House of the Dragon: Let Me Be King!

Personally, I feel that the flashback in that chapter appeared too early. It might be much better if it appeared dozens of chapters later as a side story. In this way, the endings of many characters would be revealed at once, which would somewhat affect the viewing experience.

Overall, it is a good book. The words and sentences are very much imitated by some Western writers. Chapters 1 and 14 both pay tribute to Marquez, and the style of the whole book is similar. However, because of this, updates are very slow, and the author has overlooked one point. Today's books are not attractive by writing, but by plot. The current plot is good, it should be about how the Paul family develops, and it should be about farming and group portraits. However, if the writing style continues like this, it will not only screen out readers who don't like novels, but it will also be time-consuming and laborious. I hope the author will work hard and write well!

Try not to post about what will happen in the future. What we want to see is the excitement of the present. It will be boring to watch the future. You can hint and foreshadow it, but don't write it outright. It's like someone told you that you will be a billionaire in the future. Do you still have the motivation to work and make money? The unknown is interesting. I have read so many books, but there are few books that clearly write about the future.

It can be regarded as a tribute under the Western fantasy system. It can be seen that the tributes include "How Steel Was Tempered", "Millions of Pounds", "Lord of Mysteries", "Devil's Law", etc. Although it is not too amazing, the setting is quite good. You have to look at what is written later to see whether this article has written its own "new"

It looks like a lot of effort, not the kind of effort that is hard to understand, but the kind of effort that makes you curious about why the author wants to write like this.

The first chapter is about a dragon being imprisoned, the second chapter is about a beggar who is living a miserable life, that's it, I haven't read the third chapter, the third golden chapter is just a mess

I personally feel that writing about certain things in the future too many times is the most important thing is that you cannot guarantee that you will be able to finish the book. Marquez's One Hundred Years of Solitude is a complete work. His timeline is in the past. It is not the same type as your online serial novel. You can cut it off at any time. The two require different perceptions.

For example, I have just begun to look forward to the role of Elsa, and you tell me that she will die young in the future. It is very difficult to handle it. Writing this kind of plot occasionally can increase the sense of expectation, but writing it all the time will lower the sense of expectation. I already know the ending. What else do you write?

I didn't understand that the previous one said not to tell outsiders, but in the next one I told my family and knights. Could it be that this doesn't count?

The writing style is really good, and the Western fantasy flavor is very positive. It is not like other Western fantasy stories, but it is essentially a routine article about killing monsters and upgrading. I feel that the popularity should not be so low.