King of Entertainment: From the Start, I Went on a Blind Date with a Star

The author must be quite young... Everything they write is so detached from reality. How could someone write that renting a place in Hengdian for 13 years costs 50,000 yuan a month, or 300,000 yuan a month if you don't haggle? Seriously, that's 10,000 yuan a day? What kind of place is that? 😦 Secondly, the idea of ​​making interactive movie games completely blew my mind.

Even if you just imitated the timelines in that Korean entertainment novel, it would be better than what you're writing now. Don't feel embarrassed about imitating him; it's about making money, not shameful. Write something people like to read. If you think bulldozing isn't good enough, then just write three or four female leads, right? If you can't write romance, then just go for bulldozing.

Li Yitong

What the heck did I write that somehow ended up going off to Lao Yang's stuff? Pure crap.

You're not suited to writing novels, you're better suited to writing analytical posts.

The author is out of touch with reality, completely oblivious to prices and money; lacking common sense and basic understanding of society; possessing peculiar aesthetics, her secret being her un-cosmetic beauty; and seemingly confused, she wants to share her time-travel adventure with more people. (Slippery sound)

The whole thing is rambling and full of nonsense. 😰

The idea is imaginative, but the brain seems to be full of holes. You know the saying "three monks can't drink water"? Having the secret of the time portal, the solution they came up with was to contact Yang Mi and share the secret with a fourth person. I can only say I'm speechless. People are selfish. Can you really trust Yang Mi? Yang Mi, born 2013, is already a seasoned veteran.

Don't go into stocks, go to the futures market, go to the foreign exchange market. Those markets have daily trading volumes of nearly 10 trillion. You could be the richest person in a month. And you don't have to worry about being investigated; it's clean money.

This is ridiculous! Who's going to read all this nonsense and scientific information? There's barely any plot in a chapter; everyone skips through the fluff and explanations.