Mortal: Dressed as Han Li, They All Feel Wrong

The subject matter is very novel, but the writing is too casual. There are obviously many things that are wrong, and the behavior of several women is too abnormal. The author makes the protagonist Han Li be a fool. Moreover, it is completely unexplainable that Mo suddenly has spiritual roots. It's normal for Han Li who is practicing Qi not to be detected, but he still encountered it after building a foundation.

When I saw the number of characters, I knew they would be popular 🤓🤓🤓

I didn't suffer Han Li's hardships, but I enjoyed Han Li's blessings.

Don't talk about your subject matter, I think it's quite interesting, haha

This is the kind of book that QQ reads. It's all about creativity. If Han Li wasn't so ugly, I really wouldn't be able to read it. I really want to read it. 🤭

He actually entered the palace, TT.

(￢㉨￢) I just want to open both. . . How many copies have been replaced? . . Do you want to write your first book well? . The quality has declined severely. . .

Very much looking forward to more updates! This kind of subject matter makes mortals even gods. I feel like I could write a lot. For example, will the Jade Spirit, who waited for Han Li for thousands of years before being brought to the spiritual world, turn into the rich woman who supported Han Li since childhood? And what about Bingfeng? It's possible to have memories of the spirit world and come directly to Han Li to be his pet wife. Mei Ning will not miss it. Would Song Yu have been admiring Han Li from the beginning with her memories and then go straight to him before the baby was born? Yuan Yao won't suffer if he has memories. When they first met, he took his senior sister to stick with him for nothing. I feel like there's really a lot to write about, hahaha. I'm not sure if the author's idea is that the female characters will later know that everyone has memories and share them together to fill in Han Li's life from their own perspective. If the protagonist is not a fool, he will also find out the reason. I am looking forward to seeing how the beginning is written. I just want a lot of updates, preferably starting with 10,000 words per day.

The idea is very good. At present, the protagonist feels that something is wrong with the plot, but with so many coincidences, if the protagonist is not so stupid, over time, it should be possible to find that they may have some memories of him. I hope that the protagonist will not be so brainless, that he has already discovered a lot of things that are wrong without exploring why.

I'm speechless. Why should I just abandon such a popular book? ! Yu Ling abandoned it without even writing it. The subject matter is good, have you written anything similar?

It seems that the author can't continue writing. Thinking about it, the main reason is that the author has a poor grasp of several female characters. The creation of multiple female characters is a thunderstorm. The subject matter is very good, but it is a pity that the author's writing skills are not strong enough.

She's a bit too stud, she can't stop banging 😂

Awesome, even ordered for the heroine 🤓

Do you want Xin Ruyin to awaken Tian Qiner's memory?

If the sound is not received? If you accept a bunch of useless people but don't accept Ruyin who is rare in the human world and has some talent and usefulness? Let's see what the author writes

There is the best show in the sea of ​​chaos, Mrs. Fan can watch it

The subject matter is okay, but the writing style needs a bit more polish.

I want to see Young Master of Star Palace, hurry up😡

The updates are too infrequent and a bit too slow. The book is quite good and I really like reading it. Write monthly tickets, come on and update. Momojiji has too few updates.

Why is there no Xin Ruyin in the role?