Go up in the Top Sect and Rise to the Top

People who read it frowned. It was not a problem to describe the family feud in the neighborhood. It was relatively novel. However, after reading it, it felt like the protagonist was like a robot, doing things according to the program and having no psychological activities. The interaction with the neighbors was not described. The article felt verbose when reading, and it was all descriptions and psychological activities between neighbors. In addition, because the protagonist has no mental activity and makes many decisions that readers simply cannot understand, it does not conform to a normal person's thinking logic, and it does not fit with the theme of the novel. It is very toxic to read, and the author is too lazy to explain it in the article, so readers are too lazy to read it.

In the current fast-paced online writing environment, most works, in order to pursue a "feeling of fun", often turn supporting characters into tools and reduce them to the protagonist's experience package or background board. But the most surprising breakthrough of "Going to the Top Sect" is that it gives each character an independent soul and behavioral logic. As you mentioned Xiaohua and Jiang Han, these two characters are not even core supporting characters, but they can be remembered by readers. This just proves the depth of the author's writing power. ------ From the perspective of senior domestic readers, this kind of portrayal is the true sense of high-end "Mortal Flow". Xiaohua's talent is ordinary, but she always faces it with a smile. Her mother also loves her. This is not a "waste counterattack" presupposition, but a pure survival philosophy - in the world of immortality, ordinary people also have ordinary ways of living and dignity. This setting brings warmth to the cold world of immortality. Looking at Jiang Han, he looks cold and withdrawn, but inside he has the most ardent filial piety and sense of responsibility for his parents. He is willing to risk his own life to avenge his father. This behavioral logic breaks the flat imagination of "cold characters". ---- The value of this kind of group portrait is that it builds a real social ecology of cultivating immortals. Everyone has his own way, his own obsessions and his own warmth. When readers get tired of watching the protagonist unilaterally crush the protagonist, this writing method of "three minutes of highlight per passerby" can actually bring a stronger sense of immersion. The author did not waste any name. Every little character is a mirror, reflecting the different life choices in this top sect. This is no longer a simple "Gou Dao" article, but a vivid picture of the world of immortality, "Along the River During the Qingming Festival". If you want to experience what it means to "even a sidekick looks like a living person", this work is worth reading to the end. ----- Chen Ping's golden finger seems "barely adequate", but this is the author's cleverness. In the "rebirth time travel" and being in the Shura field of a large sect, if the golden finger is too contrary to the sky, the protagonist will easily get carried away and lose the logical premise of "gou". The author deliberately downplays the accumulation of specific parameters of practice and instead describes trivial matters and personnel relationships. In fact, he is building a sense of security brought about by the information gap. The protagonist knows very well that in the top sects where Yuanying and Huashen bosses are everywhere, the improvement in cultivation must meet the expectations of "mediocre". This kind of "hidden wisdom" is far more advanced than the protagonists who practice hard day and night and are always ready to pretend to be pigs and eat tigers. ---- Just as someone in the book club joked that the author should write a female channel, this is not derogatory, but praises the author's talent in psychological games and emotional pull. Every step of Chen Ping's promotion is not simply a stack of numerical values, but a precise calculation of human nature and the environment. He seems to be "goofing around", but in fact he is using trivial matters to hide his true intentions. This philosophy of life that "still water runs deep, light does not shine" hits the pain points of contemporary working people and the middle class of society. This novel tells us: The real dimensionality reduction attack is not to rely on golden fingers to open the unparalleled one, but to quietly complete primitive accumulation in the corner where everyone looks down on you. ------ This kind of "trivial matters" is actually a very clever way to create a sense of immersion. What most of us encounter in the workplace is not the daily battle of life and death, but the trivial passing and interpersonal games day after day. The "all kinds of people looking down on others" that Chen Ping faced were essentially a kind of immortal version of "discrimination in the workplace." The author goes out of his way to describe these things so that every slap in the face and breakthrough of the protagonist can be based on a solid emotional foundation. Although the rhythm of this writing method is slow, the foundation is extremely stable. When the protagonist finally soars into the sky, readers will not feel abrupt, but will have a sense of release that "the pain is over and the joy is over".

Seeing the death of Wang Po. The first 100 or so chapters are too little about the development of the world view and how to practice cultivation, the definition of realm and the introduction of exercises. They are more about the small courtyard. As everyone said, it is a fairy tale in a love-filled courtyard. And to be honest, I didn't see what was wrong with him.

The framework of this book is quite good, integrating the popularity of courtyard houses in old Beijing, but the fusion is too much. Cultivation is more like a label, and the way they fight looks like a group of mortals. The protagonist is also speechless. Someone asks you to change houses. Although there are problems with the process, it does not mean that you want him to die. If you want him to die, you have to find a killer. This is a world where force is paramount. Just miss one hand and move it together. To put it simply, it is completely inconsistent with the thinking logic of a world of cultivating immortals. So it looks very awkward.

