The Outcast: One Man's Journey

I don't want to poke the needle in my writing. Is there anything wrong with modern children going to the Republic of China to contribute to the cause of awakening? There is nothing wrong with it. Is it interesting for some critics to make such pointless moans?

Summary: The people do not care about the people, they do not care about the people, they want both. First: If you really can't let go of the hatred of your family and country, then write well and go deeper. What's the difference between writing like this now and those eunuch male protagonists? It won't help if you can only scratch and write. How can the male protagonist affect the overall situation? In a word, do it boldly and leave early There is also the conversation with Lu Guangda. The author is crazily stuffing private goods. I originally thought he was here to strengthen others, but in the end he was talking about combining aliens with technology to create an alien army. What, will you build an alien army of 50,000 and 100,000 to help the country? Are you preparing to end the civil war as soon as possible? Then what? What's the use? You don't dare to write. Doing this will only increase your disgust. The only people who could really influence the country during that period were top talents and cutting-edge technologies. The author was not good at writing and couldn't write. The talents Lu Guangda put in front of him, why don't you talk to others about the power of science and technology, strengthen his ideas, and talk more about the future of the country? You are just rambling with others, are you really not afraid of misleading others? People are entangled and confused Second: The title of your book is "Under One Person". People who are attracted by this title are those who love to watch anime. For comics, you'd be better off, just write a big book about the past events of the Republic of China. It's good to have some core content, but as a fanfic, your battle scenes are a mess. It would be nice to have a big book about the power of science vs. The skills of aliens. Your writing is full of fragmentation. , It's not fun at all, and I especially like to add some explanations and explanations during the battle, and recall it from time to time. Really, if you didn't say it was under one person, I thought I was watching a Naruto anime. It's really stinky and long. Let's condense the battle scenes. There are three chapters, right? This problem really needs to be corrected. As a hot-blooded series, it is really difficult to write bad battle scenes At present, after everyone sees that the male protagonist ends the "Pucheng Incident" (Chapter 1-29, Chapter 30 can be read or not), it can be put aside. After all, the first 29 chapters are still very good and worth a read. The rest will be read after the author makes major changes or after finishing those few plots.

