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In the group, I often mentioned that the current portrayal of the protagonist Liu Ah Cheng is my favorite type, elegant and easy-going, decisive in killing, and doing what he can to the best of his ability. His personal ability was obviously too supermodel in the era when superstitions and enhancers were prevalent in the aristocratic family in this book, so much so that it had an extremely severe blow to the mental stability of Liu Bo, a second-rate hero in the Eastern Jin Dynasty. Liu Bo made many extremely decisive choices, at least in line with most of the trends of the times. Under the "micro-management" of the protagonist, an extremely cruel and absurd comedy effect was produced. I will share it with you here and welcome free discussion. Speaking of Liu Bo in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, we have to start with his origins. His family was a typical "royalist". His grandfather Liu Wei, together with his political ally Diao Xie, were the ministers whom Sima Rui relied on in the early Eastern Jin Dynasty. From the official position to the censor Zhongcheng, he and Shangshu Ling Diao and Xie jointly implemented the "Political Policy", upholding the superior and suppressing the inferior, suppressing the powerful, and competing with the political forces of the major Jiangdong families headed by Wang Dao Wang Dun. This political line led to their poor reputation in the Jiankang gentry circle, and they were demoted as "City Foxes and Social Rats". The result was very bad. The two men were not on the right track. While they were suppressing Wang Dao, the representative of the powerful family, they were also suppressing and seizing power from Zu Ti, the leader of the refugee commander in the north. This caused the north to become centrifugal. Zu Ti, the "suppressor" of Wang Dun's mutiny, resigned sadly. Wang Dun saw that the time was right and attacked Jiankang in the name of crusading against Liu Wei and Qingjun. Zhou Zha, the garrison of Stone City who was guarding the gate of Jiankang City, directly surrendered the city to Wang Dun. Liu Wei and Diao Xie, who were stationed in Jincheng, led troops to rescue, but were defeated by Wang Dun who was encircling the area for reinforcements. After the defeat, Emperor Yuan of Jin sent troops and horses to protect the two of them and fled Jiankang. From then on, Liu Wei served as the Hou Zhao of the Northern Hu Dynasty and was taken in by Shi Le. Later, during the civil strife in Hou Zhao, Liu Wei followed Shi Hu's order to attack Shi Sheng, but was defeated by Shi Sheng's subordinate Guo Quan and died in battle at the age of sixty-one. More than twenty years later, Shi Hu died and the north was in chaos. Liu Bo, who was appointed the champion to join the army, took this opportunity to persuade the champion general Wang Qia to go south to the Jin Dynasty and went to the old man Huan to eat. This may seem a bit long-winded, but in order to understand the motivations of many of Liu Bo's "abstract" actions in the book from Liu Bo's own first-person perspective, the background still needs to be explained. First of all, is Liu Bo a nobleman? Yes, and it is genuine, with a clear genealogy and obvious connections. It is completely different from some of the Beiliuzi Qi Taizu who are being blamed. The Pengcheng Liu family is justified. Why don't you go to Jiankang, Kuaiji, and Jiangyin if you have a gentry background? Do you have to come to see Old Man Huan? Because the Eastern Jin Dynasty has developed to this era in the book, the aristocratic family politics have achieved great victory. These southern aristocratic families have dragged down the backbone of the refugee commander, allowed Wang Dun to break Sima Rui's power concentration process, and suppressed Wang Dun's ambition to become emperor, and completely entered the situation of north-south separatism, which has been beautifully displayed in the mountains and rivers. As the grandson of Liu Wei, Liu Bo naturally wanted to "revitalize his family reputation" when he went south this time. As the trigger for the Wang Dun Rebellion in the Jiangzuo clan, and the opposite of the Wang, Zhou and other aristocratic families, the Liu Bo family was the descendants of super-reactionaries in the mainstream view of the Jiankang clan. If they went there, they would only be looked down upon and would not integrate. And although all the officers who joined the army were Qingliu officers, they were still in the military position after all, and they still served in Beihu. In Jiankang's eyes, they were only a little better than the elite soldiers. They couldn't be more filthy. The only thing worthy of praise in the family reputation left by his ancestors was loyalty to the emperor's orders and firm will. If Liu Bo really wanted to start a career, he really had to start with the Governor of Jingzhou like Old Man Huan, who was not limited to his origin, valued his talents, and could also brush up on his military exploits. Okay, the background is explained, now let's experience Liu Bo's first perspective. (Purely a noble perspective, no cheating) Simulation begins You, Liu Bo, are a son of the Liu family in Pengcheng. Your grandfather made great contributions to Sima Rui's ascension to the throne. He was a high-ranking official and well-paid, with power in the government and the public. However, during the reform, he had an enmity with the Wang family of Langya and never fought against Wang Dao and Wang Dun. My brother's grandfather was stabbed in the back by the emperor (Sima Rui refused to kill the Wang clan members in Jiankang City during the Wangdun Rebellion, leaving room for peace), and was forced to flee and became a reactionary that everyone in the Jiangzuo family wanted to beat; while fleeing, he was ambushed by Liu Xia in Huaiyin, and there were only more than 200 people around him when he fled to Hou Zhao; by the time you reach adulthood, your grandfather will have already He died in a war, and his father was not very useful as a county magistrate. Many wars caused his brother Liu Lang to be dispersed. After many years of Shi Hu's brutal rule of human meat barbecue and two-legged sheep, you finally took advantage of the chaos in the country after his death to persuade your general to lead his troops to surrender. Although after the conquest of Shu, the old man Huan's disobedience was known to everyone. , But in view of your family's shabby reputation in Jiangzuo, you can only join him if you want to get ahead. After all, Wang Qia's soldiers will definitely be dispersed. By then, the Liu family will have the ability to protect themselves. They don't have to be like their grandfather, who is hostile to the nobles in the south and driven like oxen by the Jiehu in the north. You have decided that the nobles are too strong and cannot be defeated, so integrate in. Maybe you are also prepared to be loyal to the emperor and stab Huan Wen in the back when he is doing something important, so as to show the Jiangzuo family the family tradition of the Pengcheng Liu family of "loyalty to the emperor and firm will" (which is already the only praiseworthy part). At this time, a spirited young man suddenly appeared from under Huan Wen, and he also called himself the Liu family of Pengcheng. You smiled speechlessly. In the north, there are many anonymous people who pretend to be surnames and deceive. There are more than 200 people in the Beiliu branch of your family, and they are all numerous. If you want to pretend to be a surname, you can still say that you were killed by Liu Xia from Huaiyin. At least it is more realistic and sincere? But this man said that he knew your brother Liu Jili, and it seemed that he was still Jiangzuo's "ancient favorite" under the old man Huan, and the personal companion of Xi Chao, the popular fried chicken. Even when beating a dog, it depends on the owner. You went back to the south with the intention of integrating into the aristocratic family, and you had no intention of going against the Kuaiji gang. You tolerated it without getting angry, and just shook off this man's hand. As expected, the guy behind him did a job that was only in name of pure and dirty. None of his subordinates were willing to travel far away. However, he did not feel any trouble at all when he went on a business trip at his own expense. The reputation he gained was half absurd and half dirty, which was unsightly. Years later, this man actually took matters into his own hands and received a project to adapt Wang Qia's army from Old Man Huan. This is putting his hand in your bowl. You have been in the north for twenty years, and you know very well that if you want to protect your family in troubled times, you have no armor. Shelter is like duckweed in the wind. This imposter's surname is so messy, it is simply destroying the lifeblood of Liu Bo - there is so little flesh and blood left in the clan, how can it be caused by you, a Northern wandering prodigal who is greedy for power and hasty? (Liu Bo's grandfather was greedy for power and advanced aggressively, ruining the good situation in the early years of the Eastern Jin Dynasty. He probably taught his descendants to be prudent first. Later, Liu Bo did not do his best to rescue and preserve his strength when Fu Jian attacked Xiangyang. This may have been influenced by these stories.) What's funny is that he also brought an unsealed one. Xin, his younger brother Liu Lang used his own experience with that person to persuade him not to underestimate this Beiliu disciple. What a joke, what about killing tigers, being a middleman between Tianshi Dao and the Xie family to get a career, what kind of world-famous foreman, Liu Jili, the dignified Pengcheng Liu family, has been reduced to the point where he still needs to be grateful for doing such dirty work? In terms of bravery and change, could he be more unexpected and more capable than those refugee commanders under Zu Ti? You've been here for several days and haven't even met Wang Qia a few times. You didn't want to get involved in this muddy water, so you went to see the old man Huan under the guise of Wang Qia's transfer. At this meeting, the old man asked you with a smile. This man is much more cruel than Wang Dun. He saw your plan at a glance and asked you directly how long it will take for you to control Wang Qia's army? After you gave the date, he directly asked you, Jiankang or Jingzhou, which one do you choose? This is going to end your life. You came back to revitalize the family's reputation, to use military power to become a second- or third-rate family. If you become a thief, your grandfather's "loyalty to the emperor's orders and firm will" will not even be able to retain the last family reputation. You will only be greedy for military power and capricious. Besides, will old man Huan be victorious? Not necessarily! If you choose Jiankang, your future will be lost, if you choose Old Man Huan, your family tree will be lost! After thinking about it, your own career is still incomparable to Pengcheng Liu's family reputation. You and the old man Huan have broken up. Old man Huan is indeed stronger than Wang Dun, and more domineering. He started telling you ghost stories directly. Wang Qia's army has been recruited by Beiliuzi within ten days of your arrival, and more than a thousand soldiers under Zhang Yu have been added. Who the hell believes this? It's obvious that Old Man Huan is planning to rebel and attack. The last members of your Liu family are in the city and they must be rescued! (Let me give you my personal opinion here. I think Liu Bo felt that the old man Huan was fooling him, and his decisive action of riding alone to rescue his family was very "Northern Dynasties style". He should have a lot of advanced survival experience in troubled times, so he should not laugh at him) Conclusion On the way to the rescue, they met champion general Deng Xia and his old boss Wang Qia, and something even more terrifying happened - the ghost story came true. That Beiliuzi really took over Wang Qia's army and horses in only ten days, and he still had enough energy to deceive Zhang Yu's thousands of people. Old Tou Huan's family members all regard him as a subordinate, and you, because you ended up with Old Tou Huan at the wrong time, your future in Jingzhou has been ruined. When you were devastated and preparing to flee Jingzhou and rush to Jiankang, the "ancient love" of Jiangzuo, the first-class family, and the heart of old Tou Huan, Xi Jinbin came, pressed your head and asked you to apologize to that person, saying that the future of the Liu family in Pengcheng should lie with this Beiliuzi who appeared out of nowhere. Ah, who killed me, and who did I kill? You are the hope of the Liu family in Pengcheng, so what the hell am I? (Li Huowang of the Eastern Jin Dynasty was born) Grandpa, I can't tell the difference, I really can't tell the difference! And you are not a person who cannot recognize people. This person, no, it is Liu Cheng now. He is from a humble background, dares to do things, is flexible in his methods, does not stick to trivial matters, is extremely good at dancing, shows both grace and power, and is decisive in killing. There is no such person in Jiangzuo, but there is in the north--grandfather told you that Shi Le, the founding emperor of the Later Zhao Dynasty, was also such a person. Now, "Little Shi Le" in Jingzhou is deeply afraid of you (and will not meet you). Simulation ends So, Liu Bo's mental state is good enough to be able to apologize to Ah Cheng without going crazy. Here are my personal thoughts and interpretations, shared with everyone for fun.

