Spearing Kobolds, Starting with Data Vision

This is not the first time I have seen this book. It has been recommended many times in the recommendation column. I have been complaining for a long time. I just want to talk about it. Chapter 54, I rewarded 2 points. Just to talk about this, I threw a shock bomb and the brains of the big snake on the other side were shaken. You told me that the protagonist who had close contact closed his hearing and it would be fine. I really wanted to laugh, and no one criticized it, so is the protagonist's species human? Author, if you see this, please take the trouble to give me an answer.

As a hunter, you don't know much about the essence of your prey. Western fantasy novels use a lot of dialogue and description methods from martial arts novels. It's too dramatic, you know? It can be seen that you made a lot of references to the Goblin book, but you haven't learned the really addictive part of that book. Although everyone is scolding the author for not updating enough, others have written good details. If you don't improve your study, your grades will definitely fall.

The author feels that he has not found the right direction, writing a Western fantasy background, and the writing style of the entire novel is an Eastern fantasy with a Chinese martial arts style. The writing is not on topic, and it feels like the strange sense of fragmentation like the First People's Hospital in the United States, which is a bit unbearable🤦🏻‍♂️

The writing is average, but it is also clean and neat. Generally refers to the middle between the use of gold hands and combat. The problem is that the point of abandoning the book is that when you kill the digger, you only cut off the ears but don't take the meat. I'm not even talking about the skin of the mouse. The corresponding situation is that the protagonist doesn't even have enough black bread and can't even afford meat. At the beginning of the novel, we meet a rotten wolf. Well, you said rotten wolves eat rotten meat, and the meat is also rotten. I guess you are imitating the anus-picking master hunting dog. Then why can't this rat be eaten? People eat plants, not city sewers...

The female teammate upgraded too quickly. She reached the first level at about the same time as the protagonist, and then she reached the intermediate level at about the same time as the protagonist. You must know that the protagonist started with proficiency, but later it was too slow. The golden finger enhanced, and you can add points. It took many points to upgrade to the intermediate level. Even if you just have proficiency, you can't keep up with the female teammate. It seems that the impression is very bad She is not the protagonist, at least polish it for a year or two, it's too bad

What previous book friends have said is quite accurate. The writing and plot feel good. There are shadows of Goblin and Ascension. However, there are still many small flaws in the details. But after all, it is the author's first book, which is very rare.

It's a test of the waters, can you guys follow up and read it? Please

A very good daily adventure western fantasy novel, steady and smooth, comfortable to read, the writing is not bad, and there are good things to read

You said it borrowed from "Goblin", but I think it borrowed more from "Ascending the Gods; Starting from Dual Careers", the same story of traveling through a coma and waking up to kill a wolf with the system, and then rescued the rich lady halfway.

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