The Immortal Maiden I Picked Up Is Kind of Invincible

The writing style is mature, the words are sophisticated, and it seems like a powerful reincarnation. Those who like to read Sister Hua's novels are in luck. As long as the author gives the order, I will immediately promote you as the new flower sister. The writing style is fresh and delicate, and it can make people laugh naturally from time to time. The author slowly calmed down to write, and ignored those who were competing for the title of the heroine and the harem. He stabilized his writing style, and after writing for a long time, he will naturally become his own style. At present, it seems that this is the only one that writes about daily life in the context of Xianxia, ​​and this is the only one that can write about daily life so well. Compared to Sister Hua, daily life is indeed remarkable. The advantage is that the details are abundant, and the character's personality can be reflected in the minutiae of life, which is not necessarily superficial. The shortcoming is that I feel that the author puts too much energy on the words and sentences with "ancient style". It has no impact if I read it quickly, but I am used to reading it sentence by sentence (and as an article based on daily life, the pace is slow). Although it is in the details, it seems a bit dramatic and nondescript. One thing that is better than Hua Jie is the narrative rhythm. After Hua Jie finished writing A Thousand Years, she wrote one book after another. This is quite good. There are priorities for doing things and it doesn't feel cramped. Don't pay too much attention to the description of big plots and big scenes. First, determine the writing style of this book. If these two are good at writing, they can achieve success in anything. Those of you who are just starting to read the book don't have to worry about the battle power collapsing or the writing being off track in the later stages. The heroine's character and combat power settings have already prevented this from happening, so just read with confidence. You can slow down the emotional scenes a little bit. It's not on the shelves yet, so don't rush it. Although it is due to the character of the heroine, it does not feel abrupt. It is indeed interesting to write like this in the early stage, but it will inevitably be weak in the later stage. Because the heroine talks less and has weak social relations, the specific character image of the heroine is somewhat vague and needs to be developed. I will add more plots and write slowly. Only in the later stage will the complete contrast of cuteness become more cute. It would definitely not be long to write the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists alone. My suggestion is to write two more pairs of supporting characters to advance the plot. Very much looking forward to it, gas station (In fact, the overall writing style is more like another flower, golden jasmine, than Sister Hua. I also like to bring a little pet in every book, and they are all elementary school children who can transform into shapes. It has been a long time since I opened a new book. Even the details of the wording are a bit shadowy, but the writing power of describing the female characters and supporting roles is not as high as that of Jasmine, and they are not very similar, but they must be old ones. I don't know which one)

Is it a harem? It's a single heroine. I haven't read any data and don't want to give it.

The writing is very sweet. It seems that the author has never had a girlfriend, and it is impossible to write about someone who has had a girlfriend 😭

"The story about me being adopted in the world of immortality"

I have been looking for books these days. There are many books with single female protagonists, but they are either unfinished in the later stages or the author has problems. For a while, I felt that it was a big starting point and I couldn't find the book. It was only today that I came across this recommended book. I really like it. I just like this kind of book. I just don't know if the author can finish it! I don't know if this is the author's first book, but I started reading it from today on. My personal expectation for the book is to have more daily life, with cultivation and the main plot as auxiliary lines, and less yellow hair plot. Instead of writing about yellow hair, it is better to write about two people encountering other people's various difficulties and troubles, and the two people take action to solve them. In the process, the relationship between the two gradually warms up, and the identity and background of the two people can be foreshadowed bit by bit. I think it would be really good to write it as a road movie. But it's just my personal expectation. I hope the author will work hard. Hey, although the starting point is a big one, with hundreds of books, I think it is not easy to encounter a novel that I like. I will cherish the time of reading this book in the future, and I really hope to finish it

The second half of this introduction feels like a female video. . . . .

Mo Ya had a bad experience with the little medical fairy. When he returned to the room, his anger and desire could not be eliminated. He became cruel and decided to use something that he had worked so hard to obtain. In the garden of the inn, the little medical fairy was walking alone without any warning. Suddenly his eyesight went dark. As a strong man of Dou Zong, he lost consciousness so unnaturally. Mo Ya walked out from behind the rock, picked up the little medical fairy and left in a hurry. In a private courtyard, Mo Ya looked at the perfect woman in front of him, swallowed his saliva, and locked his eyes on the body of the little doctor Xian Miaoman.

Before the character design was established, the heroine was written as a wet nurse. There was no emotional transition between the male and female protagonists in daily life. Instead, there were too many scenes involving pets, especially the little tiger.

It's a bit old-fashioned, and a bit girly. The sweet wife is replaced by the male protagonist, and some details of the body description are too deliberate The first impression is that the amnesia can be picked up by the male protagonist. After the male protagonist's meridians are reshaped by the stone tablet, it is learned that the male protagonist's wearing is beneficial to the female protagonist ❓ I'm not sure if it's wearing, but the so-called complete rule should be wearing it Xiaobai uh uh uh uh, to be honest, I can't accept bugs, I hope to evolve soon The little tiger is very cute. I rarely see such descriptions. I personally think it is quite novel. It is about practicing walking upright after transformation, eating with chopsticks, etc. After reading so much, I feel that the progress is really slow. Does the author intend to write about daily life? Well, after all, Jasmine is an experienced writer, and the author still has a promising future, come on If, if, the author is really a new writer, he can give a more in-depth look at the aspect of raising children. The audience in this regard is still very stable. To be honest, the emotional portrayal between the male and female protagonists is a bit weak. Maybe the author has his own plans and rhythm, come on It's just a bit of a complaint.

So far, I feel pretty good about it, and there is no story of bitterness and hatred. Overall relaxing, I quite like it