The last book review was obviously a bit too wordy, so today we'll start with the title of Mr. Dan's book. In the book, it is extended that the outline is empty. This is almost the fundamental political policy of Liu Cheng. He will never have any interference with the Jiankang clan. He will use the power of the southern old man Huan to go public and create a political vacuum belt from the north. He will reform the system, establish etiquette, and then spread to the north and the south to reshape peace. And such an absolute minority political logic inevitably requires Liu Cheng to thoroughly implement the purity of "putting myself first" in politics (mixing servants of the Xi family and Xie family together for holiday team building during the New Year, wooing middle-level officers, uniting his "clan", and training Liu's personality , constantly adding burdens to A Hu and Ji Li) So far, in addition to objectively being the leather bag man of Old Man Huan and Xi Jibin, everything else has been moving forward according to his own subjective wishes. He likes to take the initiative, and even if he advances history, he must follow his own rhythm. What does this have to do with whether or not to marry Xie Daoyun? Now that the relationship is over, it's not that I'm tired of Xie Yongxu's talent or the emotionally-draining plot. In this aspect, we still have to start with the political ethics coldly. What do you call your Beiliuzi, Banzhuoguan, of the Liu family in Pengcheng, marrying the Xie family in Chen County? Either they said that you were forced to marry Huan Da Sima through his power, or that you were just a surrogate son-in-law. What can your marriage bring to you? For one thing, the large size of the Xie family will directly affect Liu Acheng's subjective initiative in certain political choices. This is unacceptable. (On the other hand, Wang Ningzhi was appointed as the internal history of Kuaiji without having to do anything after marriage. What a beautiful and clear position, this is called a gap.) Moreover, judging from the current plot, Liu Cheng has already cut himself off from the path of promotion within the Jiankang family system (caiguan worships the capital of Lingshi, so he dares to intimidate the king of Kuaiji, Intimidating and bullying Wang Tanzhi, who is alone in Jiangdong, who knows how domineering he will be in the future if he has soldiers and generals under his command) Xie's resources in the court are not what he urgently needs at the moment. Liu A's staff was given by the old man Huan, and he plunders money at will. If he wants to establish a business in the north, what he urgently needs are large resources and small mouths. Let's take Gao Huan and Shi Le, who were early entrepreneurs, as an example. As the eldest brother, Liu Cheng's top priority is to find a sister-in-law who can support the rear and take good care of his core brothers and family members. He is a wife and family who dare to go to the front line with supplies at critical moments, and a group of wives who can hold the line and not overwhelm the host. Such a candidate does not necessarily have to be the Wuxing Shen family. Many left-behind northern wealthy families are on the candidate list: Qinghe Cui and Fan Yanglu (these two families are rich in pragmatic civil servants), Zhaojun Li, Xingyang Zheng (the owner of the giant Wubao, with many generals and food) and the closest Bohai Gao family. Marriage with these pragmatic wealthy families in the north who have experienced the Wuhu Rebellion, even if some political compromises are made, can generally promote the progress of social atmosphere, and their resources are real. We need soldiers, we need food, we need generals, we need ministers. Xie family? They are already the first-class nobles, and their ultimate ideal is to restore the "beautiful manor economy" that existed in the early Western Jin Dynasty when Shi Chong and Wang Kai fought for wealth and the Jingu Garden was filled with winding water. As long as you, Liu Acheng, dare to borrow the power of the Xie family, then you will have a firm foothold on the front foot, and Xie Wan on the back foot will dare to lead people to take the land circle you laid down and return it to the Beiqiao gentry in Jiankang. You say you want to annex? It doesn't exist. Xie Xuan is also a veteran. Can you try it? There is this kind of wife clan, with Xie An and Xie Wan in literature and Xie Xuan in martial arts. It is simply the promax version of the Lu family. You are Liu Acheng. Do you violate Lu Pheasant's ptsd? Who did you call Jiangshan? The Liu family or the Xie family? Moreover, during the critical period of Liu Ahcheng's identity transformation in the future (from a top wage earner under Old Man Huan to an important general after the Northern Expedition, which is equivalent to the stage when Shi Le became a general and Gao Huan became the governor), he will inevitably have to fight in Jingxiang and Jiankang. A clear political statement was made in the middle - Zun Huan suppressed Sima, and Old Man Huan fought so many times with Xie An for Jia Jiuxi and Xie An. As Old Man Huan's subordinate, your first wife is actually the legitimate daughter of the Xie family. Do you think Old Man Huan dares to let you go to Beijing? Ah? This is simply political suicide! And from the perspective of key political concepts, Xie An disliked Liu Acheng from the beginning. Why? Because for the most prominent families of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, their political ideals have been achieved. The emperor rules from the top, the nobles drink wine in the winding water, the clouds and cranes are idle, they talk about mysteries, they don't care about worldly affairs, and they are dedicated to the Tao. Such days are best for generations to come. And what about Liu Acheng? What he represents is the sonorous sonorous sound of gold and stone that is half of the north and half of the later generations. It is the style of "literature that has led to the decline of eight generations, and the way that has helped the world." It is the style of "writing to carry the Tao, and learning to apply", and the iron blood of "the brave warrior, the prince and the city." He is an exiled man from the north who dares to lead his brothers from the north to change the world's catastrophes of "two-legged sheep and one-dollar man" and "spring swallows return and nest in the trees". This means that the political forces represented by Liu Cheng will definitely break with the Jiankang clan forces headed by Wang Xie. Historically, no matter who gained too much momentum in the Northern Expedition, Jiankang would use the ancestral stunt of holding back logistics, and Xie An was the master of it. If Liu Cheng wanted to establish a stable career in the resource-poor north, he had to figure out how to get independent logistics even if he fell out with Jiankang. This is why Qingxu must have started his career. Shipping, Tianshi Dao had sea ships (during the Sun Enlu Xun Rebellion, they not only transported grain, but also transported food). Where are the soldiers and horses? The Shen family in Wuxing has money and food, and Kuaiji County is the outlet to the sea that can bypass the Jiankang waterway. At that time, as long as one of their own people controls the internal history of Kuaiji, they can create an independent supply line from Wuxing to Kuaiji and then to Qingzhou out of thin air, bypassing Jiankang, and develop and grow calmly. ——So for Acheng, the Shen family and the Xi family are still important. Wang Ningzhi probably won't be able to get the important position of Kuaiji Internal History in the future. To summarize the long story short, Ah Cheng wants to carry out bottom-up reforms, and Xie An wants to be a paper framer. The two are potential political enemies; Ah Cheng is the gold medal red stick under the old man Huan, and he must fully support the boss in Xinhe Liansheng and backdoor listing. He wants to lead his subordinates to establish an independent business in Qingxu without telling the Dajin Corporation. Production, supply and sales channels, sales share are divided equally among everyone (Fubing system), and the Xie family is an important member of the Dajin board of directors, and married to the female head of the Xie family, neither the old man Huan nor the brothers in the entrepreneurial team have good-looking faces, so it has nothing to do with Xie Daoyun's own talent. Her identity is destined to be destined to be related to Liu Acheng. The above are all personal subjective conjectures. If there is any conflict with Mr. Dan's plot, the highest right of interpretation lies with Mr. Dan. Friendly discussion among book friends.

