describe what those talents did in the other world and what changes they made. Earlier you said how this person is so awesome, but the reader cannot feel this. Only by writing these out can the reader know what they have done.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is too elementary and lacks characteristics.

Overall, it looks pretty good, except that at the beginning, I jump directly from the kill line to the people next to Tony. The jump is too fast, and it feels a bit awkward.

The main character's name is so bad, I couldn't even think of it after 10 years of cerebral thrombosis.

The protagonist's name is Zhang Dingfeng, why not Yang Dingfeng?