The Secret Immortal

You can just discard it when you see it on the shelves. The writing on the back is so ugly.

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Come on, the writing is good so far

It's a very nice book, but I don't like the update! The novels I write are different, I like to update them! I wish fellow Taoists to become platinum masters as soon as possible! Come on 👍👍👍

No, are you a refugee? I feel like a gangster who has nothing to do when he is full. The refugees are so hungry that they have no strength. Why do you, a refugee, dare to attack people in the city? Didn't ancient cities and towns have city walls? Shouldn't the refugees be released outside? Whose refugee went directly to the city to cause trouble? Shouldn't those who can become refugees have to flee from far away places? Why is your area in MC? It rains here and there is a desert next to it. People don't have anything to eat to escape their sorrow, so they eat and drink on the road every day, right?

I feel like I'm stuck in a phase right now. The bonds between mortals are gradually diminishing as familiar people die, and the unfolding of the extraordinary world has just begun. Nearly ten chapters have been devoted to describing the struggle with the God of Incense, which personally felt a bit repetitive. These kinds of literary and military judgments are all about the protagonist being a good fairy before being exposed. After being exposed, he will immediately lose his mind and call you a wild god to come and kill him. The protagonist repeatedly works hard and then destroys a county god here and a county god there. Incense God adds a setting where ancient gods can revive themselves without being frozen, which makes up for the discomfort of the protagonist killing good people and good gods. But it always felt out of touch with the previous plot. It lacked the atmosphere of the red dust before, and the fairy flavor was not strong enough. The plot began to go along the line of fighting the conspiracy of the ancient gods, paving the way for the world view of the priesthood, rather than the direction of immortal cultivators and immortal sects. In terms of characters, the author's characters are a bright spot. They have a sense of living people and are not just tools to promote the plot. But these supporting characters that I spent a lot of time describing are almost dead, and I personally can't remember any distinctive new characters. After all, the plot and characters are closely connected, which makes me personally feel that the current plot is losing appeal very quickly. This supporting character will die in this chapter, and that supporting character will die in the next chapter. It's just a waste of time. It is indeed a little uncomfortable to keep up with this kind of book. This is also the first time I read the longevity essay. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more. (The dog head saves your life, don't spray if you don't like it)

Look, although the writing is very smooth, the plot is really cerebral hemorrhage

1. The timeline drags on for too long. All the old people who experienced the well robbery incident are dead, and only the protagonist is still there. Since the development of Songuo Village, the younger generations have gradually become richer in life, so they will not care much about this old grudge. However, the reader's perspective is actually similar to that of the younger generations. As the plot advances to the present, this old grudge is really insignificant compared to the general trend of the world. And who will complete the emotional release feedback after revenge? It's just like completing a task. 2. The first thing to do when building the foundation is not to save Tang Shijun first. Huan'er just said that the killer will arrive in the next two days, and his life is already hanging by a thread. According to the priority, the Song family can't escape there anyway. After saving Tang Shijun, they can just come back and kill them like ants.

The following is my personal opinion. Before Chu Xun broke through the foundation building, he wrote about daily life, plain but stylish, forbearance, revenge, warmth, and separation between life and death. After the revenge, Yinsi was respectful and felt good. But in the later part, he inexplicably became younger and pretended to be a "grandson", which was a bit unhappy, and the author's pace inexplicably accelerated, and even plotted a conspiracy. This is a completely different character design from the previous one (the protagonist slowly walked towards the village chief, and the heroine did not see her enemy destroying her family even until she died, and she is now "rushing" upward). One is Xu Xutujin, and the other is Ambitious As mentioned before, the Yinsi were "canonized" by the imperial court, and the City God was not a simple figure (or not bad at all). If Huan'er later became a City God, then... It feels like the direction has been reversed, and the personality has changed a bit. I don't blame young careerists, but why have you become ambitious in your old age? Also, how can the people of Songguo Village not be familiar with the "village chief" who has always been famous and kind? It's impossible that no one can't see it, right?

The eldest daughter of an official family had to marry a subordinate at all costs.

Something feels wrong in the back.

Because if you save a person who is about to be killed (dying violently), you will be burned by karma. As a cultivator, I casually save an ordinary person's life and still have karma burn me. Am I sure that I am a cultivator? It is too casual to judge that changing one's fate against the will of heaven is too casual. According to this fate logic, death is already certain when it happens, no matter whether it is old age or death. It's not logical to tell someone's fortune even after death. Where is the doctor? Even if the doctor saves people, his karma will be burned, right? Don't talk about the reason why his own destiny cannot be changed if there are immortal cultivators around him. If you write like this, there will be no immortals. They are all fixed and no one can change them. Isn't this the opposite of cultivating immortals?