Regardless of whether it is "Book of Jin" or "Shishuo Xinyu", Xie Daoyun's records are nothing more than the following points: 1. Born in the Xie family 2. Yongxue 3. Disliked her husband Wang Ningzhi 4. Talked to Wang Xianzhi to rescue him 5. Killed the enemy with his own hands during Sun En's Rebellion and was captured 6. Linxia Customs To put it bluntly, cutting off her records will not affect any historical context. She did not participate in or influence any important historical events at that time. Most of the records describe her personal image rather than any role she played in family politics. Then why did historians write about her? In fact, it is a private property: The poetry of celebrities is not as good as that of women, their conversational talents are not as good as that of women, and even the guardians of the family (defending the country) are not as courageous as women. Including the portrayal of Xie Daoyun's first encounter with a tiger in this book, Xie's family members were also specially arranged to be beside him, for fear that readers would not understand. To put it romantically, if you write historical novels, write about Xie Daoyun, and write about "The Fall of the Gentlemen", you are talking to the ancients of the Tang Dynasty and smiling at each other. In other words, writing about her is not about the beauty of the Xie family, but about her dissolute, drunken life and death. However, Dandan's wall-to-wall writing has too much stamina, and even nonsense like "Xie Daoyun is a refined egoist" appeared in the comments section. Exquisite self-interest is politically correct in Dajin! Luo Shui and Gao Gui are watching. As for the people in Jiangzuo and Jingzhou mentioned in this book, they are already heroes among people if they have a little public spirit. Compared with those who have personal agendas, the Xie family daughter, who has a bit of catkin poetry, can be said to be "innocent".

