Indiscriminately Pretending to Be an Immortal: Mr. Nan Guo's Notes on Evil Cultivation

Is it the Chuanzi that Wan ordered, or the navy?

It's pretty good-looking, but apart from the allusion of using the ruse to make up for it, I don't see the need to put the background in the Spring and Autumn and Warring States periods. It would feel better if the background was set aside.

Which boss's trumpet? ? ? ?

1. Overall, this book is worth reading. At least the writing style on the new book list and the monthly ticket list is not much better than that of the author, Liangcao (mainly the writing is quite interesting) 2. There are several poisonous points, and the plot also has some places that cannot be read with your mind. Let me talk about the points: First of all, the first skill that the protagonist gets (you can see that the protagonist touches people's corpses on the playground) Come out) Why don't we discuss why we still carry the secret book with us after learning it? There are so many people watching the protagonist touching the corpse (the protagonist's excuse is Wang Ming), but it is unreasonable that the general named Tian Wei didn't explain it to King Qi. There is also an assassin who found out the skills that are so naughty (this is not a bad point because the person they want to kill is King Qi, so he is not awesome), but he brings it with him for the protagonist to touch. I felt amazing because after learning it, the protagonist didn't carry any secret techniques with him, and they were searched, and your protagonist could find it out. The assassin was not found by the palace guards, and his head was about to be lost. You modern people are better at searching the body than others. Master, the plot interspersed in the middle is too unreasonable. There are too many tricks that are leaked in the palace. There is only one possible explanation. The imperial master gave you the slave mark and didn't care about you. King Qi also thinks that you can't change the world. I also think this slave mark is a clown🤡. See for yourself if you laugh. Why didn't he use the slave mark to kill you when he was fighting with the other person's Yin body later? The national master was reluctant to use it on you? There's nothing else, it's just that there are too many poisonous points in the palace, so I can't use my brain to detail it Summary: Liangcao, I can still read it, because the writing is indeed better than the ones before and after you, and the story is quite interesting, so the poisonous points can be tolerated, but I hope it will be about the palace. The author can go through some of the rules in his own mind. As long as it is not too poisonous, he can read it. It is impossible to write this kind of thing that can withstand scrutiny. If it is comprehensive, the author will lose more hair and update less, so I will write it when I feel that it can be done after the situation is reflected.

I really think this book is better than most of the monthly tickets. I have barely read this year's new books. The new books I like, Crow and Xiaolangjun, are not very interesting. Only this one and Immortal Disaster seem to have something to offer, but I just gave up like that? Moreover, this book has been criticized by many people, which is simply inexplicable.

The writing is pretty good, but it's the first time I've seen so many people criticizing a new first-level book. I think I'm being cheated.

Liangcao, some people in the comment section have exaggerated.

✒️Writing: good 🎬 Plot: OK 🎭 Character design: A bit worse

In any case, the author should not be discouraged, just create another small account and come back.

It's well written, but there are two points that make it terrible. After the protagonist is named, he can't do anything. He is prepared to be a dead horse and act as a live doctor, and he sings hard. Isn't this suicide? It is better to add a patch, the protagonist understands a little bit, and then sings, but it is terrible, and in the end he is fucked by the king. Then the anchor ran away here. This place is better than before. The author wrote down the subjective and objective reasons why he can't run away.

The writing is good, there are many flaws, but the flaws are not concealed. Wanding is a bit over the top, but it is a small masterpiece. Good work, author.

It can only be said that the author insists on writing the protagonist as an ordinary person who can't do anything at first, but like this, he is a brother-in-law, moves smoothly, and takes the initiative to put down his body, which is not ordinary.

This book is dead, and the braggarts in the comment section have to take half of the blame 😂

No way? AI shouldn't taste like this, why can't I tell it's AI?

It can only be said that the protagonist has always been eccentric. If the halo of the protagonist had not disappeared long ago, it would be too difficult to subscribe. After all, if the monthly subscription is less than 200, it will still be a small version and there will be no on-shelf activities, unless it is the first in the new book list in the top 100 monthly subscription list in a few days.

Our argument is really not important. Let's see again in two months, okay? For an author, the biggest charm of the starting point is that good writing can be broken. In 2024, I just signed a contract and was beaten by level 4 and 5 authors at the same time. One book was level 5. In 2026, I was already level 5, but my second book was beaten by a powerful newcomer at the same time. Logically speaking, I would be unhappy that a newcomer had such good results for this book, but the quality of the content of this book won me over, and I couldn't help but stand up. Whether I am a level 5 author or not, you have to get into trouble. It is useless for me to send out tax refund records and payment slips from Shanghai Xuanting Company. As for my pen name and the title of my work, it is impossible for them to be exposed. There are too many sour cucumber authors at Qidian. I have finished the points I want to express (concurrently posted in the main comment area, that's the end of it)

The quality is very high, but some of the comments are very strange. Someone must have asked the trolls to suppress him. I guess it's the authors of new books from the same period who are rushing to recommend it. Basically, I will sift through it before he is ranked. After he is ranked, I will know who it is. I hope there will be more on the shelves, at least to give more vitality to the stagnant subdivision of Xianxia.

This author is definitely a big shot

If you say it's awesome, then it's awesome. Compared to other time-travel novels, the other protagonists are confident. If you go back this time, if you go back, you are just trying to get lucky.

