
One Piece: I'm Here to Make Big Moves!
海贼:我要干大事!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 231k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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If you don't eat fruits in Pirates, what are you doing in Pirates? Are you playing?
Playing with Aizen's stalk, but it doesn't look like him at all without the fruit, and his behavior is not like Aizen's. He is just a time traveler wearing Aizen's skin.
Chapter 12 is so nonsense
Author, you don't really think that the navy in One Piece is just for catching pirates I also want to mobilize the franchise countries to catch pirates Pirates threaten the country, the country pays heavenly gold (tax), the world government allocates heavenly gold and uses it to restrict the navy, and the navy sends troops to protect the country So the world government emphasizes balance every day, which is to rely on heavy taxes to exploit various countries so that they have no ability to resist the pirate navy As for catching pirates? If the pirates are not strong enough, the Five Old Stars will even arrange for the Shichibukai to be legal pirates If there is no threat from pirates, how can these countries be willing to squeeze themselves into paying heavy taxes?
It's a very strange plot. I used Tiger to test whether the plot would change. In the end, I beat him and let him go. I let him encounter the navy and was seriously injured before rescuing him. The series of actions of the protagonist can only be said to be very deliberate and ineffective by the author.
I'm not optimistic about this one. Aizen is very good as a villain, but as a protagonist, I might as well forget it. Not to mention not adapting to the current trend, but still feeling aggrieved
If you write too much about politics and ideas, it will look too long-winded. For One Piece, you should focus on combat and plot.
In fact, being less serious may be more in line with your style.
Just have an outline, and add jokes and fun at the end to enrich the characters. In fact, DC's Knights was really good at the beginning, but in the later period, too much emphasis on the grand narrative made it feel like it was done for the sake of doing it. Don't pay too much attention to the grand narrative. Sometimes countless jokes and fun are the motivation that keeps us watching.
Politics is not about whether you should be killed over a dinner party or whether someone should be killed because of a conflict of stance. It is a matter of life and death. Not being righteous enough is like Duanmu Yanhongmao, who is so righteous that he becomes evil. It's all about the macro narrative and not detailing the details at all.
You practice domineering and I eat the Phantom Beast Natural Devil Fruit. We both have a bright future (even seawater dogs are not afraid).
New book issue
This should be the third book I've written after changing the push mechanism at Qidian. The first two books were original and were a hit. This book returns to the fandom circuit. I will write this book well. I also hope that all the book friends who have collected it will not keep the book if they don't want to. Turn to the latest chapter and read it bit by bit. This thing is so important to me in the new book period. Please, everyone.