After Liu Aqian came back from archery, the plots in these chapters were a bit baffling. It feels like Xie Daoyun is more like the tipping point. Also, is the author happy to see Michelle Bingcheng and other gay memes have a good attitude? It's really too dense in this chapter.

A few days ago, I wanted to write a long review. The reason was that I saw someone in the comment area saying that the recent chapters written by the author were too watery and boring. I thought of this and wanted to defend the author a few words. I think this way, any novel, no matter what the subject matter, has a so-called early development period. After all, there are only a few that are brainless, and this is especially true for historical genres, because serious historical novels are not like other types of novels that are basically decided by the author alone. They must withstand historical research, especially those who read historical novels are basically history buffs, many of whom are professionals. Based on the setting of this article, Liu Acheng, as a time traveler, no matter how he started in his previous life, he will be a refugee in this life. This status is already difficult to survive in troubled times, not to mention that in the Eastern Jin Dynasty, which pays special attention to family status, if you are not a noble family, you are nothing. You can't expect the protagonist to finally reach Jiangzuo alive, copy a few poems and become a celebrity, and then be attracted by the talented woman Xie Daoyun, marry Bai Fumei and reach the pinnacle of life, right? Let's not talk about whether the copied poems can be appreciated by people at that time. Let's talk about why you are among the upper class and celebrities. No one thinks that you are just a person on the side of the road. The so-called family status means one is merit and the other is qualifications. When we meet, we will ask you what merit you have as an official, what merit your ancestors held as an official, and what merit you have. If you don't have anything, then just go and stay wherever you are, without even taking a look. It is true that birth determines everything. Even the Xie family in Chen County was created through the hard work of three generations. Xie Kunxuan became a celebrity, Xie Shang became a commander in Fangzhen, Xie An and Xie Xuan repeatedly made great achievements both internally and externally. You expect the protagonist to be a refugee and rise to great heights when he first arrived. Isn't this a fantasy? I just want to say that you have to be patient when reading, especially since this is a serious historical novel. As long as there are no big jokes, we will read whatever the author writes. After all, male novels start with one million words. According to usual practice, this one should be about three million words. Now it is only three hundred thousand words. One-tenth of the initial period cannot be considered long in any case. Of course, I'm not saying that you can't criticize and make negative comments. After all, everyone spends money, and everyone has their own preference for aesthetics. What I am saying is that before expressing your opinion, please do more research and consider it, consider industry practices, and consider the author's style. After all, you are reading serious high-end historical online articles, and it is not a pleasant thing to make arbitrary judgments at any time and anywhere. After all, anyone who has been reading for a long time knows that it is very difficult for an author to finish a novel from beginning to end without supervising, and it is even more difficult to write a novel well without getting sick and convulsing and feeding the readers shit. The author's bitter suffering and even all kinds of suffering are very difficult for us readers. What we experience physically and mentally is nothing more than being more patient, more rational, and more tolerant. This is the greatest support that we, as readers, can give to the author. This applies to serialized novels written by any author, especially in the early stages of a novel's serialization, when the author needs support the most. I just want to say that I hope everyone can be a rational and patient high-quality book lover. This will not only be beneficial to yourself, but also be of great benefit to the author and our online literary circle. After all, how difficult and gratifying it is to find an author in the vast ocean who can stably produce novels that suit your taste in all aspects, regardless of subject matter, type, language style, etc. What if the author is so unconfident that his performance becomes abnormal or even stops writing? What should we see? I've said a lot, but I didn't post it a few days ago because I was afraid of being said to be ignorant, and I was also a little dissatisfied with the plot, because no matter what I did before, it was to survive, to survive better and to let others survive. This group of insect masters are really not worthy of the protagonist. I really feel that they are wasting my life and wasting my pen and ink. Fortunately, this plot ended at the right time and I will start my serious career line immediately. Now I don't have to worry about any gossip when I post it. Moreover, today's chapter is really inspired by the current situation. This is the tacit understanding between good authors and good readers.

