Two Worlds: Transcendence Begins with the Battle of Yashan

You're really afraid your book will become a hit. Just when you thought it was starting to get a little interesting, you came up with a whole new, homegrown supernatural system. Do you think your idea is brilliant? It's already successfully made me lose interest in reading it.

The various scientific explanations in the article are utterly baffling... The author clearly lacks knowledge; they should eat more before writing!

It's giving me a headache; I want to complain but don't know where to begin.

A silly story about a sycophantic nanny who works for the Zhao family.

He didn't want to be emperor; he wanted to be his own master. His downfall wasn't without reason.

It's a complete mess! Full of contradictions!

To kill a shark with a single punch in the sea and then claim that one's physique is inferior to that of a Mongol—do you, author, depict Mongols with waists spanning four zhang (approximately 10 meters)? Or are you suggesting that all the Song soldiers in your writing are spineless cowards?

Hundreds of thousands of incense offerings don't increase combat power; they only enhance support abilities. If combat power is useless, how did that divine world use combat power to subdue and oppress people? Later, over a million incense offerings a month also don't increase combat power. This is a science fiction novel; incense is just electricity.

Without an emperor, the world will be ruled. After a few generations, capital will rule the world.

Isn't this plagiarism? Tomato's