Cyber Family

Return visit. I haven't read much science fiction, so I don't know what the usual routines are. But the beginning of this article is a bit too eager to display professional terms, which makes the reading confusing and difficult to understand. I don't know how to write a fast-paced opening chapter for online articles, but it is said that it is an emotional arousal that has no threshold with readers. It is very taboo to throw out some things that only the author understands, and it is even more taboo to have a lot of people appear at once, so that readers cannot quickly identify and distinguish them. As far as the story is concerned, it is very well thought out. I read one chapter and already felt the richness and rigor of the setting. It would be better if the beginning of the chapter started with simple conflicts and emotions instead of huge conflicts and diverse emotions. In other words, try to write a single line, write less, write simply, move forward quickly, one person, a single scene, the big world, no need to rush to show it, ruin, get rich, turning points, new discoveries, ecstasy, etc.; Instead, a group of people, the big world, cloudy and foggy, can't see it, and then abandon the article...

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