I heard: The foundation of long-term governance in the world lies in the clear legal system, the path to wisdom, and the unity of the territory; the signs of the country's peril begin when the barbarian winds mix up the summer, the common people are isolated, and the four seas collapse. Nowadays, the Dingzuo of the Jin Dynasty is located on the left side of the Yangtze River. The court and the public enjoy the joy of banquets and gradually forget about the dangers in all directions. However, I carefully observed the current situation and took a deep look at the source of the disaster. There were three hidden worries lurking in the country, which were enough to harm the country, harm the people, and overthrow the clan. If we don't take early measures to save the people, the people will be in trouble and the whole world will be uneasy. I dare to express my sincerity, and I would like to explain it in detail to Your Majesty. First, the Hu Yi Mausoleum in Beishuo was destroyed in the Mid-Xia Dynasty, and the ritual and music mausoleum was late, which was the root of the chaos in the Central Plains. Since Yongjia was in chaos, the Five Barbarians occupied Heshuo, abandoning the millennium-old rituals and music of the sages and practicing the custom of tribal killing. The rule of Rong and Di was based on strength but not on benevolence and righteousness, on conquest but not on education. They used the method of felt and fur to control the people with crowns and belts. They used the system of tribes to disrupt the country of poetry and calligraphy. The common people in the Central Plains were humiliated in their clothes, their harems were in ruins, their work in farming and studying was wasted, and the courtesy of monarchs and ministers was not shown. Hu and Han were on different tracks, customs were different, government orders were inconsistent, and people's hearts were divided. The ruler of the Northern Dynasty relied on armored soldiers to dominate the people, and imposed excessive taxes to consolidate his power. Punishments and rewards were irregular, corvee work was excessive, the powerful were violent, and the head of Guizhou was displaced. The living people are trapped internally by strict laws and externally by wars. They are slaughtered year after year and wars rage year after year. Governing the country of China with alien customs is like a quarrel with each other, with water and fire blocking each other, putting the cart before the horse, and losing all principles and disciplines. Therefore, there will be no long-lasting rule in Heshuo for a hundred years, and all surnames in the Central Plains will not be able to live in peace. This is the most serious problem in the world. Secondly, Jiangdong's clans block the path of virtuous people, and the classes are blocked, which is the beginning of the latent chaos in the South. The Jiangdong aristocratic family relied on their family status to control the court, and relied on their family fortune to be good at clearing important matters. The children of high-ranking families are born to be respected. They have no special honors and are listed in Taiwan Province. A man from a poor family, who has no talent for managing the world and has talent for doing business, is finally trapped by his background and succumbs to the rank and file. He has no way to advance to serve the king, and no place to settle down when he retreats. The imperial court's selection system does not ask about the virtuous and foolish, but first considers the nobles; it does not measure virtue and ability, but only looks at family background. Heroes sink in the fields, mediocrities stand in temples; those who have merit are not rewarded, and those who are talented have no place. The common people are filled with depression and resentment, and the heads of Guizhou are filled with sorrow and sigh. There are barriers between the upper and lower levels, and the monarch and his ministers are separated from each other. If the class is closed, the country will have no vitality, and if justice is destroyed, the world will have thoughts of rebellion. If grudges are accumulated for a long time, chaos will inevitably occur. This is the second hidden worry. Thirdly, the north and south are divided into separate territories, and the nine states are not unified. This is the reason why the world will always be in chaos. In the past, Yu the Great established the Nine Provinces, and China was on the same track. The four seas returned to the center, and all directions were unified. Since the fall of the Central Plains, borders have been divided between north and south, demarcated by rivers, and isolated by rivers and mountains. With Rong and Hu in the north and Jin and Zuo in the south, the two dynasties faced each other and suffered from wars for many years. If the borders are separated, business and travel will be blocked; if the sound and religion are different, the rituals and music will be inconsistent; if the people's hearts are scattered, the world will have no master. The laws of the north and the south are inconsistent with each other, and the political orders and education are inconsistent with each other, and the livelihood of the people is inconsistent with each other. Every year wars begin on the border, the common people are attacked repeatedly, the warehouses are wasted on paying taxes, and the people are tired of conquests and corvees. If a country is divided into two parts, there will be no unified discipline; if the nine states are divided, the foundation of the country will not be solid. There are policemen on horseback peeping into the river outside, and there is the danger of a separatist feudal town inside. If the territory is no longer restored, there will be no real peace for eternity; if the north and the south are not united, there will be no peace in the four seas. This is the third major danger. They are three patients: barbarian customs, disordered etiquette, family clans hiding talents, and territorial disintegration. The three are internal and external to each other, and they harm each other. If the customs of the north confuse the Xia, the rituals and music will collapse; if the scholars and common people are isolated, the people's hearts will be scattered; if the north and the south are separated, the foundation of the country will be shaken. The so-called Yan'an in Jiangzuo today is just a small corner, and it is not the rule of peace in all directions. The government and the public are indulging in the ease of the day and night, forgetting the long-term dangers, not thinking about overcoming shortcomings, and not seeking to be unified. Over time, the northern troubles gradually invaded the river surface, and the internal troubles eventually led to its collapse. I foolishly thought that if I wanted to build public security for all generations, I must clean up the shortcomings accumulated over the past few hundred years, and divided them into three strategies to implement them one by one. The first is to rectify the laws of the Northern Territory, restore the Chinese rituals and music, gradually change the old customs of Rong and Yi, and use the Han system to settle the native people of central China, so that the people of Heshuo can return to the king's status; the second is to break the restrictions of the family and open up the way for poor families to move forward. , Employing people based on their talents, rewarding their merits, clearing up the pent-up anger in the government and the public, and quelling the grievances of injustice in the world; in the end, he reorganizes the armored soldiers, saves national power, and Xu plans the Northern Expedition, regains the old territory of Heluo, unites the north and the south, and unites Jiuzhou. If the disadvantages are not cured, the source of disaster will continue; if the losses are not rectified, peace will be indefinite. It is my wish that Your Majesty will have a far-reaching view of the rise and fall of past dynasties, and a thorough understanding of the changes in the current situation, so as to maintain peace of mind and establish long-term ambitions. Revolutionize the confinement of the class, correct the rituals and music of China, and restore the unity of the nine states. If this is the case, there will be no hidden dangers inside, no strong bandits outside, the people's hearts will be united, and the world will be one family, which will lay the foundation for lasting peace and stability for eternity. I am ignorant of the situation, and my Majesty's Holy Judgment will be fulfilled.

