
Star Wars: Scavenging Found the Hyperion
星球大战:拾荒捡到休伯利安号
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- Completed
- Length
- 676k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Interstellar Civilization
- Updated
- 7mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Uh, author, are you confusing the Hammerhead-class cruiser with the Hammerhead-class frigate?
The Hammerhead-class cruiser is indeed a classic old model that has been used by the Republic for thousands of years. It is 315m, has a hangar, and has a crew of 400 people. But the Hammerhead-class frigate is a new product that only appeared at the end of the Clone Wars. How can a light frigate over a hundred meters tall fit in a hangar? At most, a few can be connected to the interface. Although they are from the same manufacturer and have the same characteristics, they are not the same ship.
Are there other SC technologies? In fact, it can only be said that SC Tyranids have their own advantages over Star Wars. Most of them are flexibility and modularity with low logistical pressure. SC ships cannot compete with Star Wars ships in terms of output and size in large-scale battles. (Of course, you have to talk about the energy-producing protoss ark ship, pretend I didn't mention it) It's more true that the Mandalorians are divided between mercenaries and pirates as mentioned in the introduction. The title is very interesting, I hope the author will work hard.
The more you write, the less interesting it becomes. The protagonist sacrifices the lives of his own troops for a meaningless rescue. He should destroy the planet directly instead of saving the people who sacrificed his own troops in vain. Why don't you write it slowly? Also, what you said before and after is a bit contradictory. In the first place, you said that you did not intend to sacrifice your own soldiers and clan, but in the second, you planned to save this meaningless planet.
Rough writing technique
I think this novel has a lot of potential, from the selection of materials to the starting point of the story and the origin of the protagonist, but the writing technique is too rough. If the form of good writing is like the graceful and smooth ups and downs of waves, the writing technique of this novel is like a square waveform. The dialogue has almost no embellishments and is too colloquial. It is a bit like listening to a super-technical man talking. It is great to be straightforward and express the key points directly. However, this is a novel, and it does not have to be like a super literary youth. But the literary youth degree is close to 0%. It is really a bit overwhelming. The portrayal of the characters feels like there is no ups and downs, like a repeater, and the personalities of each character are not well expressed.
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It looks pretty good. Hyperion is a complete character after playing Late Amon. I haven't seen much Star Wars and there's nothing to say about the plot. I can only say that it looks good. There are a few ideas about StarCraft that the author can see if they are useful. First of all, there is the issue about Hyperion. Compared with Star Wars, the only shortcoming is that there is no normal shield, and the deflection position will not be very effective here. The adjutant can be modified to install a Star Wars shield while retaining his stance, as well as other modifications. (There is also a very fanciful idea, which is to modify it as unmanned as possible, use the extra space to thicken the armor, increase the battery capacity, and reduce the number of routes that can be taken by jumping gangs. After all, the intelligent adjutant given by Uncle Renault cannot be wasted) Then there is the issue of subordinates. I hope it is best to use clone subordinates from the interstellar side. The main focus is the loyalty of knowing everything. Finally, regarding the protagonist, you can learn from the interstellar psychic technology 😏, whether it is human or protoss, there are still many interesting things.
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Come out! 😡😡😡😡
This book reminds me of the one next door where the main character traveled through time and became a clone of Starkiller, and the heroine was Bugs.
Hyperion's strength varied greatly in different periods.
It is strong because it uses Protoss technology and Zerg biotechnology combined with the advantages of humans. I have to say that Stetman has something.
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If you don't kill the boss of the Republic who is expanding the military like the protagonist, think about why Mandalorian was bombed into an oasis city in the Egyptian desert.
Not many people write about Star Wars. I've read a few chapters and it's good. Come on. It has a narrative flavor like a Western novel. Also, the Western names are too convoluted.
Question: When is this Hyperion from? The late stage and the early stage are completely the same ship, but there is also a big gap between the mid stage and the late stage.
I would rather see Bugs develop in Star Wars
How about the author writes a story about the Warhammer Planet Governor taking his ball and traveling to Star Wars to join the Galactic Parliament?
Outrageous, not even a full stop
After writing so much, I really don't know what the protagonist's ultimate goal is. The plot has always been watery and has no plot of its own.
There are very few good works on The Mandalorian. I hope I can dominate one side like the Book of Boba Fett and get the benefits of both sides. Don't be a ranger or a gangster.
Not updated?
Or are you waiting for the 12 o'clock operation to be put on the shelves? I'm also putting it on the shelves today.
StarCraft's divine technology can be used to deal with shields, and then we can miniaturize the technology of the Star Wars universe and integrate it into missiles using the idea of technological development to engage in ultra-light range air combat with these dogfighters. Otherwise, you can integrate technology with the protagonist's technological superpower ability.
I still want to read the novel about the Zerg Lord in the Star Wars world.
I'm currently watching The Mandalorian, okay?
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The mechanical insect swarm is a bit outrageous
Machines and psychic powers. Able to directly control the mechanical insect swarm with psychic energy.