Regulus of Hogwarts: Lord of the Stars

Currently a centerpiece on my bookshelf. With logic, rhythm and accent. The only poisonous point: at the beginning, he realized that he was Regulus right after he was born, and then made up his mind to take a different path. Except for this, they are all advantages or normal personal tendencies. 1️⃣First of all, this author expanded the upper limit of HP's combat power and tension. In particular, it expands the gap between adult wizards and the three legendary wizards of Dungemo, and strengthens the expressive tension of magic, making the upper limit more magical and handsome. The overall logic is quite self-consistent, the character motivations are basically completely reasonable, the character growth is linear, and the plot advancement is methodical. 2️⃣It may be a bit torturous to chase. It is normal to update the number of words every day, and the author has great control over the rhythm. When I was reading it, I personally thought the rhythm was very appropriate. When I read it back, it is indeed necessary. However, some impatient people may have different opinions. I only represent my personal opinion. But the most important thing is that I have been following it every day for more than a month. I think the author's attitude every day is very correct. A reader who often follows updates should be able to tell the author's status. If he is a truly good person, you will know that he is good at it. For someone who is serious about writing, even if you are in a hurry, you can still tell that he is putting his heart into it. 3️⃣The above are some basic abilities. I think a professional writer should update steadily, have logic, a framework, rhythm, and a professional attitude. And the spirituality of this novel, I think, lies in creating an atmosphere. The core setting of this book is to travel back in time and become Regulus, the second son of the Black family. The heir to a pure-blood family. The author created Slytherin's sense of class. Classes with high social status have various social rules as communication tools for each other. The strong man has excess strength, and his ease and elegance are displayed in the dimensionality reduction attack. At the same time, I have to mention the creation of opponents. There is no point in playing bots. Victory against the strong is something worth bragging about. The combination of these three creates the protagonist's tone and atmosphere. HP is the framework, and the story line is the skeleton, but the atmosphere is a tone. When this atmosphere is successfully created and readers recognize this atmosphere, every word they see after clicking in can enhance the reading experience. I think this is spirituality. Spirituality is something that can be encountered but not sought. Not every author has it. A spiritual author may also lose his spirituality. Therefore, I think it is a lucky thing to come across spiritual works. You don't know how long you have to search in the shithole before you find a treasure. So, I suggest you come in and take a look. The key node is the chapter where the senior class was suppressed in the lounge to scare the monkeys. That was the moment when the atmosphere was successfully created. Let's take that chapter as the limit. If you feel good after reading it, remember to come back and interact with me. If you don't think it's good, you're welcome to come back and leave your valuable personal opinions.

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Very good

Transplant some of the unicorn's pure luck talent into Baruch, transplant the centaur's talent for stargazing, and install everything Baruch likes. Otherwise, Baruch would be rejected by the trees and depressed if he stayed in the Forbidden Forest all day. Not to mention that in the future, if Baruch becomes a breeding sire and breeds nest after nest of little spiders, spiders in the Muggle world will lay an average of 100 to 5,000 eggs at a time. If the little spiders have Baruch's talent, they will definitely be bullied by the surrounding trees if they stay in the Forbidden Forest.

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This book is very slow to read, everyone understands what I mean. Unlike other books, I can guess the subsequent development without reading it.

I finally found a novel that fooled me into thinking I was a fool. He liked this kind of protagonist with an online IQ. Why was it so short? ! !

There is no need to write the theory at all, the original work itself is a fairy tale! It is idealistic, and the author just needs to write according to his idealism! I prefer to write about materialism

Lily can't still be with Potter. After all, James has provoked the male protagonist so many times. It's time to make him pay. To be honest, Harry Potter doesn't necessarily have to be named Potter.

I don't understand, since the level of magic is already so high, is the purpose of going to Hogwarts just to play house? If the goal is the library, then quickly increase your favorability and get the note. Is it interesting to play a dark and scary campus competition with a kid?

There are some HP fans who are engaged in revolution, some who become gods individually, some who evolve collectively, and some who are a multi-faceted fusion of magic and Muggles. It is the first time I see those who yearn for the starry sky. This is a wild match, and it can compete with some of the Dragon Clan 😏