In fact, the storyline in "Fu Han" also has a lot of control over the rhythm, which is a bit jerky. Maybe this is why Afghanistan is not popular but Shaosong is popular. But the difference between Fu Han and Shao Song is that the author's injustice and resentment are about to burst out of the text. By Zhao Jiu, it is a little more gloomy and violent, and is much more restrained and reserved compared to General Wei. The great success of the author's last two books has significantly improved the quality of life, made people calmer and happier, which is a good thing. But Ah🍊 obviously lacks that energy.

In view of the fact that posting under other people's posts in the book club is easy to get comments, I posted it here directly Today at around 11 o'clock, a book friend suddenly posted a post saying that Xie Daoyun's character has collapsed. He listed three reasons. In vernacular, it can be summarized into the following three points 1. Xie Daoyun is a celebrity, the author has written a lot, and readers also like it, so I did not interact with him. The protagonists are not allowed to be together 2. Xie Daoyun's appearance shows the arrogance of the family, hoping to create a desire to suppress before the return of the Dragon King 3. Angry comment section, comment section said it is not a good article, the original poster said Xie Daoyun's behavior belongs to the malignant protagonist and then disappears I will refute them one by one here 1. The first point is correct, But there is no reason for readers to like it, so the characters in the original history must be separated from history. That is not history. It is recommended to turn right and watch Dragon. Each character who has placed the best wishes of Emperor Dan Ling has been forced to have an unknown class/transformation/thinking. The distortion of the characters is really powerful 2. The second point is a bit unclear. It is enough that Xie Daokun has a little bit of courage that is different from that of a rich and noble son. When a tiger meets a tiger, it will move towards it, which comes from Xie Dao Wen's uncompromising and courage when facing thieves in his old age. But you can't rely on the family's spirit. This is a historical area, not a romance area. If you want to get the transformation, it is recommended to turn right <Dianlong). If you want to not seek transformation and just find a fairy couple, then it must be compared with fate. The two are not destined to be together. Why force a match? If you want to see Xie Daowen and the protagonist together, I suggest you watch "Shangpin Hanshi", which does not involve excessive class. But the combination of the two parties is simply destined. 3. The third point is an unfounded accusation. Xie Daowen is a wave in the history of Wei and Jin Dynasties. His objective existence will produce the right chemical reaction at the right place. When the protagonist encounters the Xie family, should Xie Daochai not appear in order to prevent Xie Daowen from appearing? Now that the character has appeared on the stage, won't the character's personality traits recorded in history books affect or even oppose the protagonist? When modern people travel back to ancient times, isn't it normal for them to have differences in their basic instinctive values? A single sentence about the protagonist being depressed and cowardly means that the meaning of this plot is not understood at all.

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The plot is procrastinating, the characters are not clear, and the main line is unclear. The plot at the beginning is originally a fun story, with cheating all the way, and then the "heroic spirit" will be released later, and finally the world will be conquered. Now you want to be truthful to me and lied to me for hundreds of thousands of words. Now you can't tell me anymore. I don't believe that the Northern Expedition will not lie in the future, and I don't believe that the Northern Expedition will be truthful in the future. The characterization is even worse. Is the protagonist a bit heroic? In the past, it could "protect the poor people in the world and make them happy", but now what is left? Shen Jin is even more of a villain who is arrogant at first but respectful at the end, and the protagonist has to be shy to ask for marriage. For a powerful minister like Huan Wen, let alone a heroic character, he is simply a buffoon. Liu Jili is also waiting to explode. Now that it's written like this, you still need to write some controversial plot. Xie Daoyun, if you don't intend to accept it, don't write it in the first place. Just mention a few words in the background. Will anyone talk about you now? If I don't accept it now, what's the meaning of what I wrote before? Walking readers? The protagonist's marriage is even more nonsense. Without the Shen family, the Northern Expedition would be impossible? It's nothing more than continuing to cheat. Could it be that after struggling for so long, you just want to go back and lick this villain Shen Jin? Even if you marry someone else, it won't be so troublesome. The reason you are rushing to get married now is because you are afraid that the protagonist will marry into a high-ranking family, right?

