The Survivor's Manifesto

There are not many creative ideas. The author is still a newbie, right? I have a suggestion for the author. You don't need to write too long. Your writing style and content are only suitable for writing short and medium-sized novels, similar to those published by paper media such as "The Murderer in the White Night" and "Forensic Doctor Qin Ming". Since you have decided not to follow the same route as traditional online articles, then write the personalized content to the extreme. Seven or eight hundred thousand The length of the words is enough, and the essence is concentrated enough. Five or six hundred thousand is enough, and this is also suitable for a series of articles. As the protagonist of the novel, he can keenly detect the explosive points of any inconspicuous things, and dig deeper. There is still a lot of room for creativity in a series of articles.

I can give you a fairy tale for the story, the part about God fascinates me so much😋. But why do you keep writing emotional scenes with the heroine? Every now and then, a warm daily routine of the male and female protagonists is inserted🤗. This is not the point. The point is that I think the author is going in a somewhat orthodox direction of martial arts. Let's not mention that the heroine was raped by her best friend's father. Later, the male protagonist's brothers went to an underground nightclub. Why does the heroine keep being a concubine here? 😅

There is a sense of reality that is rare in online articles, and I am not averse to the first person. Maybe this novel is not the first choice for readers who only pursue emotional climax, but it is very suitable for me.

Niubi, the writing is very good. By the way, where does the author live? How old is he? I will ask. He will not call the police 🙂

No one will read your first person statement. I thought it would start with a supporting character telling a story to introduce the setting, and then the protagonist would appear after a chapter or two. I didn't expect it to be purely a first-person pronoun. I can write up to 100 pictures, but the author has the perseverance.

Rt, I feel like there are so few people here, why don't you guys take a chance? How come I've never seen the author speak before, and the full text is saved and posted on time?

Try your best and squirt qwq

My mental state is extremely poor and I have self-destructive tendencies. It's too depressing and I won't watch anymore.

Finish spreading flowers 🌸, open and close 😁

1. Nie Wen collapsed too quickly. The rapid collapse from a cunning, lively girl to a mentally ill patient who relies on others is not very reasonable. The struggle process is too short, or almost non-existent. What about the relationship with God's choice? You decode it in depth! 2. The root of suffering is economic poverty, and the root of poverty is the social system. Cousin, Huanlele, father, Xiaobin and others all have family problems. Except for Huanlele, which is the cause of the real estate crash, the rest are all attributed to the conflicts between family members. Poverty is the root cause of the intensification of conflicts. Does it have anything to do with God's game of choice? 3. In the face of financial difficulties, some people struggle, some compromise, some fall, and some transfer the pressure to their families. Individuals have personal choices, and there are different results. Similarly, where is God's choice? 4. Under the economic crisis, the pressures of unemployment, job selection, spouse selection, job selection for higher income, schooling, mortgage and car loans are common problems that everyone faces. It is difficult to empathize with them because they are entangled in their own internal friction. 5. The plot seems to be getting further and further away from the game of God. I know you want to write about the different attitudes and choices between the bottom class and the elite, but it seems that God has become a protector of the elite? Playing with the bottom? What is the purpose of the Truth Organization? Why do they object? Are there any conflicts of interest? Looking back at what happened with Li Jianshe earlier, it seems irrelevant. 6. If you really want to write about suffering, the connotation expressed in Kollwitz's paintings can be used as a reference. 7. The most bitter people actually only need a little sweetness. Now the plot is almost all bitter, and everyone is speechless. After all, people have to look forward. It is so bitter and not sweet at all. How can we go down and look down? 8. Finally, the author, the past is in the past, there is no point in struggling. It has completed its historical mission. What is needed now is to look at the front and decide the next step based on the previous step taken in the past. Learn from past mistakes, and use the good things of the past to support the present and future.