The Survivor's Manifesto

The creativity is quite good; is the author still a newcomer? Here's a suggestion: don't write too long. Your writing style and content are only suitable for short to medium-length novels, similar to print publications like *Day and Night* or *Forensic Doctor Qin Ming*. Since you've decided not to follow the same path as traditional online novels, then push your unique content to the extreme.

The story itself is fantastic, especially the parts about the gods 😋. But why do you keep focusing on the romance with the female lead? You keep inserting sweet, everyday moments between the main characters 🤗. That's not the main point, though. The main point is that the author seems to be heading in a more traditional wuxia direction.

It possesses a sense of realism rarely found in online novels, and I don't dislike the first-person perspective. This novel might not be the best choice for readers who only seek emotional climaxes these days, but it suits my taste perfectly.

Awesome! Well written. By the way, where does the author live? How old are you? Just asking, won't call the police? 🙂

Nobody reads first-person narration. I originally thought it would start with a supporting character telling the story and introducing the setting, then the protagonist would appear after a chapter or two. I didn't expect it to be purely first-person. It took the author's perseverance to write 100 chapters.

I tried my best, please be gentle with your criticism qwq

The first oracle the protagonist encounters is Li Jianshe. He Bi was the first to encourage the protagonist to write a book, and he subsequently propelled the plot forward on several occasions. Personally, I feel there are currently two main lines. 1. Li Jianshe—Nie Wen—(Murder Case)—Xiao Dayong—(The earliest known divine plan)—Qin Lang (The earliest known diviner among the main characters)

As mentioned, there seem to be very few people here. Could some experts chime in? Why have I never seen the author speak up? Is the entire draft released at set times?

His mental state is extremely poor, he has self-destructive tendencies, it's too depressing, I'm not watching anymore.

Hooray! 🌸 Time to start reading! 😁