There are a lot of inexplicable characters in the first three chapters. The mother calls her son a maggot in front of others. The writing is very bad and the main plot cannot be seen. This book can be published in Sanjiang. . . .

What can I say about this book? The economic and social construction, including the characters, are quite reasonable. But the text is too dry. In the early stage of your book, you wrote about life in the city, but the text and the characters' chats have no atmosphere of the city from beginning to end. To be honest, it's just a bit boring And you have to calculate how many characters you added in the first three chapters, which most readers can't remember. Brother, you develop your characters little by little, don't give out so many people at once, and have a banquet at the beginning. Anyway, I have read Chapter 30 now, and I still don't remember this group of people. Then everyone chats like a robot. It's not that there can't be calculations, but you have too many calculations now. All chats from beginning to end are basically full of calculations. Who talks about others behind their backs like this? If you are a serious reader, you can read it while listening to the book. If you are a fast reader, forget it because it is not interesting, too dry, and a bit like an outline.

This is a fantasy and realistic novel that gives the fairy novels a human touch. It is not only simply enjoyable to read, but also enjoyable. I sincerely recommend it, but if you are a reader who comes in because of the title of the book, you probably won't be able to hold on to the paid chapters, but this kind of pre-pressure can make it more readable after paying.

The writing is quite distinctive and the characters are well drawn.

I saw the latest chapter, overall it's pretty good. The advantage is that the plot is short-lived, the protagonist never really shows his strength, and the teammates have distinct characters. Quasi-immortal skills require talent to continue practicing. The shortcomings are also obvious: 1. The top sects are far apart and cannot be seen. After the protagonist forms a pill, it takes a long time for his sect to lead the team to meet each other. There are no teleportation arrays or virtual links. 2. Competing for the rankings in each stage of competitions such as Kendo and Dharma, etc., Such as True Legend, Four Swords, etc., Is too monotonous. If the fighting scenes are not enough, you can follow the animation scenes, the scene changes caused by the moves during the fight, and how the opponent responds to the moves. 3. The rewards for obtaining the True Inheritance and the Four Swords are only the improvement of status and spirit stones. They lack the rewards of some top-level items. The substantial improvement in practice and qualifications can shorten the distance between you and ordinary practitioners in a short time, but it also gives ordinary geniuses the opportunity to realize their enlightenment and Tao Yun. 4. There is a lack of fighting between sects and sect monsters. The end of some conflicts can be determined by the competition between opponents such as Zhuji, Zifu, and Danjie. 5. After the Purple Mansion, there is a bit of a shortcoming due to the sudden experience in the lower realm and the fact that cultivators in the lower realm cannot ascend and must wait until the spiritual machine (emperor level) in the highest upper realm gives birth to the Taoist Ancestor. The next novel can allow those at the top of the lower world to ascend. 6. The description of the top sects is too simple, the description of the market is good, but the description of the top, high-end, and mid-level living environments is too monotonous. 7. The improvement of realm, as well as the improvement of spells and swordsmanship are not accurate enough, and the deep concentration is not clear enough, such as the sudden appearance of the sword. I have heard before that when fighting, you still have to move one move at a time, which is no different from refining Qi or building foundation. It's best to set it clearly. 8. Recently, there are always fantasies of various meanings about losing opponents. For example, if you defeat your opponent in the future, the number of words "water" is too obvious. To sum up, the descriptions of life in the market, being cautious, being docile, not showing strength, etc. Are advantages. But the black market killing of the Jiang family was a failure. The sudden conflict between the Jiang family and the protagonist was too abrupt and should not have been written just to create conflicts.

Author's plot: The protagonist is admitted to Tsinghua University. The neighbor's supporting character scored 300 points in the exam. He blocked the protagonist at the gate of the community and asked the protagonist to compete on the spot. Otherwise, he will not be allowed to enter the community gate. Then there are a bunch of elder supporting characters supporting the fire.

The author is very talented in writing female videos

This novel refreshed my three views. It briefly described the cultivation of pig's feet. The talent level was only mentioned briefly, without even mentioning how to improve it. Then the content of the novel was all kinds of trivial matters, and then all kinds of people looked down on others and gave up.

I was a little speechless. Brother, I came here because of the title of your book, and because of the cultivation of immortality. As a result, it's chapter 45, and six or seven years have passed before entering the sect. If you leave it there every day, please show me the courtyard full of love. I might as well watch other fantasy masters.

I'm speechless. What kind of thing are you writing about? The Immortal Cultivation Version of Qin Man Siheyuan? I've been chatting for a long time, but I haven't seen the protagonist cheating and becoming stronger. They are just a bunch of people trying to make fun of the elders of the family and the shortcomings of the family. What use are these people to the protagonist? What a stupid figure.