[Magnetic field rotation] is the [original power of the universe] and is the [indispensable] [power] of [thousands of universes]! As long as you can possess and practice it, you can achieve [strengthening the body], [cell reorganization], [matter hardening], [reading thoughts], [matter reorganization], [control of natural phenomena], and even more, it can affect [life], [causality], [fate], [space], and [time]. The [destructive power] of [Magnetic Field Rotation] will gradually increase with the increase of [Strength]. In the early stage, [Break Mountains], [Destroy City], [Destroy Country], in the later stage, [Lu Shen], [Break Sea], [Destroy World], [Explode Star], [Explode Galaxy], and finally the power can [Destroy the Universe] and [Restart the Universe]! The progressive relationship of magnetic field power: bionic superpowers - electric current push - magnetic field rotation Bionic superpowers: falcon's vision, bat's hearing, spider's vibration induction, rattlesnake's heat vision, gecko's electrostatic adsorption, and the advantages of other beasts can be found in these people. Performance of strength: The eyes of a third-level character falcon can see two hundred times more clearly than a normal person; bats have extremely developed hearing, and they can fly freely and accurately capture food at night or in very dim environments; they can sense the target distance based on vibration and identify the target distance. After leaving the target, you can judge the location, speed and direction of the target based on the vibration; things with heat will emit infrared rays, and by receiving infrared rays, you can detect and accurately capture prey in the dark night; you can determine where these small animals are and capture them at once. Therefore, people call the snake's heat sensors hot eyes. The sea tiger uses the electrostatic adsorption of the gecko to fly over the walls and run vertically on the modern building; the sea tiger can move faster than the cheetah. Current push: the basis of the rotational power of the magnetic field. It can release high-voltage current at will to attack, and can move at lightning speed. Electric current has energy and can be used as power for spacecraft and robots, which is equivalent to the owner having inexhaustible electrical energy. It can extract the location and number of enemies outside the field of vision and the actions the opponent will take at the next moment. Current propulsion is the precursor to the power of magnetic field rotation Unit: Volt Performance: Landao Tianwu, who had just awakened to electric current propulsion, fought against tanks alone and brought down planes and missiles [Magnetic field rotation] initially controlled [electromagnetic force], 50th layer of heaven fully mastered [electromagnetic force] and began to control [gravity], 75th layer of heaven fully mastered [gravity] and began to control [strong nuclear force] and [weak nuclear force], 100 layer of heaven fully mastered [the four basic forces of the universe]! But if you further break through the limits and fully understand the laws of the four basic forces of the universe - electromagnetism, gravity, strong nuclear force, and weak nuclear force, you can be reborn from destruction, completely control the laws of the four basic forces of the universe, ascend to immortality, and become a god, control life, cause and effect, destiny, time and space, create the world, and destroy the world with ease! Magnetic field rotation Unit: horse. The basic unit of magnetic field rotation in the Haihu period was the number of horses, while in the early Wushen period, the basic unit was the sky. [10,000 horses]: Approximately equivalent to the force of magnetic field rotation of 10,000 horses. When converted into mechanical force, it is equal to 10,000 horses. 100,000 Horses: Be able to detect the thoughts and consciousness of people with power below 10th level. [90,000 horses]: In [Comics: God of War], only [90,000 horses] can be considered a [God of War], and preliminary [Molecular Level Particle Control] can be achieved. The strong [vital force] of this level is very tenacious and can resist [small nuclear bomb explosion], but their vitality will be severely damaged. At the same time, it can [fly], absorb [plant vitality] to heal wounds, absorb and change [animal blood] to [replenish blood] for itself, and [harden matter]. The destructive power is shown as [50,000 horses] can smash a giant oil tanker with just one punch. [200,000 Horses]: Able to survive a large number of [nuclear explosion centers] unscathed and with undisturbed hairstyle, it has the potential to open the [Sky Eye] (Pineal Gland). At the same time, a strong person who has reached this level of power no longer needs [diet]. The power of [Magnetic Field Rotation] can automatically convert [external matter] into the [nutrition] needed by the strong person. [250,000 Horses Breaking Stars]: It is known as crushing destiny, which is equivalent to [the strong will defy heaven! Let everything no longer be measurable. However, this statement is only common in [Sea Tiger], and has been abandoned by [War God Era]. Instead, it is said that when the power reaches the [20th level], [Celestial Eye] can be produced, which can [predict the future] to a limited extent. Of course, this statement is also very vague. Only one of the 270th generation [Sea Tiger Martial God: Baichou] has demonstrated [Celestial Eye], and no one else has. In short, the 25th Heaven is just a level, and the real strong man starts from the 25th Heaven. But in fact, this division method is completely wrong. The categories involved in [Broken Star] go deeper into [soul, will, destiny] and other mysterious levels that are indescribable and cannot establish specific standards. It is definitely not just a matter of increasing strength that can [Break the Star], but it can also be compared with [Buddha], [Celestial Immortal] and [Jesus]. Because of the appearance of these extremely powerful people, the [Four Strong Men], a chain reaction occurred in the magnetic field environment. In just ten years, many hooligans, scoundrels, greedy, shameless, ignorant, idealistic, soulless, short-sighted people who just want to make a little profit for themselves have discovered their potential due to