Mortal: the No. 1 Dandy in the Sea of ​​Chaotic Stars

Mr. Qian also left a lot of heaven-level skills. What? Is there anyone who doesn't want to practice? Still don't like it? 🤫

A mortal's path to immortality goes straight to the Empress of the Yuan Dynasty. There are a lot of top-notch techniques for transforming gods. Just to see if it can be accomplished. It consumes huge resources. Or require special physiques and talents. So you can write boldly. After all, the skills that only reached Yuanzhong are not worthy of the old ghost Sanyang. This kind of Yuanzhong monk. He has a lot of top-level skills in his hands. It just depends on whether it suits you or not. And this Qingyang Thunder Fire Technique should be related to the Qingyang Demonic Fire of Tiannan Demonic Flame Sect. After all, there are a lot of magical powers left over from ancient times.

Epic level enhancement.

Don't be like Qing Yi's book. If you write well in the beginning, it will directly lead to big traps. . . No matter how hard I tried to persuade the author not to change the setting of the original work, he couldn't persuade me to quit after ordering hundreds of chapters. . .

Is this considered an official original match?

If you want to go against the will of heaven, Zi Ling practices the Demonic Art of Holding Heaven.

I think Mrs. Wen still has her charm, so she is most likely a virgin!

Nascent Soul Monk

Girlfriend Feeling

Woman Yuanyao, does it smell like that?

Three sisters

Zi Ling, who has practiced magic skills since childhood

It consumes resources. It is estimated that after the ascension, only the desert will be left in the human world, and it will all be consumed by the protagonist.

Bai Fumei Rich woman, hug, hungry, rice.

The animation was ruined by the two demons of Tiannan and the white-eyed wolf couple, and they will be instantly refined by the ancient demons. The protagonist, please help the poor guy 😁

Mei Ning

Song Yu, a woman named Song

In fact, the author can imitate Lin Laoxian, a fellow Zhetian, who nibbles the old and bitterly young, and urges the Sanyang Old Demon to make his father become awesome, then nibble on the old, and then have more children with Zi Ling Yuanyao. Both of them have awesome physiques. The son or daughter must be very talented, and then start bitterly.

After seeing Chapter 19, I fully support the author. The previous writing was a bit hasty, and Yuan Yao Yanli's writing was also a bit hasty. Harem novels still need to put some effort into the female characters. They cannot turn them into facial makeup and tools. Daily life is an indispensable part of shaping the female characters. If there is an emotional scene, it cannot be like Yuan Yao Yanli. Five years later, the male protagonist cannot win against the two sisters. All the intermediate processes are omitted. Reasonable driving is also the essence of harem literature. Overall, the writing is pretty good, good luck to the author!

The problem with this book is that the author's plot rhythm is unstable, sometimes slow and sometimes fast, just like a newbie. I prefer a slower one, and the character development needs to be foreshadowed. There is too little foreshadowing for the characters in the front, and too much foreshadowing at the back, which will make people who follow the book feel confused. Anyway, keep up the good work, author. 4,000 Words a day, too few updates. Of course, if you are writing articles part-time, just pretend I didn't say so. 🙂

It's good to keep writing like this👍👍👍👍

With this golden finger, why is there no plot on Bi Ling Island?

The rich woman is here

The author invites tea

Later, I started to work hard in Tiannan. Mu Peiling and Song Yu wrote well every day.

I've caught up with the latest chapter. Author, you have to finish it 👍

It's pretty good, there are only a few available, so order all of them

Your protagonist's name. . . The substation manager, right?

Is the plot based on the original novel or the adapted 3D animation?

Shouldn't the number one dude in Chaotic Star Sea be Wen Tianren?