Don't Use the Small Earth Temple as a God

Name: Don't Use the Small Earth Temple as a God
Author: Anglers in the River

别拿土地庙小不当神

by Anglers in the River (江中垂钓客)

Status: Ongoing
Length: 70k Words
Genre: Cultivation
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Mythic Cultivation
Updated: 7mo ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

Du Feihu traveled through the world of Fuli, became a land, and awakened the magical power of "cultivation through falsehood". It coincided with the collapse of Shinto and the collapse of the country. Above the temple, there is a demon wearing a monkey's head. In the ancient temple, there is a monk who turns into a demon with a single thought. In the countryside, there are gods who bring disaster and are inhumane. Du Feihu, who was originally just trying to keep his family safe, was pushed forward step by step by the fate of this world. [Land] → [Si Chen] → [Zao Lord] →... [Fu Li Shangqing Emperor]. Until the end, Du Feihu saw clearly the destiny of the world, opened the blessed land, looked at the gods and Buddhas in the sky, and said, "I am not talented, so I ask all Taoist friends to quickly go to the ground for peace, so that a towering Taoist fruit can grow." I am the land. I bury my enemies in the soil today and harvest towering Taoist fruits tomorrow. Isn't this reasonable?

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I'm just a eunuch after being recommended. What's the point of reviewing?
6 likes7mo ago
After reading the beginning, I would like to say a few words.
Poor architecture. Weird architecture. You can either cultivate immortality in two realms. Or turn the false into the true. What is your structure? It's too dramatic to travel back to modern times at the beginning of the chapter. Whoever can go back will come back. The setting is very discordant. Also, there is a bug that turns false into true. You can directly ask for the title of invincible in the world. Golden Finger is not suitable for this kind of plot of fighting power and practicing a little bit. Hmm. Just looking at the beginning, we can see so many problems. That's right. The layout of this book is not good, the structure is not good, and the golden finger is confusing. Suggestion: Don't think about the architecture yourself. Don't think about the structure yourself. Don't think about the structure yourself. Use the successful structure directly. Give you an example. You have to write an article about cultivating immortality with normal combat power. "A hexagram of the day, from the sect's servant to the supreme immortal emperor" "The understanding is contrary to the heavens, from the low martial arts master to the ancestor of all heavens" "I established the divine way in the troubled world of demons" This is taken casually, it must be average. Don't set up the structure too much. Don't get too carried away with the details of the plot. Maintain the main world view. Find a golden finger and write down the feeling of pleasure before reading it. First tell Goldfinger about the world view. Golden fingers match the world view. You can write a trend. It's exciting before you watch it, telling readers that the protagonist is going to show off. Then write the loop. Contradiction, plan, cheat, upgrade system, pretense, reaction of supporting characters, influence, connection of contradictions. Infinite nesting dolls. With this feeling, it is basically qualified and it is a normal book. Just a few words. The author can refer to it.
2 likes7mo ago
It feels like the protagonist is going to become Erlang Shen
7mo ago
Why does this feel a bit like the novel by Emperor Xuanwei? That one is also a eunuch
7mo ago