People in Marvel: but Superman

This reason is too far-fetched

You can tell your level by looking at the profile. Your damn powerful ability can only be used to escape. It's nonsense to write like this. You can see it yourself.

I've only read the first three chapters and can't stand it anymore. The America in the author's writing is probably the America in Yilin.

By the way, one thing comes to mind. Marvel has DC, and Superman has a very high status in the hearts of Americans. The protagonist's spaceship was taken away by Snake and Shield. Will they think of anything when they see the S on the spaceship?🤭

When you know that you are a superman, even if you don't deliberately bask in the sun. At least he has half the power of Superman when he officially debuted. This kind of power is enough to conquer the United States alone. The result is still so submissive, with the outrageous reason of being kind. Are you writing about time-travelers or those diode superheroes in American comics?

I've read it several times, and I'm more interested in looking for Superman stories, but when I look at his profile, isn't this just a fucking dog licker?

If Superman does not rely on super intelligence or super strength to solve problems, then what else is there to see? It is nothing more than the protagonist of ancient urban novels wearing a Superman skin. He is said to be in good health, but throughout the whole story he is as hard as a eunuch.

That's outrageous. You took the initiative to seal your own brain. Why do you plan to play without a brain? This is an American comic. Do you think you are awesome?

Writing a time-traveler with a split personality is truly worthy of the author! Severe physical and mental discomfort, this superman probably came from female videos

I am Shen Nong, and I don't recommend it to people with low poison resistance. I couldn't stand it after reading three or four chapters at a time. Things that could have never happened happened forcefully, and they were all scattered.

Superman shutting down his super brain... This is the least funny joke I've ever heard and it was a waste of five of my precious minutes.

The writing style is too childish, just like reading a fairy tale. The protagonist is in a lot of trouble, and there is a fight between demons and angels in his mind😅😅😅😅. He can't hold back anymore, and he is so squirming.

It's understandable to close the super brain. After all, no one really has a super brain, so it's understandable that you can't write such a plot direction. But while you were writing about the psychological changes of little angels and little devils fighting, I really couldn't bear it 🤦‍♂️. You also especially like to write this kind of thing when female characters come out to engage in emotional scenes. What you wrote is Superman, not Tom Cat, and the talkative Superman will only make people feel like Jim Carrey...

You might as well write that you are a Vikrum person, The abilities of the Starmen are as follows↓ Able to fly or migrate at faster than the speed of light in the universe. Almighty Man Nolan spent 7 days across 65 million light-years, which is equivalent to 3.39 Billion times the speed of light. Inside the planet, in order to protect the environment and human beings, the speed will be suppressed, and the flying speed is 10 times the speed of sound+. During the battle, he was instantly accelerated to 2000 times the speed of sound, which is equivalent to 700 kilometers per second. Super strength, the official setting of Almighty Man is billions of tons. Nolan and Mark both pushed an asteroid the size of Texas. Nolan pushed the moon back to its own orbit. Later in the comic, Mark pushed the earth to adjust its rotation axis. The man of steel can survive in the core of stars and penetrate planets to achieve star destruction. He can easily face nuclear explosions and achieve achievements: the man who walked out of the nuclear explosion is immune to viruses, bacteria, and toxins known in the universe. The royal bloodline can even recover from natural disaster viruses. Super endurance, relying on the oxygen stored in the lungs to maintain flight for several weeks. In an oxygen-free state, such as in space, the stored oxygen can be used to fight fiercely for several hours, and can carry out fierce battles for days or even weeks without interruption. During the Star Wars, Star warriors often need to destroy multiple planets in a row without resting in the middle. Long lifespan, thousands of years of life, there are currently no Stars who die of old age, and aging is slowed down in adulthood to maintain peak condition. Self-healing power, open The disembowelment will recover within a few days. The resistance to energy is very high. Lasers, plasma cannons, nuclear explosions, and battleship main guns are all fine, but the resistance to magic energy is uncertain. There is no biological stance, but it can be lifted. Buildings, cruise ships, pushing asteroids instead of passing through them like nails, The dominant gene, no matter what kind of alien creature is the offspring, the V-star gene is absolutely dominant, and it will awaken the V-star bloodline and ensure that the V-star people Their genes will not be diluted by mixed blood. For example, Almighty Man Nolan and an alien creature similar to the Mantis gave birth to a purple-skinned humanoid baby Oliver, who awakened the superpowers of the Star at the age of 1, and Mark and Anissa's son Marky also awakened The superpowers of Weixing, The most important thing is that Weixing people do not have super brains🙂

This article is not about American comics, but about Yilin. I wonder if the author's daughter's red leather shoes are beautiful.

By skipping, I have already ignored many poisonous points, but because I didn't jump fast enough, I still saw logical problems that were unacceptable to me. The original text of Chapter 7 tells you that there is a "Superman" comic in this world. The protagonist happens to be named Clark, and he just happened to land from an alien spaceship. A bunch of unreasonable bugs appeared in the previous performance in an instant. (I originally imagined that the parallel universe set by the author of hypnosis does not exist in DC comics. The author had to jump out and rub my IQ hard)

It's hard to break down from the beginning. A person who has not joined society and is reborn as a superman is still confused and has left and right brains fighting each other to force him to become a superman. Past and present lives are superimposed on this life. Even if he has not experienced wind and rain, he will be washed away by time. The longer he lives and sees different scenery, his mentality will change. It is normal to make leaps and bounds. This is completely like a child who has not grown up. Then he actively sealed the super brain and acted as a nanny in the plot 😥

If you can accept Superman sealing off his super brain, you should still be able to watch it.

If you are not a native of the motherland, you are also a superman,,, I think 🤮

I had endured it before, but when I saw that Superman was written as a little loser, it was so explosive that I died of poison and slipped away.

Some people said in the comment area that the protagonist is submissive, doesn't know how to use superhuman powers, and is too stupid to act like a normal person. I think this person is right, the protagonist is stupid, or it may be the author's brain, he just wants to create a stupid protagonist! Some people still say Ancient One, and some people also say, are you going to do evil? Are you going to be a gangster? Do you want to be a native of the motherland? I have superhuman strength. If I don't be a kind person, will I do evil? The world is not black and white. I am neutral and chaotic. Am I wrong? Or am I wrong to be neutral and lawful? Do you have to be a fool like the original Superman? Can't you just be a normal person? Can't you be a normal person if you have power? Or do you have to do evil?

The words are too childish The advantage is probably that the arrangement is better and the character CP is well arranged The disadvantage is that the writing is childish. I don't even know if I should continue reading.

If different timelines are mixed together, many readers will be confused and unable to understand. If this continues, many people will abandon the book. It is best to write stories with different timelines separately, do not repeat them in the same chapter, and the titles should be clearly marked. Give the timelines in the book a number. Just like American comics, they do it for a reason.

With greater ability comes less responsibility? It seems to be about anti-heroes, forget it, let's go.

Everything else is easy to say, but it's hard to read whether the typos can be corrected.

Water, too watery, what is this chapter talking about?

After reading it, the most unacceptable thing is that Ben Parker knows about SHIELD, an organization that has been secretive before it debuted. How can an ordinary person who has been a soldier know about it? If this is the case, why is this organization hiding something? If the plot setting is that the shield in this world was not hidden from the beginning, that would be another matter. If not, I can only say that this is a serious plot bug. It is a forced setting in order to prevent the protagonist in his infancy from being taken away.

Is this introduction updated? Are you serious...?

Recommendation (from Demon Boy to Almighty Superman)

What are you doing? It's over like this. It's a mess.