The setting is very high, but the actual performance is no more than this. I understand that the author is putting pressure on his ability to make money, but he also realizes that the author lacks imagination, and does not have the courage and creativity to imagine a future beyond the original work. He only dares to stay in the world of the original work. Even if he sets up a distant future protagonist like a starry sky, in essence, he is just painting a cake. The protagonist is not imagining the distant future. Instead, the author is relying on the intention of the huge star to draw strength. The author does not dare to step beyond the thunder pool, so the protagonist's talent will not surpass the original work. Therefore, looking back, I only feel that the thunder is loud and the raindrops are small. I can't see the desire of the protagonist and the author for the distant place. I only see the weakness of the fox and the tiger, I can't see the ideals, I only see the deliberate calculation. Lacking the wings of imagination, the light of idealism, and the genius that amazes everyone, the protagonist is just another mortal who pursues power instead of ideals. The real protagonist, the protagonist who truly pursues the future, should set off the wind of change. He should imagine bigger things and take action for them, and in this action attract people to follow him, just like all great leaders. , He can study the limitations of liberating magic, making it possible for everyone to become a wizard, and expand the world of wizards. He can try to open up a new world and pursue infinite possibilities. He can work hard to open up the door and allow the free exchange of knowledge to improve. He can work hard to find a way for everyone to become a genius and make the progress of knowledge far beyond the past. In any case, he should not be like this! Like a mortal pursuing profit and power. He should be the buryer of the old times, not the king of the old times.

I started reading books with more than 260 chapters, and recently read the latest 480 in one go. Some thoughts on preventing flooding: 1. First of all, I would like to emphasize that the author is really good. For details, please see Chapter 319: Christmas Gifts, about girls' thoughts, family reactions, sisters' entanglements, and the final description of the environment. This chapter is really eye-catching. 2. If there is a tendency in the beginning or title that the protagonist is thinking, skip it immediately. This chapter will go from "Regulus thinks" to "Regulus withdraws his thoughts" and ends with one or two nonsense words, and the plot will make no progress. 3. If there is only one protagonist in this chapter, you can basically jump directly. The author hopes that the results of "the protagonist's self-thinking and self-improvement" can be directly seen in the follow-up. There is really no need to follow him around, around, and back again.

It is recommended not to overdo the positive characters in the original work. You can have your own ideas, but you must at least retain respect for the original characters. James was indeed arrogant and bullying when he was young (especially to Snape), which was clearly criticized in the book through Lily. But the important thing is his growth: - He later joined the Order of the Phoenix, resisted Voldemort, and ultimately died to protect his wife and children. - Both Sirius and Lupine mentioned that James "tightened up a lot" after seventh grade and became a more mature person. - If a person cannot judge him by his subsequent changes, then one should not go easy on Snape (a former Death Eater). Many characters in "Harry Potter" have dark sides, but fans still love them: - Snape once joined the Death Eaters and abused students due to personal grudges, but he was still praised as a hero. - Sirius was also cruel to Kreacher, indirectly causing his own death, but what everyone remembers is his bravery and loyalty. - James' "school bullying" is not uncommon in the wizarding world (the Marauders and Snape attack each other), but his courage and sacrifice are real. Lily is a very smart and principled person. Her final choice to marry James shows that she has seen his change and sincerity. If James was really good for nothing, Lily wouldn't fall in love with him. And Snape is not just a victim: he is obsessed with black magic, befriends Death Eaters, invents spells such as the Bladeless Blade, and calls Lily a "Mudblood". He had already lost the moral high ground when he called Lily a 'mudblood'. James saved his life, doesn't this count as atonement? " James Potter is indeed not perfect, but the theme of "Harry Potter" is 'choice and redemption'. He chose to resist Voldemort, chose to die for his family, and chose to become better in front of Lily - isn't this something worthy of respect?"

Let's talk about James first. Objectively speaking, James' bullying has two sides. There is no conflict between enjoying bullying and being brave and loyal. After all, people are not black and white, but have their own complexities. But there is a saying that the butt determines the head. In the eyes of the protagonist, James is good; but for the protagonist, the protagonist is the Snake House, which is in opposition to the Lion House, so the good side of James does not hold true for the protagonist. What the protagonist sees is that James enjoys bullying (this has nothing to do with Snape's good or bad, Snape's so-called badness just provides an explanation for James' bullying), so in this book, James is a bully who enjoys it. Then again, why do some people feel that James is being belittled too much? As the saying goes - the butt determines the head. If the original work is the foundation and the fan author is building a house on the foundation, then these people are not in the house, but looking at the house on the foundation. This is a kind of arrogance. They look at the fan with the original work and think that the original work is higher than the second creation, so the setting in this book is not actually important. They subconsciously still think that Harry Potter She is the protagonist of this world. For this world, we still see the world from Harry's perspective, so James is good, because from Harry Potter's perspective, James is good, but Lily cannot be the heroine, because in their eyes, Lily is Harry's mother and James' wife, not an independent individual, so they cannot accept Lily as the heroine. ps: As for Lily practicing Patronus, she said she was an accessory of James before. Some people think that the core of Patronus is happy memories, so they are wrong. Happiness and attachment do not conflict. Suppose I deeply pua (or tune) a girl, then maybe in her eyes, she is happy, but in fact she is already an accessory (just an example, it may not necessarily be the case). This is the author's novel. Please respect the author's setting if the original work does not specify it clearly.

