The Leader of the Demon Cult in Time Travel, but Jiazi Is a Demon

Look at the divine eagle in this introduction. Its race is Bei, right?

The things drawn are not of much use. The Demon Cult Leader's pool draws cards at the beginning to produce the Black-Hearted Tiger. You have to wait for the Wudang Disciple's Pool. Now that you have practiced the martial arts of ordinary gold-type martial arts, your expectations from the book title to the introduction are biased. Even if the beginning is really Rainbow Cat, Blue Rabbit, Black-hearted Tiger, Dimensional Reduction and Fighting Gold-type Martial Arts, it feels better to introduce a series of introductions. Now it looks quite subtle.

Brother Eagle and his granddaughter are so cute

Zhang Chui's favorite skill is Jiazi Dang Mo Dang Yi Jiazi, which actually does not exist at all. He has not fought with anyone for "decades". At this time, he tried his hand at it, and it turned out to be as good as he wanted. Qinggong was stepped on by Wei Yixiao, the martial arts realm couldn't understand pinching gold ingots, the 100-year-old Zhang commented on Zhang Wuji's internal strength. In addition to showing that his internal strength is at the same level as the five extremes, he has been fighting in a fishing game without the level of the five extremes in his life Characters he met in his life... ... Master Jue Yuan, the hero Guo Jing, the Condor Hero Yang Guo, and so on, only a few people can achieve this level of cultivation. As for the current masters, apart from himself, I really can't think of another person who can reach this level. In other words, the hundred-year-old Zhang has never met an opponent at the level of the Five Ultimates in his life.

Forget about the system flow, but what is the mechanism for you to draw the lottery? , Then let's not talk about dozens of them, and then it's useless to draw things, and then it's like opening a proficiency template, but it seems to only be able to collect skills, and it can't practice proficiency. What is your book about? If you write like this, you might as well just abolish those two tricks and just write about martial arts.

The first chapter was too lame. It didn't say he was the successor, nor was he powerful. Talking about the demon leader who was brought to power to balance all parties, this setting does not feel very convincing and is a bit abrupt to me.

Moreover, it is always people who are strong, not martial arts. You have completely put the cart before the horse and become the subject of martial arts people, and people have become the accomplished people. Martial arts people are famous because of people, not people are famous because of martial arts, just like Xiao Li Feidao, who is famous because of Li Xunhuan, but if you give this martial arts to other people, can he achieve the state of Li Xunhuan?

In the case of Zhang Sanfeng and Guo Xiang, everyone seems to think that my writing of emotional scenes is quite bad, so I was thinking about the issue of the heroine, whether I want this heroine or not. Everyone says it's bad, I don't have much confidence anymore😭😭😭😭

Is it the protagonist? Today's latest chapter talks about 20 free draws from the limited card pool. However, because the protagonist has the identity of the leader of the Demon Cult, the draw card pool will be affected, so will the Qilin Demon be the protagonist?

The divine eagle is tens of meters long. The protagonist is sparring with the divine eagle? It would be nice to have a comparison, just like Author VS Ultraman, you two are evenly matched.

You are such a fucking waste. In your hands, magic skills like Tianmo Luanwu are like a child's trick. Taoism and Taoism, demons and demons are two opposite forces. They have to be fused together. You are not the Qitian Emperor, and Qitian Emperor is not trying to unite Taoism and demonism at the beginning. People also follow one path to the end and then merge it. You are doing this at the beginning of your fucking path. Now even a mere Yang Guang can't beat him. What a fucking waste.

Yang Guang, a prodigal son, has strengthened the fact that Li Shimin is still a noob 😒. I also thought that Li Shimin fell into the trap on purpose, and then waited for Yang Guang to fight the protagonist and directly stabbed him in the back. He took over Yang Guang's inner force and the Destiny God of War catalog and directly came to the world as the true emperor. In the end, he was pierced by the protagonist's sword, and then rescued Li Shimin without getting anything 😒

It is undeniable that you failed to write the Tang Dynasty volume. You have been arguing with Hou Xiqing all the time. Do you have to write a female protagonist? What happened to your emotional drama? Why did you force it to be strengthened by Yang Guang? What have you changed into the Fire Linjian? You can remember moves and internal skills.

I just want to say, which version of The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty is this? The protagonist can fight to the death with Jue Wushen, and then you tell me, now he is on par with Shi Zhixuan, or even slightly at a disadvantage.

