All Heavens Begins from Chinese Comics

Chapter 2 persuades me to quit. I can't resist. Reading the book reviews is more interesting than the book. What do you think?

Emmm. . . How can I say that the novel is good, but can you not be so watery? Watery at the beginning? Then I won't talk about the plot of the Little Matchmaker of the Fox Demon. I guess you have also watched the anime. I don't know if you have read the manga. If you have read it, you will not go to the Yiqi Dao League. Personally, I feel that it is better to go to Tushan. Also, I was too confident, too hesitant and not decisive enough, and I didn't know how to seize several good opportunities. It's understandable that he likes Zhuye, but he makes the heroine too nymphomaniac. You know, Huaizhu said that he can't even write poems and songs. Do you think such a woman would be a nymphomaniac?

You saw Chapter 8 and you don't understand? The protagonist is obviously a person with a relatively normal personality or a bit of a coward, but when faced with being chased by a wolf demon and a tiger demon, he inexplicably starts talking nonsense all the time? Have you been reading for several pages? Is this logic emmm? Forced nonsense?

I was persuaded to quit after reading Chapter 15. The protagonist's character has no definition, he has no opinion and is completely a puppet of the system. The plot is also terrible. The title of Chapter 15 does not match the content at all That's it, author, come on, I'm running away

To be honest, I skipped the Douluo chapter directly, because the setting in the book was really overdone by the author, and I couldn't stand it at all. I hope the author can still take into account the setting in the original book in some places.

To be honest, I am a little obsessed with writing books. When I saw the part about Douluo Dalu, I couldn't stand it anymore. The writing style was out of tune. Reading the book made me feel like I was watching a movie at home. When I saw the excitement, it suddenly turned into a horror movie, and I felt suffocated. When we read novels, we all put ourselves into a certain role in it. Most of us put ourselves into the protagonist. If you are so abusive to the protagonist, no one will like it except some TikTokers.

How to put it this way, I have ordered all the books (although some of them were ordered with free coins, which are really delicious), and I also voted for a monthly ticket. I feel that the books are quite good. The fox demon Little Matchmaker made me enjoy it even if I have never read the original work. Douluo Continent also felt good, but I felt that there were a few things that made me read a little awkwardly. The first one, regarding the heavens, the real world should be recovering spiritual energy, and the protagonist's strength is currently a level B (that is, the mini-boss set at the beginning, the Earthbound Spirit), which shocked the main world, but the sense of existence in the main world is a bit low. The protagonist's initial goal is gone, just one move, and Douluo is equivalent to the protagonist's At the rest stop, when the fox demon can't be defeated, go to Douluo to rest, and then go back and fight back. Douluo's presence is also very low. So far, the book is like a fan of the fox demon, and the recent chapters have been confusing, and I don't understand how it promotes the plot. So far, there are only Douluo and fox demon, and Douluo has almost no sense of existence. There are a lot of scenes in the world of fox demon. Ps: I wonder if the author is interested in writing about one person, I really like Lu Linglong. Second point, regarding the heroine, I personally support the harem. After all, do you read novels? The real world cannot satisfy you, so I read novels. The harem I like refers to the world that I travel to, and I include the most popular one or two, but the protagonist wears When we got to the Douluo World, no one was confiscated. I could understand why Xiao Wu was not accepted, but why was he not accepting the Blue Silver Emperor? Moreover, he argued with them so frequently and cordially. When I saw Flanders saying that they were a couple, I thought they were stable, but in the end, I still found Tang Hao. Anyway, I personally feel that if it is not a harem, then the relationship between the male protagonist and the female should not be particularly intimate, unless it is a daughter. Finally, I still don't understand what level the protagonist's strength is. From the real world point of view, it is at least A-level. From a Douluo point of view, it is a super Douluo. But from a fox demon point of view, it is a bit confusing and feels high and low. I think the reason why it feels like this is because the system that acts as a bridge between the protagonist and the readers is too weak. I think this system is well written, but why does it have so few roles? As for the idea of ​​an abusive master, I think Haixing is not particularly abusive. The abusive master is fine, just don't fuck. In addition, the author's updates are not very good. Except for the double update of the book Big Brother, there are quite a few 3 or 4 or 10 updates in the books I am following. The author still needs to work hard. There is no place to go in this situation, so why not update? It's not easy to type. I hope the author can read it. I hope Haihan can improve it if I'm not careful!

It's certain that one of the heroines is Dongfang Huaizhu!

Fire Dance Whirlwind Sword Technique! What childhood memories!

