Keeping a Diary in the Entertainment Industry: Honey, Don't Be Jealous

Tian Xiwei

Soliloquy type, popular science type, no sense of drama, procrastination!

I've tasted it and it's poisonous. Erase, don't write. The content of film and television dramas is not written. I don't write my own creative ideas for film and television drama adaptations. Don't write entertainment gossip. Just write a diary. Various speculations about female celebrities. Data analysis. A bland batch.

What are the latest chapters about? Argumentative essay? The whole chapter is about winning the Golden Bear Award and why. The latest chapter introduces Liu Tianxian, what's the plot? You really write an argumentative essay! Give an argument and the whole article is full of arguments. There is no feeling of pleasure or climax. Won the Golden Bear Award and Best Actress. The response was mediocre. I suggest this author look at other entertainment novels. Others have won awards and achieved high box office, and how they wrote such climaxes that I couldn't stop reading them.

The entire story is made up of popular science talking nonsense and inexplicable psychological activities. The plot is less than one tenth of the story. The contents of the diary are messy. The protagonist's decision-making is also inconsistent. The whole thing looks like a mess.

The idea of ​​this diary is pretty good, but just like a novel I've read before with a similar idea, it feels a bit broken. Let's not talk about anything else, just the first few dozen chapters. The various intrigues between the heroines take up too much space, and are very disturbing to watch. Their IQs are also raised to be too otherworldly, and the male protagonist is also demoted to too low. Various reasons that emphasize that the male protagonist is full of loopholes and the heroine acts with her are not convincing.

There is basically no plot. The whole story is about my own psychological activities or introducing this and that. If you don't know, I thought I'd look at Baidu Encyclopedia.

Disadvantage 1: Joining the group is really a failure. There are only 9 people in the group. Suddenly there is one more person. How can I not pay attention to it? It means that the famous protagonist knows that they can see the diary. The pull of the hard-to-get game is gone, and the excitement of the diary is gone. The author's brain is somehow capable of coming up with such a plot. Disadvantage 2: There are too many narrations, often a whole chapter of narration explaining, explaining, and complaining Disadvantage 3: In ten or twenty chapters, the diary is owned by 7-8 women, and they know each other's existence. The way to obtain the diary is even more speechless. The protagonist mentions the woman's name in the diary, and the woman can have the diary, which highlights a collapse Disadvantage 4: The protagonist is missing, but the access channels are limited to the entertainment industry. Everything in the entertainment industry can be accurately dated, but finance, stocks, gambling, futures, currency speculation, etc. Are completely unknown. See The protagonist wants to make several movies in 6 years and earn hundreds of millions. I really want to die laughing. He has been reborn and cheated in this drama. If the protagonist is to improve his self-worth, readers will recognize it. The protagonist is actually to make money... Even if you spend 300 million to buy gold, you can make 300 million in 6 years 😜, not to mention some obvious stocks, such as Tesla

Why are they all "explanation" and "introduction"? Sometimes it's like this for several chapters in a row.

16 This book is still level 2. I can't imagine it. I even feel a sense of fear even clicking into the book 😰