I have been waiting for confirmation whether this book will have a female protagonist. Is it confirmed now? I read a comment before that it was Lily, is it clear now? Once the heroine is confirmed, I can pursue it with confidence. If there is no heroine, I will delete it from the bookshelf.

To be honest, if the author keeps stopping like this, then my monthly ticket will basically have nothing to do with this book. It has been several days since I wrote a breaking point. It makes me uncomfortable to keep up with it, and my emotions cannot be coherent. Say goodbye to my monthly ticket!

In fact, the writing of these two chapters is not very good, and it seems very unqualified. Accompanied by your father, you go shopping in gray industries and then talk about the symbiosis of light and darkness. You are not really a 12-year-old pure-blood young master, and you don't really have to prove yourself in front of your father. Have you really been disciplined by pure-bloods? What you want is resources for progress, not to become a pure-blooded tool. I thought you were just lying, but did you really think so? I'm a bit confused about the protagonist's true thoughts.

As for the characters in the original work, the author has stuffed a bit too much into the book. Then there are some plans that the protagonist thinks are very clever, but in fact they make no sense (I really don't understand why the protagonist thinks that joining Voldemort will bring benefits to him) Other than that, they are very good.

There is always someone to accompany you on the road to the stars

Because the content of the movie version is deeply rooted in people's hearts, many people do not understand the original grudge between Snape and James. Thinking that James bullied Snape unilaterally. Let me sort out the original story about them. Act 1·First Encounter Snape proposed to enter Slytherin on the train. James started the conversation about who is better, Slytherin or Gryffindor, and angered Snape. And it was accompanied by Snape's first personal attack and Sirius's counterattack. Considering the background of the raging Death Eaters at that time, plus Snape's first personal attack. I originally wanted to use the division of conflict responsibilities with Snape as 6 and James as 4. But consider that it was James who angered Snape first. I still chose the 55 division, or even the division of Snape 4 and James 6. After all, it was James who started the topic. Act 2·Enrollment 3-4 years There is actually a bit of ambiguity in what is written here. It is probably that James does well in school, and James often shows off in front of Lily. This further irritated Snape, who was afraid that Lily would fall in love with James. So Snape secretly followed Lupine (note: the information revealed by Sirius), trying to prove that James was not that good, but he was finally saved by James. This is Snape's pure responsibility. He first targeted Lupine. He was jealous of James at first, and was finally saved by James. Separation of responsibilities, Snape takes full responsibility. Act 3·After the o. W. L exam James first made trouble for Snape, bullied Snape, and cleared up many obstacles. Then he was scratched by Snape with the magic blade, and James hung Snape with an upside-down golden hook. James is solely responsible here. Summary According to my impression, the story of James and Snape's student days basically ends here. In fact, it is also obvious that James and Snape are looking for trouble for each other. In the early stage, Snape even started the conflict first. In the later stage, James ceased to be a human being and began to be mentally humiliated. Snape was even more ruthless and deadly with all his moves, basically aiming for human lives (headed by Shen Feng Wuying) and expulsion from school (Werewolf Secret). James was not a human being, so he used less force (only ordinary spells were used, the only curse was a spell invented by Snape) and was more focused on mental humiliation, which was extremely damaging to people's self-esteem and extremely disgusting.

Lily described so many passers-by in the past? And then Freya will pop up as the heroine? Many novels are like this. I hope the author can grasp it well or give a clear explanation. The longer it goes on, the more readers will find that the heroine is different from the heroine they thought. Just like the previous book about a magic teacher, without mentioning a heroine at the end, the online novel will be happy. Hurry, if I had told you earlier, it would not end badly in the end.

Please, can the author make Lily the heroine? 😢😢😢 I don't want James or Snape to come.

The biggest feeling this book gives me is that maybe HP fandom is more suitable for the parent generation. The ancient pure-blood's natural position, and the crazy Voldemort's minions, secretly contacting and testing the power of Lao Deng, the identities of the protagonist and Sirius are inherently contradictory and conflicting. The main line can also unfold very naturally and wonderfully. Maybe it's because I've seen fewer HP fans, but it's undoubtedly an excellent work.

Brother, you don't need three or four chapters to practice magic. You're not here to read a paper. Just focus on polishing the plot.

No matter what novel, I don't want to read a heroine

I saw the latest chapter. I'm only in my 2nd grade. Don't wait so long to add private goods. If you continue writing like this, the plot will not exceed 800 chapters.

This is simple. In order to prevent the situation where there are few people and loud voices, I will just post a vote

Kite in the starry sky, a kite is an eagle Hurry and take advantage of the east wind to fly the paper kite

Chapter 400, has the protagonist left the atmosphere?