the changes in the times, and they also have the supernatural power of [magnetic field rotation]. However, no matter how their power progressed, even if [Anti-Gravity] and [Atomic Splitting] were mastered one after another, the phenomenon of [Breaking Stars] never appeared in them. The destructive power of the powerful [250,000 horses] is already [natural disaster level], and the combat range spreads [tens of kilometers] without any scruples. Therefore, the true [Breaking Star Realm] cannot be measured simply by [strength]. In the fifty centuries since human history entered the "Era of the Martial Gods", even if the "Magnetic Field Environment" continues to change, causing the "Magnetic Field Power" to decline significantly compared to the era of "The Four Great Ancestors", those who are qualified to "Broken Stars" will never be affected by the "harsh external environment". [300,000 horses]: Psychic induction: enables some people to understand the truth deeply, allowing them to be more in touch with God in their lives. [400,000 horses]: Immortal, rejuvenated, not drowned in water, not burnt in fire, endless breath-holding, not eating or hungry, invulnerable to swords and guns, invulnerable to all poisons, infinite strength, fast speed, infinite endurance, immune to all diseases, ignoring curses [450,000 horses]: Psychic induction: enables some people to understand the truth deeply, allowing them to be more in touch with the God in their lives. Super Wisdom Touch: The evolution of some people lies in wisdom and touch. They know what allows them to turn failure into success and sorrow into happiness. Those with the above abilities have all changed the pattern of the world, from Bodhidharma Jesus in history to Landao Tianwu before the story begins. [500,000 Horses - Anti-Gravity Realm]: When exerting the power of 500,000 Horses, anti-gravity phenomena will appear in the surroundings. [Automatic flight] can ignore [Gravity] and fly without any force. In fact, when the power reaches [20 Heavens] or above, you can freely enter and exit [Outer Space] and move in [Cosmic Space] without any protection. But that is very energy consuming. When you reach the 50th level, you can do this [without consumption], and you can use your [physical body] to [cross the universe]. At the same time, [cell recombination] can also be performed. Regardless of any physical disability, as long as one of the brain and heart is not damaged, it can be restored through cell reorganization. And it's not just effective for yourself, it can also be used to help others heal. 600,000 horses: Five senses hypnosis You can use hypnosis to control the opponent's five senses, namely posture, appearance, texture, touch, and taste, causing the opponent to create an illusion, making people mistake black for white and glass for diamonds. For ordinary people, the effect can be said to be permanent. After falling into complete hypnosis, there is no way to escape even if you know you are hypnotized. But for the strong, the effect is not long-lasting, and the opponent will soon see through it. Telepathy The ability to transcend the five senses, interact with the spirit and mood of a living person, and transmit one's thoughts to the other person's brain. Therefore, even if there is a language barrier, it will not affect the conversation between the two parties. It is an essential means of communication. The sensing range can even allow for spiritual dialogue across the universe, the universe, and time and space. Wide Area Speech One of the branch abilities of telepathy, you can use your own thoughts to speak to people in the entire area, and you can also let what others say reach everyone's ears. Mind Mastery Read all the thoughts and past memories of the opponent, and can also eliminate, modify, seal, or add the opponent's memories. It contains a wide range of mental abilities, so all phenomena related to the mind can be controlled with one hand. Mind Reading Reads all the thoughts and activities in the opponent's heart, but it requires training to use it freely. The difference from mind control is that mind reading can only read the opponent's current thought activities, but cannot go deep into the past memory, nor can it modify or manipulate the opponent's memory. Psychic Barrier Blocks the will of others from entering the heart, thus becoming immune to mental abilities. Use this technique to block mind reading. [700,000 horses]: Instant movement You can reach someone's place instantly without going through any path, and you can also move people or even an army. To reach places measured in light years, or areas that are inaccessible by conventional means, teleportation is required. Even in places where time and space abilities are prohibited, teleportation can still be achieved. [750,000 horses - Atom Splitting Realm]: When using this level of power, the phenomenon of atom splitting will naturally occur. You can [reorganize matter] at any time and [create] various things out of thin air [at will]. Clothes, food, furniture, houses, weapons... Whatever you want can be made out of nothing in an instant. The collision of two strikes with 75 celestial forces can create a [black hole] You must know that the so-called [anti-gravity] and [atom splitting] are both [external appearances] that will naturally arise after the strength of the magnetic field increases to a certain stage. 