My Good Disciple, Please Spare Me

The apprentice killed him to avoid future troubles, so he insisted on torturing himself

Personally, I think the protagonist is very reasonable. He is just playing with the player's psychology.

The plot is too stiff. Novices don't dare to write anything

The themes are quite good, but the author doesn't seem to understand the distinction between priority and secondary. It feels like the protagonist is really dispensable. There are only one or two sentences about the protagonist's role in each chapter, which is a lot. I feel that the protagonist is not the protagonist, and the supporting role is not a supporting role.

What did you write? It's so disgusting.

I don't understand. This is the paragraph at the beginning. What the hell?

Alas, I was very attracted to this book when I first discovered it. I stayed up late to finish it. It wasn't on the shelves at that time, so I was thinking about saving up for a few days to read it again. Later, when I wanted to read it because there were too many books on the bookshelf, I couldn't find the book. I felt uncomfortable for two days at that time, but now I have found it, but the author is a eunuch. . . Alas, it was the first book on this subject that I read at that time and the one that most attracted me. What a pity.

The writing is too torn, there are too many transitions, that's not how transitions work. No other book has such a long transition plot. The three most classic Harry Potter protagonists. Have you ever seen these three protagonists except Harry, and the other two characters have such a large length of plot? So far, you have written this book, and you have removed two-fifths of the plot, without affecting the viewing experience and the main plot at all. This is a big problem.

I think the writing is pretty good, and I don't feel uncomfortable with it at all.

Why do these disciples always want to kill people?