I just like collecting stamps, famous ministers and generals, beauties and talented women. I also like collecting stamps in historical articles. It doesn't require too much plot, it can be done in one sentence. Xie Daoyun definitely gives me a better impression than the unknown Shen girl. Those who like to collect stamps should line up. I really don't think there is any shame in collecting stamps. What yy, why do you really think of Xie Daoyun as the lover of your dreams? Such words are uncomfortable to watch. If you like stamp collecting, please line up. The author will definitely not accept Xie Daoyun. I want to see how many people like stamp collecting.

The essence of Dandan's books is still refreshing writing, and for refreshing writing, the importance of reasonable and refreshing feeling is far greater than the so-called sense of reality. Many readers are talking about the sense of reality, the fact that Xie is a second-grade high-sect and the protagonist is not worthy of it, the high-sect is naturally opposed to the protagonist, and the protagonist wants to sweep the high-sect into the trash can of history. This is pure nonsense! If you pursue realism, you will not be able to sweep the family into the trash can of history. This is determined by productivity and is not based on the will of the protagonist. Moreover, just writing this to this day, what kind of ugliness can you see in the high school? There are only two words to describe the Gaomen I saw, and that is kindness! Isn't it kind of Xie An to write a letter of recommendation to the protagonist? Isn't it kind of Xi Chao to treat the protagonist as his half-brother? Isn't it kind of Wang Xizhi's calligraphy to be kept privately by the protagonist and not say anything more about it? Isn't it kind of Huan Wen to give the protagonist a high position comparable to Qingliu? Isn't it kind of Wang Tanzhi to be treated like a cushion by the protagonist? The protagonist ridiculed himself in public. Sima Yu didn't stuff the protagonist with horse dung. Isn't that kind? Why don't you talk about reality at this time? Because I think this is a cool novel, it is completely acceptable to give the protagonist certain preferential treatment. It really doesn't matter if you marry Shen or Xie, there is only one thing that makes me personally dissatisfied: Shuangwen is not happy. The problem with Shuangwen's dissatisfaction lies in the positioning of Shen. Why is the Shen family of the local wealthy family who is acting like a buffoon worthy of the protagonist's repeated pulling? Could it be that Shen Jin is some kind of little Zhuge from the Eastern Jin Dynasty? Shen even had to be given a position in the wife family and tied to the ship. Now it seems that Shen can live without the protagonist, but the protagonist cannot live without Shen. What kind of dog-licking literature? ! Personally, I have no special thoughts about Xie Daoyun. I feel free to marry him or not. In my opinion, leaving the two allusions of Yongxue and Tianliang Wanglang in history is already the greatest compliment to her. However, it is really hard to understand that he should get married in advance. I don't know who this malicious intention is towards, or towards some readers? To Xie Daoyun himself? I won't say anything vicious and irrational. I hope Dandan can create well in the future. I also hope that the "strange smell" of the book circle can be dispersed, and some unknown creatures will give you a bigger one sooner or later. After reading the latest chapter, isn't this writing about Gongsun Xun's second role? Why is the image of this protagonist getting closer and closer to Xun in my mind? No wonder it has to be the Shen family. Is this another wealthy man who can conveniently run the logistics department? ? The protagonist is not the real Shan family of Beiliu, nor is he a famous figure in Jiangzuo. He is a pure modern time traveler. Can he really draw his sword so easily?

Many people say that the rhythm is because of Xie Daoyun's marriage, but in fact it is not at all! ! Why is the processing of this chapter so bad? After reading it for a long time, I can only conclude that it is blunt and ugly! ? As for why, it is obvious that the author is angry. Who is he angry with? Are you actually angry with the readers? ? Why do you have to stand up to readers when the heat is rising? Are you a second-rate person? ? Let's talk about the problem first, why is Liu Acheng's eating appearance so ugly! ! Why is there no description at all of this poor woman from the Shen family? ? First of all, many people are unhappy, not with Xie Daoyun, but with Liu Cheng and the daughter of the Shen family. Before Liu Cheng left Jingzhou, the daughter of the Shen family was a concubine. How do you want readers to accept it? I, Liu Acheng, our protagonist, went to Jingzhou, became successful and famous, and then came to lick the Shen family, and turned my concubine into a full wife? Why, is it your daughter from the Shen family who has been promoted step by step? Yes, many people, in fact, do not accept the protagonist licking people, but before I became famous, I could manipulate you, why should I be manipulated by you after I became famous? Did I become famous in vain? Then let's talk about the crotch thing that some people are most concerned about. First of all, who cares whether Xie Daoyun is the heroine or not? What does it have to do with us? To put it bluntly, who doesn't know that Dan's harem is equal to the background board? Who doesn't know that Dan just doesn't like high-class girls, but it's not the author who makes the stock market popular? To put it another way, can't this matter be handled coldly? After a few hundred chapters, the heat is over, who cares who Xie Daoyun marries? You can marry a beggar! ! The author is so easily influenced by readers. At this time when the popularity is exploding, do you have to write about this? Last and most important thing, it is also the real problem with the rhythm of this episode. Many people are actually unhappy with this. In the first few chapters, they dared to influence politics for no reason. You must know that the dog is in Luoyang and a hundred thousand troops are in hand. After saying those words, I still regretted it. Why did Liu Acheng dare to say that he was nothing at this time? Why didn't he talk about reality at this time? I don't know who I am anymore? The problem this time is entirely because the author is a young man and insists on confronting the readers when the heat is rising. Why is the author so easily influenced by the readers? This time it was a small matter, but what about next time? What about next time? Why on earth can realism only be found in the crotch? Do you know how shocked a large number of readers are when they think about it after seeing the dog? At the same time, they feel really scared. I can pay for your literary talents, but why should readers pay for the author's personal emotions? That's it, the speech is finished.