In the past, Cat had a fanfic of the protagonist Naruto. In the first few hundred chapters, the protagonist system sent the protagonist crazy tasks to refresh his attributes. The plot was also very unfolding, and then the enemies became more and more outrageous. Naruto refreshed his attributes and various plug-ins in hundreds of chapters. As a result, Sasuke had an adventure when Indra was a possessed grandfather, and he caught up in a few chapters. His values ​​seemed to be insufficient. Because of this kind of plot, the book review section was full of criticism. The Tang Dynasty Volume also feels the same way. The protagonist's cheats are accumulated by saving lottery tickets little by little, and there is no sign of self-created martial arts (although it is because the ones drawn by the system are stronger, it also shows that the protagonist's talent is not enough in the face of strange encounters). The opponent's epiphany and adventure can directly surpass the accumulation of the protagonist's volume. Yang Guang gets the Fire Scale Sword and directly turns it into a treasure hunt instrument. It feels like it has not been a month since the protagonist arrived. The Fire Scale Sword directly leads Yang Guang to the God of War Catalog. Looking at the protagonist's system, the treasure hunt takes a month, and it is triggered after entering the world of the Tang Dynasty for a long time. It's like Zhang Sanfeng personally broke through the world limit in the first volume, and then other little miscellaneous fish suddenly became more powerful. Highlight a main god space matching mechanism, where there are penalties for good performance and rewards for poor performance.

Your introduction... Just said "I will definitely fail in writing later"

Shi Qingxuan, who had been preparing for it for so long, finally gave the first choice to Shi Feixuan, who had just debuted. That's okay. This is just like I have subscribed to your book for a long time, but my monthly subscription is given to other authors first. I believe the author will understand.

Brother, you did a great job in writing Jiazi Dangmo in the early stage. The conflict between Lao Zhang and Guo Xiang made me feel uncomfortable. The so-called time-traveling idea at the end is also very good, but it's a pity that you didn't write it well. The emotions and endings were too sloppy, and you couldn't control it in the end. If you write the follow-up well, you will come back and create a big man again, look back at Lao Zhang, travel through the timeline, see Guo Xiang again, and dream back to the prosperous Ming Dynasty! This is perfect! ! !

The writing style is very strange, as if I want to write about young people, but I don't have the writing style to write it. The dialogue is in the style of young people, but the narration is not. To be honest, it's a bit strange to read.

I have read almost 200 chapters. When writing about martial arts, just write well. You are an emperor and you have a harem and ministers. Just go and write a dynasty novel. It is just selling dog meat over a sheep's head. I can't stand it anymore.

It feels exciting and fun, and I'm a little bit literary, I can't accept it 😂

Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit only wrote the plot of the first part, which is better. Too few people have watched the subsequent parts. You have wasted too much space now. Sometimes I don't even want to subscribe.

I saw the leader of the Demon Cult coming in, and I also saw the system draw a card to draw a Demon Cult Kung Fu. I couldn't stand it anymore when I went to Wudang Mountain. Did the system die as soon as it appeared? How many chapters have it been? It's so smooth.

After reading the first 40 chapters of this novel, it is indeed well written. It can be seen that the author really likes martial arts and has a clear understanding of the chivalrous spirit of martial arts. The author's writing style is really good, the pictures are lifelike, and the visual impact is very strong. By the way, this novel is really suitable for being adapted into a TV series, especially a martial arts drama. There is really a lack of such classic martial arts dramas in China. There hasn't been a classic martial arts drama in at least 10 years. Although there have been some martial arts dramas produced in China in the past ten years, they are not classics and their reviews are not high. If this novel can be remade into a martial arts drama, it will definitely be the first bite of crab, take the lead in seizing the market, and become a big IP that is popular across the country.

Speaking of Chixiao, there is also Chixiao Sword in Ark of Tomorrow, as well as the accompanying Chixiao Sword Technique, which is inherited from the Yan Kingdom royal family.

Saw Bemonstein, is that true?

Let me ask you, I just read a few chapters. Is this book worth reading?

There are a lot of psychological activities, and the water in the Pacific Ocean may come from this

The writing is okay, but there are too many interactions, too many debates and various thoughts. Assuming that a plot requires ten chapters, eight of them are about this aspect, and the remaining two chapters are one at the beginning and one at the end... When you read it, you will feel that you have been thinking and debating, and you have been slow to enter the main line. When you get in, it will be the end, and you will pass it by in one stroke.

Can you... Red Sky Sword... Can summon Pineapple War Treasure 🤫