Chinese Martial Arts: Becoming a Master with Dragon Fist in the Turmoil of Republican-Era China!

The writing is okay, but the character design is wrong. All the character traits of the protagonist are indigenous, but the setting is that he is a time traveler, which is contradictory.

The advantages and disadvantages are clear. Advantages: The writing is solid, with a bit of Republican style and movie texture, and the visuals are very strong. The setting and plot so far are not cliché, and it is good to calm down. Disadvantages: It is verbose, not like the rhythm of online articles, and too much Shanghainese affects the reading experience.

The writing is a bit too far-fetched in order to gain momentum, and the time traveler is written as the kind of person who even among the aborigines is considered mentally ill.

Is the protagonist a time traveler and a golden finger? Why do you feel like an idiot? You might as well write it as an aborigine. A time traveler written like this is also a talent.

Don't use Qianlong, just write it like a wild boar and run rampant. Borrowing loan sharks is even more ridiculous. In such a big city, Shanghai only has this one clinic? He happens to be a black-hearted person? Didn't he understand the environment after traveling through time?

How to say it? The setting is pretty good, but the language is rubbish.

The protagonist's personality is so weird that he doesn't look like a real person

Online novels are generally aimed at readers from all over the country, so try to use dialects as little as possible to reduce reading barriers. Now I don't want to continue after reading a few lines.

Chapter 31 It's too deliberate. I would rather the protagonist endure it to the end. The sincere mansion is deep. The dragon can be big or small. When he was young, the boss of the house was close to his ears. When he was old, he could call the wind and rain and stir up the world.

Only 4 people including me are following this book. This book is about to be cut.