From Dungeons & Dragons to Total War: Faerun

The plot is a little unclear. I personally came in after reading the introduction. According to the introduction, the plot is that the protagonist relies on the Bode system to develop the territory, research magic, expand economic armaments, aristocratic power, etc. The first ten chapters personally feel that it is quite good, but I learned from the protagonist that there is a behind-the-scenes story. The gangster pays money to hire a bandit to catch him, but something goes wrong at the beginning. It is known in the plot that a bandit leader has escaped and may go to the gangster behind the scenes to collect money and run away. The protagonist is very anxious and prepares to hurry up with a few guards to catch the gangster, so the maid acts coquettishly and sheds tears before taking the maid with him? On the way, were you still looking at the mini map slowly, looking for packages and relics? After using a few magic guards, I was shocked and sighed. What did the maid do on the road? Thank you for your hard work. Wipe away the sweat😓The protagonist and the maid are all lustful and happy when they are next to each other. They lament the benefits of medieval nobility. There is really no need to write like this. As long as you can reduce the various praise and coquettish plots of the maids and guards, I can say that your book is a masterpiece. The other plots are obviously very good, but the dialogue between the characters really lowers the quality.

Chapter 10: Bringing a maid is too discouraging. This is to fight, not for an outing. Why bring an oil bottle with you? The little head is thinking instead of the big head.

Can I say that your emotional line writing is not good? 😐If you can't write well, try not to write, or don't write at all.

Dnd Only when you reach legend can you truly be immortal and random. Otherwise, it would be too dangerous. One second, the birds may be singing and the flowers are fragrant, and the next second, the earth will fall apart and hundreds of kilometers will be wiped out.

It was good in the front, but something started to go wrong when he met women. When he arrived in the imperial capital, after completing the academy, all the people in the back were women, and everything was wrong. Is this kid a little excited recently, or is he in an in-depth description of some unspeakable place? If yes, give me a link and I will forgive you, the author; if not, when will you open up new areas and when will I update 😅

Halfway through, it turned into a light novel. It was all about flirting with various girls. The serious teammates were all women, from maids to princesses. It can be seen that author X is depressed...

There's nothing wrong with the plot of the Imperial City, but it's too slow. It only takes about ten chapters at most to purchase supplies and expand contacts. How can it be written continuously for so long? For 30 consecutive chapters, it strays away from the main plot of flirting and falling in love. The reading experience is very poor. The main reason is that the audience is different. Most of the people who read this book should be fans of DND and lord novels. It is unbearable to deviate from the main line of power expansion and battle escalation for a long time. It doesn't matter if the author writes 100 chapters of flirting and falling in love in urban romance.

The content is probably about the protagonist talking about things with two female NPCs It's poisonous, and the poisonous point is about politics and interpersonal relationships. In terms of politics, I won't make too many comments. This thing will stink if it sticks to it. Whether it is written well or not, it will be a stone. My suggestion is not to make it ridiculous or make it funny. Interpersonally, the protagonist is a warlock, and the interpersonal relationship can actually be said to have passed the charm test. But the author wants to write a protagonist with depth. In my opinion, it's like the protagonist says "people must eat and sleep" and the supporting characters are either shocked, moved, or raise their hands to show loyalty. My opinion directly shows that I was charmed by the protagonist. There are also some unexplained behaviors in this book, and some posts also have explanations and complaints. Final suggestion, if you want to read this book, skip those rocks, don't try to taste whether there are chocolate beans in the rocks, and don't torture your brain, it is usually tiring enough

In fact, everything is good, but when the perspective switches to the protagonist and the maid, it feels very awkward. The protagonist talks to the maid too much, and the maid is written in a Japanese different world style.

I really can't bear to see the maid with 8 strength and 13 ag become a monk. The monk strikes with bare hands. Isn't the 8 strength monk just a waste? The 13-Agility rogue can detect, steal, dismantle traps, and pick locks. What can an 8-power monk do?