800,000 Horses: Elementalization Convert the body into natural elements, such as lightning, fire, water flow, etc., Thereby ineffectively inactivating physical attacks passing through the body. Elemental Movement Move long distances through conductors and air in the form and speed of elements. Elemental Walking By condensing power under your feet, you can adsorb on various elements and then stay on them, such as walking on water. Water Control The ability to control water by pressure can turn into fog to hide the figure, turn into a tsunami to block others, or create a form such as a water dragon to attack the enemy. Flame Manipulation There is no need for chants, mechanisms, or props. As long as you think about it, you can release the ability of flames. There is no reason or process, it just triggers the result. Therefore, this kind of flame does not need to obey the laws of physics. Thunder and Lightning Manipulation The ability to create thunderclouds, release thunder and lightning at will, or manipulate the lightning of nature. It can also move at lightning speed through electrical conductors and clouds in the form and speed of lightning. Gravity Control By manipulating the strength and direction of the planet's gravity at will, you can make objects float without weight, or make people fall into the abyss overweight. It can also exchange the direction of gravity to form anti-gravity, pushing everything on the ground into the sky. If gravity is concentrated to an infinite point, gravitational collapse will occur to form a black hole, swallowing everything and creating a gravitational field from which no matter or radiation can escape. Even thunder, lightning and light will be attracted. In addition, it can also use gravity to form a repulsive force to create a protective shield, which can deflect all attacks. 850,000 Horses: Light Speed ​​Movement With the ability to move at the speed of light, opponents who do not reach the reaction speed of light cannot see the action. To them, it is as if their own attack passes through the body. Light Speed ​​Reaction For those with the ability to react at the speed of light, actions that do not reach the speed of light are like standing still. Flying at the Speed ​​of Light In the universe, they can break the laws of heaven and earth and fly at faster than the speed of light. This physical ability that allows them to travel in the universe with only their physical body allows them to travel between planets without the need for spaceships and other means of transportation. But it is difficult to exceed the speed of light on a planet, because arbitrary destruction of the laws of physics will have an impact on the entire world. Light Speed ​​Punch Use your fingers or your own fists to punch hundreds of millions of light speed punches in an instant, which is extremely powerful. Although the power of each punch is enough to destroy stars, the ability user can completely control the power of the light speed punch, only destroying the target without causing any accidental injuries. The Light Speed ​​Fist can be used in many ways. It can be used in close combat or long-range. It can limit the scope of destruction to a point, or it can be left uncontrolled and fully exert its power. Melee Light Speed ​​Punch It can accelerate the limbs to the speed of light to make a heavy blow. Full Body Light Speed ​​Punch Accelerate the entire body to the speed of light to create a heavy blow. Long Range Light Speed ​​Punch In an instant, you can use your fingers, fists, or feet to punch at the speed of light to perform long-range attacks, which is 300,000 kilometers per second, and can circle the earth seven and a half times per second. Therefore, the attack range can reach any corner of the earth, and can even attack the stars in the universe. Light Speed ​​of Destruction Control the power of the light speed fist within a certain range to form a big explosion, which is specially used to deal with enemies that require huge destructive power to defeat. [900,000 horses]: This realm allows for more microscopic and precise [particle manipulation], such as changing the [DNA] of living things. Starting from 900,000 horses, the power gap of every 10,000 horses increases geometrically. The soul is immortal The soul is immortal, even if the universe ends, the soul cannot be destroyed. It can exist in the form of a soul and seize the body of any living being. It can also seize the body of other living beings without destroying their souls. It can even reside on inanimate objects. Divine Blood Also known as spiritual blood, blood containing divine power has great power and immortality. It can cure all injuries and diseases, make people immortal, and gain power as powerful as a god, but the prerequisite is that it can withstand the huge energy contained in divine blood. Even the soul that has been dead for trillions of years can summon reality and reshape the body to resurrect it. You can also use divine blood to write various talismans and resurrect dead battle suits. Although divine blood is infinite to gods, it is like a supreme treasure to humans. Godhead A crystal made by a god integrating various skills, knowledge, spells, the original laws of the world, etc. With his power. A god can create thousands of godheads at will. Therefore, the godhead has no effect on the god, but it can be used to give gifts to his subordinates to develop the army. Giving godhood to animals will turn them into strange beasts, such as tengu, snake god, etc. As long as a person is given godhood, he will become a living god or prodigy. As long as you are given the ghost-god status, you will turn into a ghost and god that can shake the heaven and earth. For example, Aaron, the king of Hades, bestowed godhood upon a wild dog, turning it into a three-headed dog from hell. [970,000 horses]: 97th Heaven. The strongest strength before the final state, because there will be dangers and difficulties when practicing to the final state, and strong people who fail to successfully enter the final state will be limited to this. Although the difference is only 20,000, it is the difference between a pistol and a machine gun! Creation Create a brand new world according to your own will. God's Passage Whether it is outside the universe, a parallel universe, or a place trillions of light years away, you can reach it instantly by passing through super dimensions. Create life Create various lives and souls according to your own ideas, and you can set the intensity of the life you create at will. Imagination is realized Imagination becomes reality. Omniscient and omnipotent can know any situation. Everything in the past and present can be known with just one thought. World Realm The ability to create a light curtain and project the scene of the planet. No matter how many billions of light years away the planet is, the light curtain can show what is happening on it now. Natural Dominance Dominates the laws of the universe, controls everything in the world, and can control all the changes in the world that humans are afraid of and can only wait for them to disappear. It can trigger major earthquakes, heavy rains and tsunamis around the world.

