Chinese Martial Arts: Becoming a Master with Dragon Fist in the Turmoil of Republican-Era China!
国术：用龙拳在民国乱世成圣！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 467k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 8mo ago
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The character design is problematic, particularly the time traveler setting and the portrayal of the native's personality.
The writing is decent, but the character design is flawed. The protagonist's personality traits are all native-like, yet he's supposed to be a transmigrator, creating a contradiction.
So far, supplies.
Its advantages and disadvantages are distinct. The advantages are its solid writing style, its distinct Republican-era feel and cinematic quality, and its strong visual imagery. So far, the setting and plot are not clichéd, and it's quite enjoyable when you settle down. The downsides are that it's wordy, doesn't have the rhythm of online novels, and contains too much Shanghainese, which affects the reading experience.
The writing style is a bit forced in an attempt to build momentum; portraying the transmigrator as someone who's not even mentally sound, even among the indigenous people.
Is the protagonist a time traveler?
The protagonist is a transmigrator with a cheat ability? He seems like an idiot. You might as well write him as a native. Writing a transmigrator like this is quite something.
The phrase "Hidden Dragon, Do Not Use" is deliberately portrayed as a wild boar charging recklessly. The idea of borrowing money at exorbitant interest rates is even more absurd. In such a large city as Shanghai, is there only one clinic? And it just so happens to be a heartless one? Did the time traveler not bother to check the surroundings beforehand?
Well, the premise is pretty good, but the rhetoric and delivery are terrible.
Seeing the Green Gang demanding an explanation from the protagonist... Seriously, what a load of nonsense. Shouldn't they just fight him since his skin is useless? What kind of martial arts novel are you writing? So many opportunities, and in the end he's just a nobody? I didn't understand the plot. What kind of martial arts did he learn?
The main character's personality is so strange, it's not like a real person.
Online novels are generally aimed at readers nationwide, so they try to use as little dialect as possible to reduce reading barriers. Now, I only read a few lines before losing interest.
Chapter 31 felt too contrived. I'd rather the protagonist had remained patient and stoic throughout. The Chengfu Deep Dragon could be both powerful and insignificant; as a minor official, he could be a mere servant; as a powerful figure, he could command the winds and rains and stir up the winds of the martial world.