It's very uncomfortable to read. I feel that I am abusing the protagonist in various ways. The protagonist's fighting ability is indeed not weak, but everything he does does not go smoothly. For example, in the mission to rescue people outside the circle, a few damn ones were all disabled. Although a few people survived, they were basically all useless. What's the point of doing this task? The seven barrier-breaking pills given to the pig's feet have a 10% chance of breakthrough in each subject. They can also be stacked. After eating them all, there was no breakthrough. Although the protagonist's realm perception is still a little bit behind, what is the meaning of the author giving these barrier-breaking pills? As mentioned before, the protagonist's strength is determined by cheating after the system has been improved without any skills. What else is there to say? There is also the Thunder Flame Sword that was rewarded by the previous system. Every fairy sword was put up as a reward. After completing the task, it was hacked by the system. What can I say, the Thunder Flame Sword is a golden immortal sword, and the protagonist is not strong enough to use it. The first time I saw the system releasing rewards after completing the task, there was no reward for the protagonist. The Thunder Flame Sword Master in Shu Mountain is not much stronger than the protagonist in terms of cultivation. Then he replaced the fairy sword with a rubbish sword. Although it was used by Lu Dongbin, it was not as strong as the previous sword! You already have the Changhong Sword, what else do you need that sword for? After collecting Dongfang Huaizhu, why not kill Jin Renfeng? The heirs of the aristocratic family have killed so many people, why not kill them earlier? He must be allowed to plot behind his back. Some people may say that the protagonist is seriously injured and cannot be killed, but this is the plot arranged by the author. It gives me the feeling of being in a Korean drama. There is a misunderstanding, but if we don't say it out, it's very uncomfortable to keep misunderstanding each other. They have all traveled through the world of fox demons, and their strength can be regarded as one of the top ones. The things he wanted to change remained unchanged. After seeing him being forced out of the circle, Time Travel Douluo stopped watching. It is also considered to have relatively high poison resistance, as you can see now. This is the first time I write a long review at Qidian. If it wasn't really uncomfortable, I wouldn't have wasted my time writing so many things. I feel like I've been poisoned. I can't say it's torture, I just feel very depressed and uncomfortable.

I'm really speechless after reading this book. It's okay to say that his writing is not good. Compared with other novice writers, it's just okay. It's okay to say that the plot is not good. Some of them are remarkable. But when you come out as Tai Qing, sleeping with the heroine completely poisoned me. If you have a system, you can show off the whole Tai Qing boss. There is also a problem with the heroine's body. You are a systematic person. Are you still afraid that you can't cure the injuries in the world of a fox demon and a matchmaker? What is the system exchange store for? 🙂

After reading Chapter 150, the author's writing method might as well just write Huai Zhu to marry Jin and then write it to death. He immediately ended the protagonist's relationship and started practicing Taoism with peace of mind. How can there be any murderous operation in which a wife does not snatch the marriage and seek revenge first? The most important thing in writing a novel is to tell the protagonist's personal growth experience and inner changes. The author's way of writing shows that the protagonist has not grown at all, and is still a little loser who has just gained strength and does not know how to reflect.

I really hate novels where you pick up a girl and then send her out. This kind of plot is disgusting. If you are sure you won't accept her, then please don't have an affair with her. In this case, even if this woman marries someone else, I won't feel the same. I can accept no heroine, single heroine or harem, but please don't flirt with her and give her away again. It's disgusting, worse than eating a fly. In fact, when I read the paid chapters, I felt that the author's writing was okay, but then I saw the comments in the comment area that were so decisive that I was afraid of wasting money, and I was afraid that I would be so angry that I would vomit blood after paying.

By the way, if the author writes about Hongmao's Changhong Sword Technique, can't he check it online? The ready-made moves are there for you to use. Isn't it interesting to have to make it up yourself to fool readers? Is there no sincerity at all in writing a book?

Suppressed for hundreds of chapters and then enjoyed one or two chapters, this is what this author suppresses first and then promotes. I can only say that it has more than one million words and only has a recommendation vote of just over 10,000. It is deserved and deserved. It is indeed not unreasonable to enter the daily guide, and it is also not unreasonable to receive all the scoldings in the book review area. I can only wish the author's life to be as smooth as the protagonist...

It made me feel frustrated to read such a book. The author is really talented! ! Obviously it's a subject I like, and it's a story line I don't hate. Why does it look so uncomfortable? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The most disgusting thing is that the author said that the black fox did not kill him twice in the sneak attack. It turned out that the black fox did not want to kill him for the time being. Let me go. The explanation I gave myself before was that he would be noticed when he was killed, so the black fox did not succeed in the sneak attack. He dared to kill him, but in the end, it was because of the face of the black fox that he didn't kill him. Go ahead, it's too cruel. He tortured a protagonist who had read the original work to this point, and had to rely on a woman to save his life. To this extent, you have gone too far. Author, you are trying to persuade him to quit.

