The Great Qin

It's getting more and more boring. After waiting for so long, there are two chapters that seem like a joke. Really speechless

The first 500 chapters are quite interesting, with a lot of foreshadowing, but when it comes to Bai Yujing and I Ching, I can't stand it anymore. It's so tiring. In the middle and later chapters, it feels like it's not about writing about the I Ching, but about stating a period of history. There are very few scenes in the I Ching in the middle and late stages, and the protagonist is 55-rated to everyone, ugh.

I started reading it from Long, but it was a pirated version. After all, I didn't have much money, so I didn't read this book very much. Qin Shi didn't like it very much! Can only wait for the next book! A red ticket to make up for it, come on＾0＾~

I just want to ask you, do you have a young heroine?

The problem now is that if we continue to create original stories, there will be a plot of the grassland after Loulan. After the grassland, we will return to the Central Plains and there will be a plot of Jing Ke assassinating Qin. Then there will be an original story of entering the Qin Dynasty as an official. After that, we will officially enter the Hundred Steps Flying Sword, which means that the time span will be ten years later. My problem is that it has already reached more than 800,000 words, and the plot of Loulan is only halfway through. If it continues, I really don't know where the word count of this book will develop. I can't even imagine it. In the group, there are also many readers asking me when will it enter the main plot and when will the main drama begin, so I feel that the original length is a bit too much. Because most of the original plots pave the way for subsequent character relationships and appearances, I would like to ask you whether you should write it according to the above original plot. Sometimes when I write too much original content, I also feel that I have some difficulty in distinguishing the degree of certainty. I'm asking for your opinions here.

I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is too childish. You and I can't live without some politics in today's society. . The historical machinations that span more than 2,000 years may not be as clear as the ancients' political tendencies and overall views, as well as the general direction of history. Otherwise, it is better not to write about politics, politics, military, and history. Furthermore, modern people did not care about martial arts in ancient times, but history has shown that they were careerists. You can't live without ambition. How can you change the habits of ten or twenty years?

The author copied the plot 6, which is a pity. If this book is well written, he probably copied the plot. It's suitable for writing about martial arts but not history. It's really embarrassing that the protagonist talks so little about history. From a historical perspective, the protagonist's existence is meaningless. Simply put, it has no existence value at all. And what about Canglong Qisu? One sentence review: Whether it is an animation or a novel, this is nonsense and has no meaning or value at all. Unless it's drawn in the style of a fairy tale, something as stupid as Cang Long Qisu is probably the Dragon Slaying Sword and the Heavenly Sword.

You want to be a witness and change history. You have no strength and not enough IQ. You are just a supporting role.

Four six one four eight five three four spirits. Gintama Sword Heart - Qin Shi. You always say that you have been banned in the group, why can't I find it? ? ? Could it be that you are in a group from a parallel world?

As the title says, there are still two episodes left for Tianjiu to end. The most serious problem now is that Tianjiu has a second season, and after I finish writing the first season of Tianjiu, I can only make original plots for the rest of the story, or escape to Korea to see other places. Therefore, there will be a wave of original creations after Tianjiu. So when the original plot comes, I will give you a warning first to avoid being criticized later... After all, the second season of Tianjiu has not been released, and I am also very disappointed! The relevant plot involves the appearances of Jing Ke, Gao Jianli, Duan Murong and the Mohist family, the Yin Yang School and the Taoist School will also appear one after another, and the collision of the explicit and implicit learning of hundreds of schools will also appear. The Xiang family of Chu State, farmers, etc., The Yi Jing will truly get involved in this world and experience it personally. The Canglong Qisu, which really stirs up the situation, will also attract the Yi Jing to go. The first season of Tianjiu ended, which is when the Qin Dynasty began to unify the world in the progress of the book. Is there... Anyone looking for a supporting role? -=

The same personality as Yi Xiaochuan ys

There is a reason why this book did not do well. I couldn't stand it after reading only a few chapters. It was originally written about the Qin Shi Mingyue anime, and I had a duel with Luo Wang earlier. This does not mean that I know about the Qin Shi Mingyue anime world, and after Ling Xu came out, the protagonist already knew this. It was Zhang Liang's sword, but when I met Hong Lian, I didn't recognize him... He also said that there was no such person in the official history. It was really embarrassing to read. Moreover, in writing this kind of fan fiction, the protagonist did not have the ability to predict things... It was not ordinary awkward to watch. Without further ado, farewell!

