Sword of the Wandering Soul

Let's not talk about whether this book is good or not. After all, it is not finished. There is food and grass in the early stage and everything in the later stage 😒 I only want to talk about its themes: [Indigenous protagonist], [Slave at the beginning], [Ordinary person character]. It gives readers a very bad impression, and there is no simple and crude plot guide such as system failure and rebirth failure 😅 said To put it bluntly, this kind of writing should not be written by newcomers at all. Only veteran authors, at least masters or above, with a huge fan base can try this kind of literary style 😠 A newcomer has no fans, no traffic, no income in the long term, no positive feedback, and will run away without knowing when. It is difficult for people to trust 🤔

The free period will last for a long time. Don't worry. If there is no traffic, Bei Gonglian will use hot spots to advertise and hype. Don't worry. I am very grateful to everyone for viewing my work, so I will not post false accounts to shine a light on readers who have not seen it. If it is a program error, then my comment was accidentally touched.

Well, although it goes with the title of the book, it is really just as the druid said, the protagonist begins to become more and more like a devil. Isn't the influence of modern people alone enough to do this? After all, the latest chapter also showed that this time traveler was very afraid of blood, so he just kept those thoughts in his mind. And the stimulation of thought cannot be entirely relied on this time traveler and inheritor, even if it is indeed related to stimulation. Well, maybe this demonic nature is the side of the protagonist that has been suppressed? It's just that he has been educated and lived too comfortably before, so he couldn't be discovered. But speaking of it, the protagonist has been hit by his own boomerang. He clearly said before that he didn't want to take the initiative to absorb souls... He wanted to be a good person. But now in order to survive, it can be said that he is using all kinds of tricks. He does not care about the life or death of others, and completely treats the soul as a tool to devour. No matter what excuse he makes, he is now less and less like a "person" according to the secular definition. More like "Sword of the Wandering Soul". (I came to see the hero based on the introduction... I do feel dissatisfied the more I read, the more I want to complain.)

When I read Chapter 27, I couldn't tell what the main plot was. I felt that it was written too thinly and seemed to be filled with water. After more than 100,000 words, I haven't even explained it yet. It's a skill to be able to take someone else's time-traveling and fusion with a few words and write more than 100,000 words without finishing it. But I don't have the patience anymore.

It's nearly half a million words, and you're still eight years old. When you talk to the lord's son, you usually think like an adult. Don't you feel embarrassed? In this world of high demons, your behavior is 100% considered as seizing the body. It would be better if you changed it to fifteen or sixteen years old. You emphasize that you are only eight years old every day, but look at the behavior of Pig's Feet, which is what an eight-year-old should do? And understanding the situation and proposing solutions, is this what an eight-year-old should have?

When I saw Million Words for Free, I thought it was a hydrological diversion that no one would read. I didn't expect the writing style and sense of immersion to be so good. There are also a lot of original and excellent settings, and the protagonist also has a unique personality. It's actually a good book

Remember, the author owes an update to Chapter 14

Those who come here from Yintian, take a look first

I have a feeling that this book can be followed

Well, this book is really one of the few I have read in Qidian in the past few years. It really feels like writing a story rather than an online article. The protagonist is no longer just a tool for fun, nor is he a crazy routine, an empty label for those anti-evil routines. But a person who really made me feel flesh and blood, a child struggling on the edge of good and evil. The story is destined to be very long and not very in line with modern tastes, but after all, it has its audience. This kind of audience is not attracted by a long free period, but is truly attracted by this kind of story shaping that is as slow as carving stone sculptures. This kind of negativity is obvious, readers will question it, and the author sometimes also questions it. But no matter what, it cannot be denied that in the process of accumulation, the living protagonist of the story is gradually carved out. Just like Seres's story is transformed from age into chapters, to me, this story seems more like his own growth experience than his adventure. A child is separated from his parents and thrown into a strange environment to grow up gradually. From the beginning, he only follows the concepts he was taught and lives only to benefit himself. Then gradually discover the faith, start to raise your chest, and fight for it, and gradually grow up. Is it really gratifying? For the readers watching, it is like watching the growth of a child with their own eyes. This growth is not only physical, but also spiritual. But the road is a bit tortuous. After all, you can't expect him to grow up all at once. This kind of growth is destined to hit a wall and break his head. (I don't know why it always reminds me of Crime and Punishment.)