Tokyo: The Villainess Is a National Idol

It's too bland, the plot is mediocre, and the writing is mediocre. After writing more than 70,000 words, I can't even see a plot climax, and why the protagonist gives me a stupid feeling. He does a backflip without knowing anything. Yakuza's reincarnation is really just a setting, and there is nothing to show except the backflip. The writing technique is straightforward, the psychological description of others is quite abrupt, and the rest of the rhetoric is also sparse. The introduction of various related terms is very cumbersome, and there is a sense of alienation written just to throw away the setting.

Not to mention that I did marry by default. After all, this is not the first time I have been disgusted.

Marry, hundreds, single? Marry by default if you don't say anything

The heroine will eventually marry an ordinary man

What was your first reaction when you saw the title, National Idol, Villain, Takaichi Sanae?

Really convinced. On the first day I published the book, I made it clear in the writer's statement in Chapter 2. Why do people who have never read even two chapters of the book always ask boring questions like whether this book is about marriage? Maybe adding tags in the introduction can help people know such boring things without reading the book. But I never thought about polluting my introduction by adding random tags or digressions. I think readers who have read only two chapters can know what kind of book this is. People who are not interested will just quit reading it, while people who are interested will continue to read it and even add it to their collection. So I really didn't expect why people would ask this kind of question from time to time. Now I am posting on Diandian Circle to explain that the heroine will not marry unless she is married. I really hope that no one will ask the heroine of this book whether to marry or not, who has never read even two chapters or even a few chapters.

According to the cultural habits of the islanders, there is such a thing. The plot says that the battle is about to begin. Those with higher purity should fast forward to the Tenchu ​​mold base. Anti-Zhongqi Xia. How many floors can a bag of rice resist The purity of this protagonist is too low. Is he really a stupid righteous man who lives and dies for loyalty? ! Outrageous Idol writing is so embarrassing, I'm so worried

Uh-huh, it also made a group of feudalist warriors anxious.

In fact, the shelf life of idols is really short, so it is a good thing to transform as early as possible 😥 Look at Minami Xiaodiao, who was the muse of the phenomenal girl group back then. Now she is in her 30s and serves as the background for the new group, and fans think she is too old.

The focus of the story is out of focus! You can still see the highlight of the protagonist in the front, but in the later part of the story, the highlight is increasingly buried by the author himself. The story looks like it should be the protagonist, but most of the time the story focuses on the members or other team content. I think it's good that each member is described, but when the team members are the focus, you can't see the core elements of the story that really make people follow it? Especially when a fan stabs a team member, the story goes further and further away. The content depends on the various entanglements and inner struggles of the team members. The story becomes more and more boring. Is the happy plot missing? By this time it was hard for me to keep chasing!