I am a fool I am a fool I am a fool

Can you suppress it first and then lean back to find the explosive point? Suppressing first and then leaning back is to highlight the final breaking point. Where is your breaking point? I don't understand how you define the audience for your book. No matter how abusive the main article is, there will always be exciting and explosive points later on, but yours does not. Or it was suppressed before the fun even started. What is the meaning of the system's existence? What is the purpose? What is the protagonist's goal? What is the meaning of time travel? No. The grid is out of place. Either you turn the system into a tool, but the system in your text is conscious. Look what the system did? Don't give what you can, just suppress. What is the purpose of this system possessing the protagonist? The protagonist is too awesome to use a limiter to suppress the protagonist? Really, this book doesn't sound like torture! It's just simply awkward. Those who abuse the master have cried after watching the abuse. But what you are really doing is positioning and logic. One is the character image. Nothing can stand up. In the city, there are articles about the current status of the entertainment industry and society, as well as fantasy. But the characters are all fleshed out. I saw your comment before saying that if you were an author like Tang Jia San Shao and you had a fan base, you would be popular, but that doesn't exist. Your book has no logic, no writing, no characters, no explosive points, just plain water. I want to have depth but can't write well. The subject matter is good, but the content is not. I write these things not to change or criticize you, but simply because I can't stand your book. I want to say something! That's all

All I can say is that it looked fine at first but got more and more painful the more you read it. You wrote it yourself, but you must also consider the actual situation. Where is your wife still waiting for you to save, and you are still pretending to kill someone? Your brain was caught in the door? If you want to pretend to be cool, let's finish saving people first and then pretend not to be able to do it anymore (▼伀▼#). Are you waiting for someone to put a knife to your wife's neck and act like a hero saving a beauty? Aren't you afraid of taking it off? Okay, I can't stand it anymore. Come on.

The routine used many years ago was to suppress first and then increase, but in the end, suppressing was completely for the sake of increasing, and it was unreasonable to suppress.

I dismantled the CP but didn't open a harem, my strength is poor. As a young man in the 21st century, I don't know how to engage in capitalism. Then I flirted with girls but didn't marry them. I gave them away diligently.

The protagonist is stupid and can only be incompetent and furious!

The first chapter is very poisonous. The system and the protagonist are both gibbering for a long time without any information. Is this the system? It's obviously just a person, okay, just kill it before completing the task, and blatantly treat the host as a slave.

I watched it to relax, but it made me feel depressed and upset.

To be honest with the author, when we read novels, most of us like to read this kind of novel, not the kind of simple and refreshing novels. Basically, we want to read this kind of plot with a little bit of fascinating description. The more we read, the more interesting it becomes. It is simply magical.

Let me tell the readers first, if you are here simply for fun, please give me another book. It's uncomfortable to watch, it's a fast-paced era. Not many people really want to read books. It is a book that Mingjian Shuotian simply wrote for myself. I personally read 577 chapters. I also watched the "Thunderbolt" part in the middle, and I understood the plot of the Fox Fairy. The most important thing is Douluo, the collapse of the heavens, which is written very comprehensively. What do you say, Shuangwen? No. To put it bluntly, it's a slow burn. I talked about the system in the middle of "The Famous Sword Retracts the Sky". Mystery and immortality are not consistent after all. The immortal here is equivalent to Daluo, unless the original system of the system master comes. However, the separation of the two of them was inevitable, and later Gao Jie became an immortal. System to save (change the pattern) the world occupied by demons in another water drop (small world). This is almost an ending for people like me. It's just that my personal philosophy and worldview are different. I am an author of Zhutianliu. I can only say that the protagonist in my novel would not do what Gao Jie did. So it's over. I would like to thank Mingjian Shuitian first. First of all, you are a Chinese. I am glad that you will personally change the thunderbolt seal. I read the chapter you posted and said that both of us have had the experience of fighting against little heroes together. We love this country and the whole family is unanimous. The concepts are different. I have learned a lot after reading your book. I hope you keep going, this book is a great idea. There are also places in my book that I need to learn from you. I hope your next Three Body fan book will be better.

Can you stop being in the water? Why don't you just stop being in the water? The more water you have, the more rubbish you feel.

This description of the fight makes my head hurt. Also, the protagonist's aura is too big. If it weren't for the aura, the protagonist would be taunting the tiger, and the tiger would chase him to the end. After all, the tiger has practiced enough to speak, and he definitely doesn't know how to do it.

After reading a few chapters, I can't understand what's being said. I can't understand this resume either.