Just like the occasional raindrops on dry land, the ground is dried out as soon as it gets wet. Her brightest light was to protect Chu Xun, even if he married her out of responsibility. Chu Xun's daily protection and consideration (such as not stopping her even though he knew she was looking for a liar) were just a little bit of sweetness in her hard days. But this sweetness can never cover up the pain of losing a father, the pressure of not being able to have a child, and the backbone-piercing words from the village. She lives a very serious, bold and stubborn life, but this may not be able to cover up the pain on the drum surface that is ready to sing.

Damn, cut it! I also specially selected LV5 authors to look at. It seems unreliable. Can Qidian have a function to block authors?

1. Prices: It is currently known that one acre of fertile land costs 10 taels of silver, and the annual salary of a third-rank official is 230 taels of silver. The county's crowdfunding to build roads and wealthy businessmen and officials collectively raised 10,000 taels, but a two-foot-wide shop in a small town costs 30,000 taels? Is it too outrageous? 2. The main plot is to cultivate and upgrade the spiritual grass. A lifetime of wealth depends on one grass. Normally, this grass cannot be protected too much. As a result, this grass is planted in front of the house, and the protagonist has to go out to plow the fields. Children in the village can see and touch it! I'm really not afraid of pulling it out, and the spiritual grass that blooms and bears fruit for 20 years is too conspicuous. Even fools know it is a good thing Normally, this grass can either be placed in a portable space to replenish nutrients and it will be foolproof, or it can be planted in the deep mountains and old forests and arrange for your pythons to be guarded by foxes.

The writing style is quite good, and it feels like "I Didn't Want to Become an Immortal", but the plot development arrangement is a bit awkward and needs polishing.

Emmm, I don't know what everyone thinks of Anxiu. I don't know if the author wanted to go against the grain and write a female character with an ordinary appearance. If so, the author has indeed succeeded, but I don't want the author to make Anxiu white and beautiful later because of the cultivation of immortality. If that is the case, then why did you set her to have an ordinary appearance? It has come full circle and comes back again. I hope the author will not pretend to be a fool.

Be careful when giving negative reviews. I will settle the score with you in 60 years.

The only thing I like about this book is why it always mentions the matter of revenge. If you wait 19 years for revenge, wouldn't it simply burn people to death? This is also called revenge, and that person will enjoy a lifetime of happiness.

Doesn't the protagonist of Changsheng-ryu practice martial arts? What should I do if someone comes knocking on my door someday?

There is something wrong with this beginning and the push. It was written a few days before it was put on the shelves. Some people also said in the comment area. I thought the author would listen to the advice. Unexpectedly, the writing became more and more complicated after it was put on the shelves. From a chapter of 10,000 words, I knew that the author was making a lot of money and was ready to finish it. Seeing the current word count, I am almost ready to cut it. Oh, what a waste of a beginning.

It's a pity that the two of them died of old age without seeing their revenge. Although the protagonist can take revenge later, it feels meaningless if he didn't see it during his lifetime.

I originally wanted to find a running account to hypnotize, but ended up reading it all night long. Looking forward to the development after the foundation is established, I just hope that after the foundation is established, I don't start ascending to the upper world to kill people and seize treasures, otherwise it will be too boring.

You can run away after reading the free chapter. The rest is full of garbage and it's getting more and more garbage. Don't spend money. It's not worth it.

At least the level must increase with the progress of the task. Every time, it is stuck in the first small level of the big level. It will be impossible to reach a higher level, such as literary judgment. It's totally out of the question

The author is going to start a new book. This book is excellent in the early stages. It is really good to read. But towards the end, I couldn't stand it any longer. It started to change and I couldn't continue writing even if I changed the map. Make a more detailed outline for the next book.

The early stage is really good to watch. The protagonist and Anxiu go from being childhood sweethearts to growing old together. Their relationship is sincere and touching. For the protagonist who is destined to live forever, it is only a few decades, but for Anxiu, an ordinary girl, it is a lifetime of happiness. After Anxiu left and the protagonist relied on magic to rejuvenate his youth, the protagonist as a "human" was no longer there. If you don't want to see him seeking immortality alone, you can just end it.

Damn, I just found out that he was a eunuch, wasting my money

Come on, it can be seen that the author has already tried his best. It is worth ordering.

The early stages are good. There are so many gods and monsters in the back, it's so messed up that I can't stand it anymore. . . . Sure enough, it was cut. . .