Look at the picture, not a cloud reader. Whether it's Shao Song or this book, I've been reading it all the time. To reiterate, I have no right to interfere with the author's freedom of creation. As a reader, I have the right to choose and abandon the book.

Without further ado, let me tell you my recent views. It has been a long time since I discovered that there is a strong sense of class tension in the book. It is highlighted everywhere that Wang Xie and others are not a thing, and high-ranking people are not a good thing. Didn't your protagonist cheat all the way by licking high-ranking people? The aristocratic family is a product of the times. As for the oppression of the peasants, it is precisely the powerful landlords like the Shen family. Otherwise, where do you think the Shen family's wealth comes from? Although the overseas Chinese surnamed Gao Men have an advantage in politics and have cooperated with the Sima family to suppress the local tycoons in Jiangdong, this is not a problem of the Gao Men themselves but a problem of the overseas Chinese. The people around your protagonist are either vested interests or former vested interests excluded from the vested interests. Which one, Liu Hu, Liu Jili or Liu Aqian, wants to revolutionize the world and establish world harmony? Isn't it for the sake of my Liu family to be like Wang Xie one day? Of course Xie Daoyun may not be the heroine, but is Shen really a good match? There are so many overseas Chinese surnames, not to mention the second-class high-ranking families, but what about others? You are from the Nandu gentry. In this era, you gave priority to marrying gentry girls with the surname Qiao, followed by girls from the northern gentry. As a result, you got a powerful daughter from Jiangdong. People who don't know better thought that your dream was to drive the Sima clan and the Qiao clan out of Jiangdong and seize control of Southeast Asia by yourself?

In Zhang Shuo, there are gay men talking about porn every day, which makes me want to vomit. Instead of blowing up with these people, only blow up with the person who wants the protagonist to marry Xie Daoyun? He did not hesitate to tamper with the original process and let Xie Daoyun get married two years early. Is this the opposite logic? Did the Xie family agree to marry early because the Wang family wanted to "celebrate"? What do you think of the Xie family?

I just want to laugh when I see those people in the comment section saying that marrying a daughter of the Xie family is unreasonable. This is an online article. Whether it is reasonable or not is not a matter of the author's few words. You, a time-traveler, can become an emperor in the end even though you have nothing to show for it. You have no golden fingers and only rely on your fortune-telling and some charisma. Is this reasonable? Writing in a refreshing way, but also a bit coy and pretentious from time to time. Put a memorial arch! I hate this kind of half-hearted writing. I will no longer read books by great authors like this in the future, I will only read them to the end without any rhythm. These people have money in their pockets, and writing books no longer puts serving readers as the first priority.

He humbly begged to marry the Shen family's concubine. Is this the same young hero who outsmarted three thousand northern soldiers and spoke loudly to the old man Huan? You've stepped on Xie An's face so many times, why not go one step further and get the Xie's daughter? Why don't you use the majestic power you used to pull the magic stick from the Wang family to get a wife? A good horse never turns back to eat grass, let alone there is grass ahead. It's really a self-abasement. In today's terms, it's a dead end. Stop talking about being heroic

No matter how many times it is said, the author failed to deal with the problem of the heroine well. Who cares about the inappropriateness of marrying Xie Daoyun when reading novels? Isn't it because the author made her look like the heroine and aroused readers' expectations? Now readers' expectations are directly disappointed. There is a real problem with this plot. Since we don't intend to get involved, we can just not mention it later. Now we have to say that someone is married, which is completely disrespectful to the readers who are expecting it.

If you really want to write about heroism, instead of going to the south to lick the nobles, you might as well choose the northern route and fight with the barbarians in the north. If you really care about the people, you might as well save the people who were massacred by the barbarians. Licking Huan Xichen is no different from licking Xie Wang. They all rely on drilling camps. There is no heroism in being a snobbery. To be honest, don't pursue authenticity when writing like this. Liu Yu and Hou Jing are both clear examples of using force to subdue the nobles rather than relying on manipulation. If the author writes Liu Yu's template and marries whoever he wants, who cares? Liu Yu's first wife was an ordinary person, but Hou Jing persuaded the nobles to marry the princess.

Why? Before this, although the protagonist had the idea of ​​wanting to be the master of Wubao, he was still very resilient and motivated. He even traveled here and there for those refugees. He was very disdainful of celebrities from high-end families and thought that there was no need to eat minced meat. But after going to Wuyi Lane, he changed. Those refugees It has become an unnecessary existence, and I don't know why I muddle through and leave, and start to follow the celebrity route 🙂. If I am borrowing a chicken to lay an egg but I still want to take the bottom-up route, that's it. But looking at it, how come I started to be assimilated, and finally turned into what I hate the most? As for having a wife and a harem, it doesn't really matter, but you can't let the protagonist hang out among celebrities, take advantage of others while despising them, and then see no change in the bottom class, then don't mention any heroism, and don't write about "not as catkins are blown by the wind" and "the great shelter of the poor people all over the world is happy".

Whether I marry Xie or Shen, I don't care. But can the author stop being so divisive? On the one hand, I thanked him for his pen and ink at first, but he started to look down on the Shen family. Now I have turned my face and come back to beg for marriage. On the one hand, it is written that the children of the top noble families have the same abilities as ordinary people, on the other hand, marrying a high-ranking girl will become YY 😅