My Good Disciple, Please Spare Me

The disciple killed him to prevent future trouble, but instead chose to torture himself.

Personally, I think the protagonist is quite reasonable; he's just playing the player's mindset.

The plot is too stiff. Even beginner writers wouldn't dare write it like this.

The themes are quite good, but the author seems to have misunderstood the distinction between primary and secondary elements. The protagonist feels almost superfluous; even a sentence or two about the protagonist in each chapter is considered a lot. It feels like the protagonist isn't a protagonist, and the supporting characters aren't supporting characters either.

What is this writing? It's disgusting.

I don't understand it. It starts with this? What is this nonsense?

Sigh, this book really captivated me when I first discovered it. I stayed up all night to finish it. It wasn't even available yet, so I planned to save it up for a few days before reading it. Later, because I had so many books on my shelf, I couldn't find it when I wanted to continue reading. I was quite upset for two days. Now I've found it, but the author abandoned it... Sigh, it was the first and most captivating book of this genre that I read back then. What a pity.

The writing is too disjointed, with too many scene transitions. Transitions aren't done like that! No other book has this much screen time devoted to them. Even in the classic Harry Potter series, have you ever seen the other two main characters have this much individual screen time? If you removed two-fifths of this book, it wouldn't affect the reading experience or the main plot at all. This is a huge problem!

I actually think it's well-written, and I don't find it uncomfortable at all.

Why do these apprentices always want to kill?