Use My Demonic Body to Create a New Heaven

What a crappy book! You actually start charging for it after it's put on the shelf. An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care about reading the book he writes, just throw it out of the bookshelf and never see it again! References

Awesome, I have read so many stories about so-called time travelers returning to their hometowns, and yours is the most exciting. A peerless strongman who has dominated the world for hundreds of years should be the protagonist.

I suggest you don't always treat yourself like a junior. It's a fact that the protagonist is older. It's boring to let others treat you as a junior.

Li Zhao

If there is no subscription data, the author will cut the outline and lie flat! There are no good books to read!

The first twenty chapters are not on the same level as those after. Xiaolou, you have to change your habit of being slow to write books. Although it is a good thing that you get more interesting as you get older, but how do you attract new readers like this?

What I want is this taste. The protagonist has lived for 600+ years and returned home after being killed in another world. It is impossible for him to return to Earth and become a good person. Helping people at the barbecue stall and accepting apprentices can only be because the protagonist wants to do so.

I hope it can be on the level of Tao Li. I couldn't stand the last book until halfway through. Tao Li's writing is really good. She doesn't pretend to be pretentious. She is lazy and unrestrained. Justice is not the Virgin. As for the protagonist, it is quite perfect. I hope to see such wonderful works again.

Is there a heroine and an emotional scene? If there is, withdraw it

I grew up reading Xiaolou's books. I didn't expect that in the blink of an eye I would be the same age as Xiaolou. Xiaolou is so generous, please let your little fans go.

As soon as I see the words abyss, devil, and sacrifice, I can't help but think of this. After all, according to the original setting of DND, the abyss has indeed been invading countless worlds.

Because the parallel world is a world that has been corrected by the travelers

Is the main character gay? If not, just withdraw

I feel like it's well written, and old ideas are put into new bottles, but the front is really boring, so just keep it.

It's a cliche upgrade story. It's written in the same way as the Immortal Lord returns to Earth in ancient times. I've seen it too many times before, but I still recommend it. After all, it keeps pace with the times and adds a lot of new things. It's not like some old people who stick to the same routine all their lives.

The author is preparing for tens of thousands of days, brothers, rush forward!

This book has the appearance of becoming a god. I gave you a monthly pass, come on.

In this way, the legendary level 20 is almost equal to the Nascent Soul, the high-level legend is almost equal to the transformed god, the semi-sacred person is equivalent to the transformed god, and the Balor Balrog that just appeared feels like an abyss lord

It's been a long time since I've seen such a clever and logical magic book.

I expressed my feelings with 9 monthly tickets and found that the protagonist is currently a bit passive. Why can people from the outside world travel through the world wall to the protagonist's world at will? Isn't the protagonist searching for souls? If you don't want to go to other people's worlds to fight in the autumn breeze, please enter the Human Emperor Banner.

When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was some red-haired monster 😰😰😰

Xiaolou, I feel like you are just like the last book. You have let yourself go again.

This time the author's general election is about popular themes. Due to the suitability of the book, the lower limit of the book's score is stable. However, novels with the theme of cultivating immortals cannot be fast-paced in nature. Too fast-paced can easily lead to the criticism of constantly upgrading, killing monsters and changing maps, which is the so-called routine writing. It is enough to write books part-time, but there is definitely no way to do it full-time. But I think the author's greatest strength lies in making the human nature in the story clear and vivid, but traditional fantasy cultivation (upgrading to fight monsters) will inhibit this advantage. Because the protagonist generally upgrades much faster than the supporting characters, and it involves changing maps, the supporting characters that are finally created may not be able to keep up with the development rhythm of the plot, and the pull of human nature and the tension of the plot cannot be realized. The best way is to lock the ceiling of strength, and everyone must compete in the same space, so that the author's great strengths can be displayed, the story can be told, and then the glory of human nature can be written. I am still continuing to follow articles, not because of the refreshing feeling of refreshing articles, but because I am curious about what kind of person can change such a situation in such a desperate world (eroded and annexed by the abyss), and what kind of cognition and three views are enough to support such a person to complete such a feat. Of course, readers like me are a minority after all, and more people read books for fun. So it can be seen that the author wrote this book to ensure that he could support his family. The sense of substitution in Xiu Xian Wen is based on reality, that is, cows and horses (consumables), senior cow and horse management (fellow Taoists), and bosses (seniors). At present, there are hundreds of thousands of words, and after two months of updates, the world view has almost been explained. But I personally have very little affection for the anchor points of the protagonist, the identity of the demon cultivator and the returnee (the current highlights). As for the dragon armor at the beginning, it was a feature, but unfortunately it was lost to everyone 😭 and its popularity dropped. The protagonist has not been identified for a long time, and it was only recently (Sword Cultivator!!!) In addition, there is a very important issue of pen and ink distribution. In the previous plot, there was a lot of pen and ink for the group portraits. Is this a strategic issue? Because of the author's rapid update speed, it is impossible to complete the task of cultivating relationships with the characters in the book that we read every day. If the author can write 10,000 words a day or has enough manuscripts saved to publish, then you can write group portraits without worrying about insufficient roles. The most likely problem at present is that the theme of cultivating immortality itself is formulaic. Everyone likes to save it and read it, and then work hard to read the data later. Impatient readers are distracted by different characters in extremely limited updates? Maybe some of them have stopped subscribing? What I mean is that if the author chooses a popular theme, then your writing strategy should continue to be adjusted according to the popular theme. Otherwise, you will not get positive feedback and you will feel uncomfortable. If it is difficult to increase the update speed, then you have to make a choice, either spend time accumulating manuscripts, or sacrifice group portraits, a one-person show for the protagonist, and facial makeup for the supporting roles, and use the upgrade system and differentiation of the world view to attract viewers. The final additional point that needs to be added is that the author greatly wants to create a sense of despair in the end of the world, but it is difficult for us readers to bring it in, even if your writing is excellent. The best knife would be to make us readers completely fall in love with a group of supporting characters (both civilians and warriors), and then let them die in the tide of demons. But this requires ingenious conception of daily writing. After all, Li Zhao will not let people enter his heart easily. But in order not to delay the rhythm of the plot, this part of the content must be updated with a large number of words. Otherwise, readers will criticize you again. Alas, I don't want to see you writing about cultivating immortals in the next book, because cultivating immortals does not require the participation of ordinary people, only the Supreme Being can turn the sky. Cultivation does not require the participation of human nature. It is beneficial to oneself at the expense of the world, and it is enough to plunder resources and ascend. The protagonist must protect the world because of the agreement with his godmother Tiandao. Of course, this is also the reason for his hometown, so this is also the reason why I did not abandon the book. The fairy world is too high and spacey, I still prefer human fireworks 🤓 Looking forward to the following content, Xiaolou Dada

After Xiaolou finishes writing this book, he will write another one similar to Humanity Yongchang. It's fun to read.

The book is good but there are too few

Dog author, can you update it soon?

No heroine? If there is a heroine, she will run away first.

A very good book, I read it in two days! Update faster. It's easy to be seduced by other books! Stop putting it at the bottom of the bookshelf

Pictures are proof

Before I knew it, it was almost fully booked. The work is very good, and the storyline is great. (I am already tired from work and don't want to use my brain)