Shoot at the Apex of My Parabola

If you keep the audience in suspense by playing the riddle game, it's unlikely to attract many readers. Waiting for the climax to be released will drive everyone away; even if the writing is excellent, few will read it. Pay attention to the pacing.

What kind of plot is this? It feels like kindergarten play, yet it's made to seem so profound 🙂. I'm dropping it.

The transition during the earlier training session felt a bit petty. If the country truly valued black ball (sports), it wouldn't have simply set up a prison-like management system; it should have resembled a research institute.

I've read almost 40 chapters. All I know is that the black sphere can devour people and might have two layers. That's it. Holy crap, what am I reading? What is all this?

Human nature isn't all that bright, but the system isn't all that dark.

I could tolerate the first five chapters, and I could even manage the tenth, but why is the twentyth chapter still in the same old style? After finishing it, I have no idea what I've read... I mean, some build-up is fine, but this is way too long!

First-person perspective, tons of dialogue, a super riddle-like character. Let whoever wants to watch it watch it.

The author intended to write "Ball Lightning" but ended up writing "Sword Comes".

First-person perspective, I'm outta here! 😓

The author's writing is excellent; they could easily write a physical book, especially the psychological descriptions. However, this book won't be a hit: 1. The protagonist is too conflicted. 2. The author is too "petty" about "sacrifice," which is exactly the same as the "individualistic liberalism" rhetoric of those "Westernized public intellectuals" from years ago.