I didn't see the rise to prominence, I just saw a loser and a doormat.

The long-winded novels are written about a lot of secular things. If you like to write about the market, why should you write about cultivating immortals? Why are so many novels now like to write about a lot of secular things, Western fantasy, fairy tales, and fantasy novels? It seems that the more secular the beginning of a book is, the more the bottom class despises each other, the more profound the book will be. What kind of bird style, so written like this, it is my mother-in-law Tianxiaocao.

The first few chapters of this book are about Qin Man Siheyuan. I went to see the protagonist go to the killer organization to hire killers to kill the people in the courtyard and died of poisoning. If it was a simple request, I could still close my eyes and read it. It turns out that the killer organization is still just. It is like a country's government has a killer department that specializes in killing people with bad morals. As long as you pay money, I am really afraid that one day someone will take the list of the protagonist with bad morals and kill the protagonist, so I will not read it and comment.

It's all about the parents being short-term and gossiping.

Are you kidding me, author? This is a fairy novel, not a Siheyuan novel. It's really frustrating to watch. I'll have a fight today, and I'll curse you tomorrow. This is the first time I've seen the Siheyuan version of Xianxia. I've read dozens of chapters and they're all about filial piety. The supporting characters in it are either arrogant or have no scheming. They've lived for more than 200 years and looked like teenagers. It lowered their IQs.

The advanced version of Love Full Courtyard, the long-winded version

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After reading eight chapters, I was impressed by a bunch of people's names, all of which were about trivial matters in the courtyard and trivial matters for parents 😰 They say there are three golden chapters, but you haven't gotten to the point in these eight chapters.

Author, why don't you change it to "Siheyuan Cultivation of Immortality"? All day long, the family members grow up, crickets this and that cricket, and the story of intrigues and intrigues in the Siheyuan is covered with the skin of Cultivation of Immortality.

Is this called Gou? ? ? ? The writing is similar to Siheyuan, with a lot of nonsense. . . It feels frustrating, awkward, and uncomfortable to watch. . .

If you go too far, you are really a loser. The author of this book obviously didn't grasp it. The suppression-explosion routine. If you go too far, you are really depressed.

Qidian Sanjiang is really degenerate, and can be read in any book. This book starts with the protagonist having a lot of things, and ends up joining the killer organization. This plot is really beyond the imagination of people. It is a pure brain congestion plot, and it is said that there is a lot of bullshit in the back. Gou Daoliu is not like this. You are called a coward. In such a big sect, and then kill people? I really have nothing to say. I can only read a dozen chapters of this book. The rest is just full of shit and poisons people to death.

At the beginning, we saw a Nascent Soul stage marrying a woman in the Foundation Establishment stage and raising a daughter for someone else. No, buddy, you really write like a female channel.

It's just a story about the courtyard. The author's writing is good. I couldn't bear it after about 40 chapters, so I said goodbye.

Your writing style is not suitable for writing this kind of subject matter. Gou Dao didn't really turn into a dog. Others in this comment are right, you should write Siheyuan.

I feel like everyone in the comment section is making harsh comments, but I really think it's okay. The Xiuxian version of Qingmansiheyuan is very novel and not cliché. The protagonist knows how to advance and retreat, has a goal, is willing to endure and has courage. As a reader who has been reading fairy tales for seven or eight years, I feel that 70% to 80% of the current fairy tales are written according to the templates of several genres. The plot development can basically be guessed in a few minutes. On the contrary, the output of this kind of "modern novels" cloaked in fairy tales is not that high and is relatively new. I dare not say how good the author's writing is, but at present, the whole book has its own uniqueness and recognition in setting, mixed with the author's knowledge and understanding of interpersonal relationships, human hearts, and the warmth and warmth of society, so I don't think I can make a conclusion about this work now. In addition, let's talk about Xianxia and Goudao. Many readers feel that this book is not "Xianxia" or "Goudao" enough. I don't think there can be only one style of Xianxia. No one knows what a person's psychology will be like after practicing it for hundreds and thousands of years. Most authors keep writing based on the settings of the previous originator books. Of course, I think that Xianxia is not just that. Those who are "high above" are Xiaxia, and those who are "lower people" may also be Xiaxia. Don't be limited by the fixed thinking, maybe reading books will have more novelty. Let's talk about Gou Dao again. It's still the same point of view. From one thinking set, from another perspective, I think the protagonist is Gou. From being forbearing to accumulating strength to finally winning the ranking in one fell swoop, he used his "kindness" as a protective color to get to the day he won the ranking. I don't know if any of you have high school classmates like that, who seem to be ordinary at ordinary times but won the first place in the college entrance examination. This kind of "godward" description actually comes from real life. In the end, I still hope that the author will continue writing. I respect every creator from the bottom of my heart. The book may fail in the end, but creativity and hard work are always priceless.