It's too poisonous, I feel that since the protagonist saved Han Fei, it has become weaker and weaker. In the past, so many people from the Yin Yang family were killed, Now it seems that no one can be killed. I'm convinced too

The shame of the time traveler comes from modern times and the system. Every day, I feel inferior like a dog. I always look like I feel sorry for the people in the world. It is so disgusting. A swordsman looks like a weakling all day long.

Sorry, I can't stand the disagreement anymore. Complain about it, ha! "Visually the protagonist's history is at an elementary school level. I haven't read the Qin Shi Mingyue series. I always feel that I am being targeted by the consciousness of heaven. I think I have traveled to the history of the original world, and I lack common sense..." But the only advantage is that the writing is good. I don't think it is suitable for colleagues. It must be very good to write history.

Cultivation, being abused, practicing, being abused. The woman went to seduce Ji Wuye and was left half dead. Her good friend Han Fei was left half dead. Very well written, bye!

I don't understand why everyone who traveled through Jiuge likes Nongyu so much. Is it good? Forget it in this work, why should she stay away from danger? Who do you think you are? Self-preservation is a problem. If you don't teach martial arts and don't let her join the quicksand, you will stay away from danger. How has she survived the past few years? It's such an innocent person. The emotion is inexplicable.

It felt like the protagonist Bai Yujing acted as if she was schizophrenic and acted completely disorganized, and the protagonist, a basically helpless person, wanted to create a game version of the Blue Dragon Club based on a momentary idea, which was a bit fanciful. How can the protagonist ensure that the Qin Kingdom will be unified as in history when he understands the struggle between humans and gods? Emperor Qin died in middle age as in history. Since the protagonist has been able to change destiny and save Han Fei and Nong Yu, why not do something more meaningful now? The protagonist desires to unify the world as soon as possible, so he might as well assassinate important personnel of the other five countries. Just like killing Ji Wuye and Bai Yifei in South Korea indirectly accelerated the pace of unification 😵

Travel into a cartoon! But you have to consider history! ! It's so poisonous! ! It feels like I'm seeing the second Yi Xiaochuan! ! ! An ordinary person holding a plug-in and traveling to anime would think so much? Or consider trying your best to change life in the world for the better! Or just find a place to stay and not participate in anything! What other choice is there! Don't hesitate to do anything! Nothing! You always talk about history, why should I read history books?

The name on the cover looks like Youyou Wife

Diaosi is still a diaosi after time travel, it cannot become a climate

I think the failure of this book is that since you have decided to change history, you should do it more thoroughly. Since you have decided to assist Fusu, you should make preparations and make decisions early, and you should not be a witness to history. The Tianwen Sword was in Xianyang City instead of with the emperor. This should also be an obvious loophole. Since the emperor had made a decision, how could someone as stalwart as the First Emperor make such a mistake? How could he let Zhao Gao and Li Si be so presumptuous?

. Forget it, withdraw. Too much nonsense is a taboo in martial arts, and the plot is rather blunt and lacks a sense of substitution, from a reader's perspective.

After reading the comments, I picked a chapter to test the waters. Chapter 13 seemed to be about the protagonist and Han Fei just arriving in Xinzheng. I was shocked at the beginning. Han Fei put his hands together and confessed to someone. If you were the protagonist, I wouldn't say anything. Han Fei came from Confucianism. Where did he learn to put his hands together in that era? I just lost the desire to read any more.

This is so disgusting. Is the author the protagonist? A toad is on my feet! !

Although it was a free prostitution, I thought I could continue reading it. After reading forty-seven chapters, I was immediately persuaded to quit. I had nowhere to complain, and I didn't even bother to vomit. It's poisonous. It's really poisonous. It's extremely poisonous and contains miasma.

It's a pity. If you don't know how to play politics, why not just be a pure swordsman? As a result, I didn't write both ends well.

It was too poisonous, Wu Liuqi looked very dramatic, and she was almost beaten to death by Dong Jun, who was already Yan Dan's wife. I never saw revenge, even a fight. It made me skip chapters faster and faster, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable it became. It was rubbish.

Come and build a building, and mark out the heroine who has already proven himself I don't want to speculate in stocks anymore┐(─__─)┌ . . .

Yan Lingji has been fucked by many protagonists