Mortal: Han Li Vs. Time Traveler

I was shocked just by reading the introduction. Doesn't this novel really pollute my glasses?

There are many settings in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality that may not seem worth mentioning, but once you accept them, you will become less and less able to read the novel. For example: 1. When encountering an enemy that is too strong, you should run away instead of bursting into a small universe, awakening mysterious power, having epiphanies and breakthroughs in battle. 2. When being chased by the enemy, you should remain anonymous and act in a low-key manner instead of continuing to take high-profile murderous risks. 3. Killing people, seizing treasures, destroying corpses, and eradicating traces to avoid being approached by enemies or even harming relatives and friends should be the basic IQ of the protagonist. 4. Making good use of your own talents/cheats/plug-ins should be based on the protagonist's basic IQ. 5. It should be the protagonist's basic IQ to hide one's cheats/plug-ins, avoid being discovered, kill people and seize treasures. 6. Do not mock others in person for no reason, including the protagonist. It should be based on the basic IQ of the villain, supporting characters and passers-by. 7. When working for others, including women, the remuneration should be negotiated in advance. 8. Talking in a battle will make both sides look stupid. The more words there are, the more stupid they will be. 9. Taking risks requires sufficient reasons. 10. Realm division is the cornerstone of the combat power system. If you casually cross large realms to kill enemies, the combat power system will soon collapse. 11. Being able to take care of oneself without the protagonist having to save lives frequently should be the basic IQ of the protagonist's relatives and friends. 12. Monks will not be slaves to mortals. 13. Being free and unrestrained is a fairy. 14. Tell more stories and less reasoning.

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The quality of new mortal books is getting worse and worse

The main plot is a bit slow, and the anime is full of Nascent Soul monks killing people randomly.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Out

The author's book has great potential. There are various time traveler systems. The author can definitely learn from the protagonist's system in the fan fiction, such as the system of many children and many blessings, the gold finger for improving the quality of enlightenment, the gold finger of the book about raising mosquitoes, and the golden finger of the Gaode map that you borrowed is also very interesting, and the simulation system of your latest chapter. The development of these time travelers will be interesting to fight with Han Li.

The first is the story of Han Li and the time traveler. There are no accidents of the time traveler in two chapters every day. The rhythm is wrong and the theme is no longer exciting. Why is this? There is no main line atmosphere of a time traveler (it is what you have to do, there are people watching from the side, live broadcast, and there are people previewing or discussing, it is the doing of things, such pressure, your live broadcast pressure in the center of the story)

The plot setting is relatively unreasonable. It is known that the mortal world is a resource-hungry world, and the hostility between characters basically stems from the competition for resources. However, the golden fingers owned by the time travelers in this article have the characteristics of generating resources in the void and improving cultivation out of thin air, so one of the key prerequisites for the hostility of the time travelers is the competition for resources. And since the plug-ins dropped after death can only be used once, compared with cheats that can be used infinitely in cooperation, cheats that can only be used once after death are not cost-effective at all. Moreover, the function of announcing the murderer before death in the group chat will reveal the murderer. Murderers who kill many people are at risk of being rounded up. At the same time, there is a transformation process from natural resources among mortals to usable elixirs, magic weapons, etc. People's Congresses with different golden fingers can cooperate in this process to improve the conversion rate. For example, one golden finger provides alchemy resources and the other provides technology. Therefore, in this article, it is the greatest possibility for people to cooperate with each other offline.

The unused golden fingers held by Han Li are updated regularly: [Disciple Recruitment System] [Accept any disciple and automatically learn a magical power mastered by the disciple... According to the current system level, a total of three disciples can be accepted, and according to the disciple's recognition of the master, feedback on the magical power will be obtained in proportion! [Wish system] [One chance to make a wish every day, the wish success rate is related to the wish content, the simpler the wish content, the higher the success rate...] [Map system] [Any item can be searched and located within a limited distance... The search range is one thousand miles during the Qi refining period, 10,000 miles during the foundation building period, and 100,000 miles during the pill forming period...] [Gu Immortal Tower (rare) )] [Put any spiritual insect into the tower, feed it with the essence of the sun and moon, and assist with the changes in time, it can be refined into Gu... Only the first-level Gu can be refined during the gas refining period, and the second-level Gu can be refined during the foundation building period...] [Empty Hands] [Activate the golden finger to steal any item from the target. The success rate of stealing and the probability of discovery are related to the realm difference between the two parties, and the level of the other party's stored treasures...]

Mediocre

Mortal Chicken Eating Contest😁

It's too poisonous to write Han Li as sexually repressed 😰

Why are the time-travelers in this book either imps or beasts, and there are not many normal people?

This book is very good. Although the character of the protagonist is a bit different from the original work, it is not toxic. I hope the author will write less about the emotional lines. After all, readers are less human than time-travelers (I am awesome when I spend money). No matter how good the writing is, there will always be monsters and monsters to complain about. Finally, regarding the reincarnation system, it is equivalent to the immortal system, which is more powerful than retrospection. You can be reincarnated after death. If the system is upgraded to the point where you can create your own spiritual root talent, Han Li will not be able to do anything.

It's quite interesting. I hope you can continue to work hard.

It's not enough. I've seen too many mortals follow the plot. This kind of thing is more interesting. It's a large-scale chicken-eating game.

