Star Core Evolution: Deep Space Mecha

I came here through Doubao search. Let's put it this way, it is right to have a passion for writing novels, but you must first find out whether the setting is reasonable or not. 1. The protagonist is eighteen years old and has lived independently in the wasteland for eighteen years? Unreasonable: 1. Children only have self-awareness at the age of 3, and the ability to think independently at the age of 6. This is still based on education. How did you survive the first six years of your 18th year? 2. Literacy problem. How can a person who has lived independently for 7 years without knowledge recognize that this book with tadpoles and people drawn on it is a cultivation book? Just treat it as a survival point for sale; how can you practice it if you can't read? It takes more than a dozen people to decipher the text, and it takes half a year to decipher 20 pages of unknown text. This is still a high level of knowledge, and you can learn it from a wastelander who knows nothing? Big bug. 2. Marginal garbage star. Unreasonable, your setting is the edge zone, this is interstellar, edge = nothing, where did you get so many debris? It was created with resources, and you have so many debris, which shows that this was a planet that was once very wealthy, so it cannot be a fringe planet. Well, you say take out the garbage. This is not some peeling and fruit crumbs. No one will travel all the way here to dump it. Even if there is, your place is still a meteorite belt. How much is the transportation cost? This is a contradictory setting. 3. Many of the words written are hard to read. Let me give you an example. Do you know what the most powerful word means? During the massage, the technician will ask you if you are receiving any force, and if you are receiving the force, use a little more force. Do you understand, the most stressed part of the body is the butt, which has the most flesh and is the most stressed. [The deadliest] and [the most powerful] are two completely opposite settings. Oh, I really like the setting, but your writing style and design really cannot be complimented. I would like to give you a solution. One is to travel or be reborn. You have practiced "Xingyue Jue" before time travel, or if you die and are reborn 30 years in the future, you have cracked "Xingyue Jue" and started practicing at the age of 6 in this life. That's it. As for your planet settings, delete the borderline junk stars and everything will be fine.