Tokyo: The Villainess Is a National Idol

It's too bland; the plot is bland, and the writing is bland too. I've written over 70,000 words and I still can't see a single plot climax. Also, why does the protagonist give me such a stupid feeling? He doesn't know anything but can do a backflip. The Yakuza reincarnation is just a pure setting; apart from the backflip, there's nothing else to show for it.

It's not that I'm implicitly acknowledging her marriage, after all, it's not the first time I've been disgusted by this.

Marry, hundred, single? Not saying it implies marriage.

My first reaction upon seeing the title: National idol, villain, Sanae Takaichi?

The female lead will eventually marry an ordinary man.

The story loses its focus later on! At the beginning, you can see the protagonist's shining moments, but later on, these highlights are increasingly buried by the author himself. The story should be about the main characters, but most of the time the story focuses on the members or other team members.

Actually, idols have a really short shelf life. It's actually a good thing to transition early. 😥 Look at Minami Kotori from the phenomenal girl group Muse. Now she's over 30 and is being used as a background figure for a new group, and fans are complaining that she looks too old.

I'm truly impressed. I made it clear in the author's remarks in Chapter Two on the very first day of publishing the book. Why do people who haven't even read two chapters of a book ask such pointless questions as whether the book is a marriage proposal? Adding tags to the introduction might make people aware of this kind of trivial matter without even reading the book.

According to the cultural habits of island nations, when the plot is being written, it's bound to turn into a battle. Those with a higher purity level would fast-forward to the scene where a hero from the Tianzhu mold base has to carry a bag of rice up several floors. This protagonist is so naive! Is he really just a stupid, righteous fool who lives and dies for loyalty?! Absurd! I'm so anxious about idol novels giving out this kind of cheat code!

Although the synopsis mentions so many idol groups, most of them are supporting characters or guest appearances; the main character joins an original idol group! It's a bit of a shame.