The official has gone through the article again according to the opinions of the public, and has made two main changes: 1. The exercise "Causing Peiyuan Jue" has been changed to "Wansheng Qi Seizing Jue", which is more in line with the temperament of pig's feet. 2. Corrected the bug of the protagonist dying in Chapters 19 and 20, setting Wu Xian's heart to be on the right side, and using this as a foreshadowing for subsequent identification of the same ghost. Other details such as titles and item names have been optimized without affecting reading. Thank you very much again. Weichen is a primary school student who works hard on coding. It is his first time to come to Daqidian. The outline of this book has been planned to be 2 million yuan. He will finish it carefully without spilling water or entering the palace. Please continue to support!

One gold is one pound of gold or one pound of copper, not one tael of gold Do you call me the Grand Sima of the Army? This is called Army Sima

Take a well-known AI book as an example. After being judged to be off the list, the monthly ticket ranking is not displayed. You can check out other AI books that have been cleared, but they all do not display rankings. And the book still shows specific ranking numbers. Therefore, it is a mystery why the author became a eunuch and pretended to be dead but could not speak out.

If you later switch to the world of immortality and the sect of immortality in a gorgeous way, this book will make you a god.

Personally, I feel that the imagination is quite good, but there are some weird places in the middle, including the rhythm. I am a little surprised that Sanjiang is not there, but Wandingzhen may not be able to do it.

Very well written! Is there a large size?

A group of AI people who can't tell the difference between AI writing and AI writing have become confused AI people praise AI writing written by AI writing people Right up 😁

I just read this book and waited for a slap in the face to some awesome guy who went around basking himself for five thousand dollars.

It hasn't been updated for two days, so it seems like it's gone. What the author writes at the beginning is pretty good among fairy tales. It doesn't have the rotten smell of classical fairy tales. But since I stopped writing, I guess it's because the reading data is not ideal, and I didn't get the recommended website shortcomings on Friday? Let me think about it, what problems does the author have with this book? First, the sense of harvest is insufficient. Generally speaking, at the end of a small plot, the protagonist will at least gain something, status, strength, feelings, connections, treasures, and they will be useful in subsequent plots. In this article, dozens of chapters have passed, and the protagonist's situation is still in danger, and it is getting worse and worse. There is no hope of improvement. Second, there is a lack of logic. 1 You wrote about cultivating immortals in the pre-Qin era. Did you know that there was a Jiuqing with a hammer in Qi? The Sangong and Jiuqing were created after Qin Shihuang unified the world. Where did the Jiuqing of Qi come from? 2 Catching a dozen assassins is enough for Tian Ying to become the king? Confess the king! The God of Killing Bai Qi has been fighting all his life. Before the Battle of Changping, he was just a Daliang Zao. After the Battle of Changping, he was the Lord of Wu'an. How could you catch an assassin and grant him the title of a thousand households? It's still the two who share the credit, Nan Beng. 3 The national preceptor is sometimes King Xuan of Qi, sometimes Feng Qiye, and sometimes a time traveler. He can also recognize the takeout clothes the protagonist is wearing in his mind. He is obviously from a modern city. With his identity and strength, he should have unified the world by now, instead of fighting against the Song Dynasty. 4 King Min of Qi (named Tiandi) was really good at defeating the Song Dynasty in the early stage. After destroying the Song Dynasty, he was so stupid that the five countries attacked Qi. But you lost directly? Is this little butterfly of the protagonist so fierce? 5 Do you know the concept of controlling 90% of the officials in the court? Mengchangjun is so arrogant, Tiandi dares to fight with him? Do you still dare to play the trick of killing someone in a meeting? This is because you dislike your butt for being too stable, right? 6 You are going to pass the test at every turn, and arrest people all over the country at every turn. Please, pass the household registration system. In the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, only the Qin State did it in the hands of Shang Yang, a perverted control freak. There are many "savages" in other countries, and the portrait of the protagonist is hung all over the country in a few days. Such a mobilization, why haven't they unified the world yet? 7 Why is the protagonist an aborigine who has absorbed the memory of modern people? You write it like this. If you want a sense of substitution, why do you have such an awkward setting? It won't please both sides? 8 The main character's core skills are all based on touching corpses. Let me ask you, who will bring the skills to touch corpses for you during the assassination? Who would bring the bottom-of-the-box technique with them when rushing to the Hongmen Banquet? Just to make it easier for the protagonist to touch the corpse? Just relying on God's will to show off his power? ... There are too many, too many logical problems. Although they are not big problems, they are very awkward when accumulated. Third, the pace is too slow and the mid-term and long-term goals are not strengthened enough. You have written more than 100,000 words, but the protagonist has not yet escaped from Qi State, and is not yet "safe". The pace is slow, but it is not the kind of fun story with many jokes, and readers have no patience to read it. Furthermore, the protagonist's goal has always been to survive in the short term to "survive the crisis". If the danger detection method is used all the time, readers will get tired of it. The medium-term and long-term goals are not hinted at enough, and changing the map is very abrupt.

What role does the male protagonist's sister play? She's not cute, and there's no positive development. If she dies, the male protagonist can be replaced. She's not cute at the moment, and her role isn't as great as that of Zijin😅

There is another eunuch in the palace🙂