Ghost Hand Wang Yaozu's Inversion Bafang actually uses Qi to simulate and control the magnetic field, and it can also reverse the magnetic field. I don't know if this skill was created by Wang Yaozu or passed down from his ancestors. I'm afraid he knows it but doesn't know why. If a modern person who understands physics can push this skill to a higher level and develop a little bit of imagination, he can realize the rotating magnetic field of Dian Lao and even the electromagnetic gun. It can only be said that this skill is limited by the times. The Kung Fu of Reverse Bafang, if it was developed by Wang Yaozu, Wang Yaozu is really a talent. Maybe when he was developing it, I used the power of thinking to study this kung fu. Many of the kung fu in Strangers were developed using my power of thinking, knowing what it was, but not knowing why. There are many people who understand physics and biology in kung fu, and can push their kung fu to a peak. For example, temporary worker Lao Meng, if this guy takes an evil path, he can massacre an entire city by himself.

I know why I was sent to the eunuch

I'm speechless. You don't have to write the part about the Republic of China. There's no need to force it. It's uncomfortable to watch. You can't kill this one and you can't change that. It's really annoying to be timid and forcefully put forward the theory of cause and effect. Don't change the predetermined destiny. If you can change it, what's the point of being destined?

Your book is about a stranger, so you should mix in a circle of strangers. The setting of "filial piety" in the beginning is correct, because practitioners are true to themselves and cannot cultivate their nature unless they eliminate obstacles and see themselves and their nature. But you have been drifting since Daying Immortal. A big taboo among fandoms is to use a big character from the original work as the main character when you haven't established a good sense of involvement with the protagonist. This will not be enough to offset the protagonist, and it will also lose the character that you have been sincere to yourself in the past. Because as long as the readers are a little older, they can see that you have been plotting against Daying Immortal all this time. You scheme against others without laying out the plot. Zuo Ruotong is the only real person in the comics. You even want to scheme against a real person. Then, since the filial master was in debt before, isn't it just a slap in the face again? Then the story of City in Danger, involving some plots about letting bullets fly, just drifted away... You didn't describe the practice seriously in the early stage, and suddenly you wanted to pretend to be one man in charge, but you couldn't pretend... After seeing this, it was basically useless. You only wrote the first three or four chapters that were okay. Be more down-to-earth. Otherwise, your character will be directly reflected in the work, and it will just drift away. The pretended content cannot be contained in a few chapters, and it will still float out.

Why is the protagonist always fighting hard on the frontal battlefield? What the protagonist has to do is to attack the enemy's logistics force and go to the Northeast to destroy the enemy's factories and airports. These are the real ways to deal a blow to the Japanese. In addition, he must also target the enemy's pilots and destroy naval warships

I found that many of the books at the top of Qidian's rankings were published by the navy. It's so difficult to find a good book. Why haven't I seen Qidian. Com managing the navy?

Looking back, every time the protagonist becomes stronger, he suddenly writes something similar to him. Isn't this a way to suppress it?