It turned out to be the author of Undercover Cultivation of Immortality, I was too scared to read it! 😅

Come on, author👍 There will be more chapters every day😁

Congratulations to the author for being on the new book ranking list👏

The subject matter of this book is okay, and the story should be as logical as possible. For example, there are too many time-travelers, and everyone's golden finger is different. Some are very ostentatious. They must have been noticed by the big sects and high-level monks. If a high-level monk catches a time-traveler and collects its soul, he will know that the time-traveler and The plot of the entire mortal world. There are so many time-travelers. It is impossible for all of them to be smart and not afraid of death. There must be some cowardly ones who are afraid of death. They will tell the story and let those high-level monks protect them, exposing the identity of the time-travelers and spoiling the plot of the mortal world. This fan fiction will be known to the monks in the entire human world. This is the first book, and it doesn't need to be exposed. If there are only one or two time-travelers, it would be reasonable not to expose them. There are too many time-travelers, and if they are not exposed, it would be too deceptive and simply treat the readers as fools. There are many benefits to exposing the plot and time-travelers in the mortal world. As long as you The writing is good. There are so many time-travelers. In each chapter, one time-traveler's golden finger can be used as the climax point, so that each one has a different shining point. You can't write the plot too fast because there are too many time-travelers and there are many different types of golden fingers. You can add all kinds of wonderful plots.

After reading Han Li's selection of exercises, let me give you my opinion. I refer to the classification of Li Huayuan's exercises in the original work. Currently, Han Li's choice of exercises is in the second category, which is the exercises that are quick to practice but less powerful. I don't think they are dominant. Reason: 1. Most of the time-travelers with extraordinary talents and powerful golden fingers will definitely choose the first type of skills that are more powerful but slower in practice (travelers who don't want to fight across realms are not good time-travelers), and are more likely to be violent when fighting against such time-travelers of the same level. The trump card is revealed, and it cannot be killed immediately. It would be bad if the news gets out. It is easier to suffer big losses when encountering simulation and retrospection 2. Practicing the Qingyuan Sword Technique does not cause people to feel too big a problem, and Han Li has already practiced the Qingye Xuan Gong to the foundation building stage before, so the Blood Demon As long as the essence is not being updated, there will be no problem even if you practice Qingyuan Sword Technique. The original book has monks who have practiced to the middle stage of foundation building, and Ye Zhen's strength and talent were originally relatively poor. After twenty years of practice, he may not achieve a breakthrough. There is not much hope for forming pills, so it is better to go directly Practicing the first type of skills, masters who can make talismans, refine weapons, and refine alchemy outside can appear to earn training resources, and can hide their true identity (you must have money and strength to protect it) 3. Han Li here has various one-time gold finger enhancements. I don't believe that his achievements will be lower than those in the original work.

Chapter 42 of the original work says that Han Li has an ordinary appearance, thick eyebrows, big eyes, and clear eyes.

The most suitable technique for holding the sky bottle should be the one that integrates the natal spiritual plant. The human plant is highly bound. The better the spiritual plant/the longer the time, the better the benefits. Awakening the primary spirit body after a hundred years can slightly speed up your cultivation and increase your lifespan by 20. The thousand-year spirit body is upgraded, the physical body/mana recovery power is greatly increased, the spirit plant can be sensed and the grass and tree network can be used to detect the environment. You can call upon the miraculous powers of some of your natal spiritual plants. Awakening magical power xx, consuming lifespan to temporarily improve understanding The spiritual body that has been in existence for ten thousand years is a self-healing body, and can be divided into wood spirit clones with 30% of the strength of the original body in a short period of time. Awakening the supernatural power xx, consuming one's own lifespan and reducing the enemy's lifespan (after refining, it will speed up the interval and power of the catastrophe) The disadvantage is that it is fixed in one place. The spiritual plant itself is fragile and develops slowly. The best spiritual plant is very demanding on the environment and cannot be interrupted during the upgrade. But there is a spiritual plant similar to the Ten-Tailed Sacred Tree, which can be swallowed and transformed into a beast form to run away with. Basically these problems are solved.

Can I submit a character for a guest appearance?

All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!

Don't just change the outline at will just to please a few readers. Good content is the key to attracting readers. Mortals are kings of realms, and Niu's Jiedan was killed by Nascent Soul with a casual blow. If you can write fan fiction, you must be a novice, and novices must have a complete outline. . .

With so many time-travelers and so many cheats, the pleasure of reading the novel will be gone immediately, and all the opportunities of the original plot will be taken away. Then this novel will be similar to a self-abuse novel, but the rhythm of your writing is actually very good. I hope the author can increase the pleasure.

Eight more chapters have been released 👍

But I feel like what he said is reasonable. The original point of view is to compete with the time travelers, and the left and right brains compete with each other. The more unexpected plots, the better. Travelers in the chat group can act as the commentators in Four Wheel Brothers. On the contrary, the plot of accepting aboriginal women into the bridal chamber can be less, and will the introduction of him, the protagonist from another world, lead to trouble? Like Wang Lin in Xian Ni? Fight against Xiao Yan in the sky? Or is it Ye Zhen in Mysterious Resurrection? Will it be funny if Ye Zhen, the real Ye Zhen, meets Han Li, the fake Ye Zhen? It also fulfilled Ye Zhen's dream of cultivating immortality in the mysterious recovery haha ​​😁

Suddenly I had an idea, why do time-travelers always have to time-travel into adults? Can they time-travel into monsters?