Zhixu!

The writing is too profound

The logic is pretty good, but a little convoluted. The details are in place but there are too many, which makes the plot worse and the narrative rhythm also drags on. However, the characters stand up a bit. Looking back, it seems that you are writing a new system, and you are slowly understanding it without the protagonist knowing anything about it. If you don't forcefully insert a lot of settings, the plot will not be easy to pick up quickly. This is not a cool article, and there is nothing eye-catching at the beginning. Judging from your situation, not many people will read it. I don't know how long you can last.